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one of my favourite star wars fanfic on this platform. it's a shame it hasn't been updated for quite a while now. I'm starting to think it's abandoned
Mu buena historia pero lleva mucho tiempo sin actualizarse y supongo que falta un poco más de desarrollo de personajes, y lo que llo considero un sistema de niveles de poder, no quiero ver al mc , siendo derrotado por un Padawan o cazarrecompensas cualquiera
A great story overall. I will admit I am writing this review pretty early on (Only 10 chapters), but it is looking like a promising story. The premise of the plot is nice, and I can't wait for more action to begin. My two negatives thus far are 1; the time to wait for new chapters is quite a long time considering how short the chapters are, and 2; There needs to be more character development. Once again, this is early on in the plot, so it might happen later, but so many years have already passed in the story yet we barely get any details about the main casts lives. I need flashbacks into their childhoods, talk about their training, their thoughts, etc. Despite my negatives, this is looking extremely promising, and I have enjoyed reading thus far so kudos to the author.
This novel has the feeling of Star Wars. It captures attention like it should. I personally look forward to how it progresses in the future. I have High hopes, but plan everything before you leap.Have a good day!
There will be massive improvements in this story based on what I learned from Star Wars: A Single Wish. Most of what I have to say is in the Synopsis. If have any questions, feel free to ask them here in the review section or in the comment section of the chapters themselves. I hope people enjoy it. May The Force Be With You.
Honestly I thought i wouldnt like this story but i was completely wrong cant wait for more chapters
one of my favourite star wars fanfic on this platform. it's a shame it hasn't been updated for quite a while now. I'm starting to think it's abandoned
Mu buena historia pero lleva mucho tiempo sin actualizarse y supongo que falta un poco más de desarrollo de personajes, y lo que llo considero un sistema de niveles de poder, no quiero ver al mc , siendo derrotado por un Padawan o cazarrecompensas cualquiera
A great story overall. I will admit I am writing this review pretty early on (Only 10 chapters), but it is looking like a promising story. The premise of the plot is nice, and I can't wait for more action to begin. My two negatives thus far are 1; the time to wait for new chapters is quite a long time considering how short the chapters are, and 2; There needs to be more character development. Once again, this is early on in the plot, so it might happen later, but so many years have already passed in the story yet we barely get any details about the main casts lives. I need flashbacks into their childhoods, talk about their training, their thoughts, etc. Despite my negatives, this is looking extremely promising, and I have enjoyed reading thus far so kudos to the author.
This novel has the feeling of Star Wars. It captures attention like it should. I personally look forward to how it progresses in the future. I have High hopes, but plan everything before you leap.Have a good day!
There will be massive improvements in this story based on what I learned from Star Wars: A Single Wish. Most of what I have to say is in the Synopsis. If have any questions, feel free to ask them here in the review section or in the comment section of the chapters themselves. I hope people enjoy it. May The Force Be With You.
Honestly I thought i wouldnt like this story but i was completely wrong cant wait for more chapters