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is the story really completed like it says above? I read the last chapter above, and it doesn't feel completed, just says end of volume 1... Are other volumes going to be published as different books?
I’ll be the first to admit I‘m not far enough in to give a proper review but there is something I want to say for potential new readers. At the beginning the characterization seems a little inconsistent. Other than that I really enjoy what I’ve read of this story and of others the author has written so I recommend giving it a try
Overall it's a pretty good one and i don't mind being slow paced,but the character is too weak and his growth is really slow to the point he can barely beat the weakest bunch,always needing protection from someone stronger,and characters who could end him easily just keeps on popping up in a place considered like a beginner zone.This is simply frustrating because you know the mc can't even protect himself not to mention his Selena because you know he doesn't have any trump card and is too weak to do anything to even the weaker canon fodders
I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
this novel may be good but this synopsis doesn't interest me in anything less maybe the spirit soul concept that i believe is similar to douluo dalu ...
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Honestly a terrific read so far. Great story development and very good character development. The writing quality itself is the best part. Way too expensive on the privileged chapters though. Still I'll keep reading it from a few chapters back.
Ayo i put this in my library not knowing that the book is written by an author i like, So Shame less 5 star review because i know the promise if a unique story is legit whatever dont at me okay, So give this and primordial dimensions a shot because they will not disappoint and fact when ill bE starting this in my down time from work and school! Happy reading yall
I'm not bored which is important in reading the novel. I'm still at the early stages but I like what I'm reading so far, the updates is consistent and the MC is admirable with what he wants and how he goes about it. So this story will stay in my library.
I love the way that author wrote, the plot and the Character is so perfect. .. I really enjoyed to read this story. I feel like my spirit soul will be happy too🙌🙌🙌
Pretty good story so far anyways author can Kyle nurture parts of his body like his eyes??? You better answer 🔫 Wawawawawawawawawawa
19 chapters in and I absolute love this novel. Nice idea with his nurture ability and hope to see more of you multiverse. Writing quality is also perfect like GE and PD. Hope to see more of this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I think this is the Author's best book. Even if the start might seem slow, the buildup is thorough, and the MC seems to know his disadvantages and advantages.
I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!
There aren’ t even 10 chapters available right now, but I can already guess how this novel from HideousGrain is going to be. Same Multiverse as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions”. First chapters already with a introduction to this infinitely large planet ”Shima” which already got a small connection with God’s Eyes as Shima got mentioned there two times. Also directly starts with action that is not boring but instead lets you feel it yourself. Has the same power system as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions” but introduces a new mechanic, the spirit soul. Definitely going to read this one!
Cover: 5/5 Let's just say I have never seen such an amazing cover before. The realistic artwork and the blue soul next to the main character almost brings life to the character itself. The cover was well drawn out and fits the title completely. Synopsis: 4.5/5 I can tell much work had been through with the short yet informative synopsis that gives a glimpse to us reader about the novel itself. Author has successfully hand out a good amount of information for us to know what we are going to expect. Grammar: 4.7/5 So far, there aren't any noticeable grammar mistake that can be spotted at first glance. We can very much understand what the author is trying to portray, so not much complaint here. Update: 5/5 As far as I can tell from this review I'm writing at the moment [1/3/2022], update releases are fantastic. Storyline: 4.8/5 Although some plotline are generic or even cliche at times, I think this story is unique in itself with the "soul" part. And everyone has different opinion regarding their likes and dislikes. Thus, I can say this is a novel that I particularly enjoy and it's my opinion, not yours, Overall: 4.8/5 I will say this again, HideousGrain has proven himself to be a capable author of storytelling again. If you're a fan of this work, then you should probably check out his other novel as well, namely, "God's Eye" and "Primordial Dimensions". And of course, a shameless input here to end the long review and your reward for reading. Check out "Harness Cultivator". Thank you and goodbye!
After reading the Author's other amazing works, I have found myself hooked onto his newest piece. I have high hopes for this book and knwo this book will BOOM!. The premise isn't anything too extravagant and new but with the Author's craftful writing; this book has great potential! The MC's abilities are also unique and I'm intrigued to see how fast he becomes Op af... Can't wait for more chapters! Keep Writing Author!
Spirit Soul plays a huge role in the Multiverse of my stories. Because of that, I can only recommend my other novels. However, because I'm shameless, I'm gonna say that this is the best story I've written so far. As such, give it a try, and don't have any prejudice against my poor MC :3
hahahahahaha finally, a harem novel from hideousgrain 👍👍👍👍 ............................... ............................ .............
Epic, just epic! I can't say anything else without spoiling things. Another awesome novel in the HideousGrain Multiverse! I swear I think it's his best work to date!
Having read both the stories written by the author(yeah I know GE is still being written, but you get my point), I can definitely say that he is experimenting with his writing style, plot, and the story itself. Spirit Soul appears to be similar yet different than the author's previous writing ventures in many aspects. While we see the usual slow pace at which the story unfolds, he does paint a fine picture of what the world looks and feels like. The first few chapters look promising and I hope to find out more of what the author's mind has in store for us. Kudos to you, hiddy!!
is the story really completed like it says above? I read the last chapter above, and it doesn't feel completed, just says end of volume 1... Are other volumes going to be published as different books?
