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One of the most dangerous galactic criminals is finally caught and sentenced to death. But during the execution something goes wrong and his soul, or whatever it was, is transferred into Harry Potter.
- And the body... Nothing, the main thing is that he is alive... The game starts again.
The story was written back in Feb for my patrons. I'm putting it up now. You can read it in full at:
patreon.com/FanFictionPremium
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I quite like the story. An interesting take on the reincarnated as Harry Potter type. Though there are 2 things that I think can be improved: First is the speed of the story. It seams like evrything happens to fast like a summary. And second and what I think is what needs to be improved: grammar.
grammar it's bad, have absolutely zero character development, and the plot it's super rushed. I don't particularly have anything against the author, but clearly this was not his best history.
usually i like ur stories . but the grammar here is simply unbearable. please use chat gpt to correct grammar b4 posting. dropped for now.
Супер мега круто. Мне очень нравиться.......................................................................................................
My 5 star review.