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The life of a slave struggling to survive in the Star Wars universe filled powerful Force users, corrupt governments, and war.
I hate powerful MC, the story becomes too boring if you know they can never lose, so no system, plot armor, or other BS that make sure he can never lose. MC will always have others much stronger against him.
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No plot. Other characters have more of a story than the MC. The MC master is just plain awful he shouldn’t have even been his master or been in the story. Waste of time.
Its just one big info dump Thats got 0 plot i do not recommend. ___________ ___________ ___________ ___________ ___________ ___________ ___________ ___________
A very confusing story, an MC that after several years of training and stuff like that...is still naive and so fucking weak. Also, there are a few missing tags?! idk ??? But, if you like that kind of story and you are good with it, you should read it, as to form me I'm done with it, I tried but too disappointing. Wish you all the good luck to your work
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Someone in a world that unknown, is quite good in my opinion, but in my opinion he clung to the first boat he had on hand, it is natural that he is naive he only saw a movie and the first ones in which the side is not shown really dark and apparently I understand
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One of the worst self insert, I have had the misfortune to stumble across. Hopes the author drops this. Bad review. I take more trouble just to add a bad review.
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Starting out to be better than some of the other fics . Just need to make sure to consistently upload and develop story and character. Hope he takes it to unconventional route and is not afraid to brake cannon . Remember: Emotion, yet peace Ignorance, yet knowledge Passion,yet serenity Chaos, yet harmony Death , yet the force
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This story is garbage and she dropped off the face of the earth. Mc is pathetic and doesn’t know ****. Star Wars is to dangerous of a universe to be going into without talent or knowledge or both. Save your time and skip this, it just isn’t worth the read. Unfortunately I can’t give this story anything less than one star. It should be in the negatives. Trash complete and utter trash.