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Stage Fright

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Author: d'elfe

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It was something extraordinary, really, that led me to him. A twist of fate. A twist of luck. But pure chance, certainly not. Especially here, there, in my home town.

Frances has just a few lines, but stage fright takes hold and she flees, ambushing an unsuspecting man intent of grilling a cigarette in peace. Tristan is as handsome as he is genuine; he helps her shake her fears.
Friendships ensues... which might turn to more.
Be warned: love, angst, divorces, marriage and babies ahead ! Get ready for Festival de Cannes as well !

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    Mary_Algen_Guiang1

    The author created a beautifully painted picture, describing flowers, and surroundings so vividly that it excites one's imagination. truly a worthwhile read.

    3yr
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    maryamshairani

    ‘The relishing quietness’ words like these really put together a story, I love the way you have written it all and I love how well everything is explained, great plot and I am looking forward to read more :))

    3yr
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    basementerz

    Interesting storyline. The writing is neat too. While i was reading this book, i've unconsciously learnt a new language. It sounds amazing right. I love this story. Keep it up author.👍

    3yr
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    leeroycgna

    My first impressions are very good, the exchanges between inner dialogue and commentary to conversations and explanations are fantastic. I like how the book stays consitantly in first person format and that it switches between his and her point of view. All I can say is Author has a masterful writing technique and is very adept at describing feelings and emotions. While romance is not my genre and I'm a little sad you don't write fantasy I would definitely reccomend giving this a read!

    3yr
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    Aeipathy_02

    First, this book is definitely a great read. The smooth exchanges of dialogues between the characters keep me smiling. The narratives and story background are clear and written well. 💞 Writing quality there are few grammar errors and I bet it is probably caused by the auto-correction app or website since it also happened to me most of the time. Overall this book is great and I love it! This is definitely going to stay in my collections 🥰 Superb work author! Greatly recommended!

    3yr
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    87w
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    It feels like I'm reading an actual western published book. The world background especially good. It kinda made me feels I'm actually experiencing the place and their culture. I'm guessing it's either the author lives at the said place or doing an enormous amount of research of the place and era before writing it. The characters talk using lots of terms that usually only English speakers often used, so I'm guessing the author might be a westerner, or just have doing a lot of research about the characters and their accent.

    3yr
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    TofSpades

    Great book, the style of writing is truly incredible. There were barely any mistakes with tenses or any other grammatical errors. Great writing from the author!

    3yr
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    Ana_musings

    The author's introduction of the characters, the subtle way she writes about their dreams and inner conflicts is very good. The narrative flows smoothly and the initial pages make you want to keep on reading till the end. Please release more chapters soon.

    3yr
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    Jay_Mhekzy

    Your vocabulary is excellent, and the book really captivated me. I like your main character, and the way the story progressed smoothly. Your grammar is good too, and I would like you to keep it up!

    3yr
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    pariskatx1

    Wow! That's the first word I think of for this book. I love the genuine scenery and raw emotion the Author illustrates through their writing and the characters are just lovely. Throughout the chapters I've read so far I feel as if I'm there witnessing all that's going on first hand. Truly wonderful! It's five stars from me~

    3yr
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    YawningBrain

    Author, I love your book! It kept me smiling and giggling all the time. Hehehe. First. The writing quality, I can even say anything about that, it is superb. Your characters are intriguing and funny and lovely. From the descriptions and narrative, I just feel that I want to go to those places and see them by myself, you made them sound so amazing and I bet they are. I am really impressed and I will keep reading your awesome work! 🥰 [img=recommend]

    3yr
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    Joondabest_

    Quite an intriguing one, as I scan the pages, I foresee more and more work of yours. The characters were impressive and attractive. The author seems to have an extraordinary viewpoint about the novel, keep it up!

    3yr
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    Nessa_Taylor

    The genre of this book is not my style at all and yet I found myself drawn in by the wonderful descriptions and beautiful slow burning romance. The author has a way with words thats almost soothing to read. Now I have an itch to travel to Norway just to see the beautiful scenery that was so we'll described. I would definitely recommend.

    3yr
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    drimar44

    Another astounding piece from the author just when I think it can't get any better, I think I might need a lesson or two how to properly describe and immerse characters cause I tell you that this is a wonderful masterpiece very lovely work here

    3yr
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    Mila_Alaia

    It's a slow one.....how can I put it? Yes, like wine! The initial chapters may seem sooo still....but as u read on, u will be sucked into the story. I'm nt a fan of too huge age gap love stories, but then I ignored it here. The story is too sweet. It has the "old-english-novels" kinda vibe. Grt work author!!! Love it❤️ Nyc language too.

    3yr
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    The_divine_oracle

    I like the premise in which the story begins. The interactions are simple and sweet. My only romance experience comes from Twilight, but I do say that the story has a lot of potential. There are a few grammatical errors, but I feel can improvements in your writing. My only advice would be to edit it once after reading it. It will make the story much better.

    3yr
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    d_elfe

    So, I had to write that fateful review because, hey, now I get to have a rating ! Thank you all for your lovely comments. To any other reader, don't hesitate to write your thoughts. Reviews make my days !

    3yr
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