I’ll be the first to admit I‘m not far enough in to give a proper review but there is something I want to say for potential new readers. At the beginning the characterization seems a little inconsistent. Other than that I really enjoy what I’ve read of this story and of others the author has written so I recommend giving it a try
Overall it's a pretty good one and i don't mind being slow paced,but the character is too weak and his growth is really slow to the point he can barely beat the weakest bunch,always needing protection from someone stronger,and characters who could end him easily just keeps on popping up in a place considered like a beginner zone.This is simply frustrating because you know the mc can't even protect himself not to mention his Selena because you know he doesn't have any trump card and is too weak to do anything to even the weaker canon fodders
I was searching for cultivation novels, and stumbled upon this story. Seeing it was written by someone who had already written two great novels I gave it a chance( after reading the tags). Within the other story’s there a background given at the start, Meant to help readers understand the back story. The same was done here i just their wasn’t an in-depth explanation.(although I hope the author will go in depth at a later point in time) Moving onto character design I feel that for someone who is supposed to have “lived” for billions of years, he would know how the world of this story works and be a less trusting person I understand the slave girl but he keeps helping people randomly through the story. There are other times when he shows a personality befitting of his age like when he try’s to scam the guild, but at other times he shows a nieave personality like helping characters who are not really needed to progress the story. Although I feel the author will eventually put him in situations where these characters will be useful, their is currently no use to them other than saying his resources which could be used to further his character as a whole.
this novel may be good but this synopsis doesn't interest me in anything less maybe the spirit soul concept that i believe is similar to douluo dalu ...
;8/9)/8(-8(/(&/(&-;7-7;-;7-58-84-;7-47147;85828(/8(1841;818;-;9-(81(8-(&-(9/69:)9/@)/)9/@)/?@/?@/?&/&(2&(/(8-;&-(&/,&-(&-(8-(&/&(/8(-(&/&(/(8/(8-
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Honestly a terrific read so far. Great story development and very good character development. The writing quality itself is the best part. Way too expensive on the privileged chapters though. Still I'll keep reading it from a few chapters back.
Ayo i put this in my library not knowing that the book is written by an author i like, So Shame less 5 star review because i know the promise if a unique story is legit whatever dont at me okay, So give this and primordial dimensions a shot because they will not disappoint and fact when ill bE starting this in my down time from work and school! Happy reading yall
I'm not bored which is important in reading the novel. I'm still at the early stages but I like what I'm reading so far, the updates is consistent and the MC is admirable with what he wants and how he goes about it. So this story will stay in my library.
I love the way that author wrote, the plot and the Character is so perfect. .. I really enjoyed to read this story. I feel like my spirit soul will be happy too🙌🙌🙌
Pretty good story so far anyways author can Kyle nurture parts of his body like his eyes??? You better answer 🔫 Wawawawawawawawawawa
19 chapters in and I absolute love this novel. Nice idea with his nurture ability and hope to see more of you multiverse. Writing quality is also perfect like GE and PD. Hope to see more of this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update]
I think this is the Author's best book. Even if the start might seem slow, the buildup is thorough, and the MC seems to know his disadvantages and advantages.
I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!
There aren’ t even 10 chapters available right now, but I can already guess how this novel from HideousGrain is going to be. Same Multiverse as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions”. First chapters already with a introduction to this infinitely large planet ”Shima” which already got a small connection with God’s Eyes as Shima got mentioned there two times. Also directly starts with action that is not boring but instead lets you feel it yourself. Has the same power system as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions” but introduces a new mechanic, the spirit soul. Definitely going to read this one!
Cover: 5/5 Let's just say I have never seen such an amazing cover before. The realistic artwork and the blue soul next to the main character almost brings life to the character itself. The cover was well drawn out and fits the title completely. Synopsis: 4.5/5 I can tell much work had been through with the short yet informative synopsis that gives a glimpse to us reader about the novel itself. Author has successfully hand out a good amount of information for us to know what we are going to expect. Grammar: 4.7/5 So far, there aren't any noticeable grammar mistake that can be spotted at first glance. We can very much understand what the author is trying to portray, so not much complaint here. Update: 5/5 As far as I can tell from this review I'm writing at the moment [1/3/2022], update releases are fantastic. Storyline: 4.8/5 Although some plotline are generic or even cliche at times, I think this story is unique in itself with the "soul" part. And everyone has different opinion regarding their likes and dislikes. Thus, I can say this is a novel that I particularly enjoy and it's my opinion, not yours, Overall: 4.8/5 I will say this again, HideousGrain has proven himself to be a capable author of storytelling again. If you're a fan of this work, then you should probably check out his other novel as well, namely, "God's Eye" and "Primordial Dimensions". And of course, a shameless input here to end the long review and your reward for reading. Check out "Harness Cultivator". Thank you and goodbye!
After reading the Author's other amazing works, I have found myself hooked onto his newest piece. I have high hopes for this book and knwo this book will BOOM!. The premise isn't anything too extravagant and new but with the Author's craftful writing; this book has great potential! The MC's abilities are also unique and I'm intrigued to see how fast he becomes Op af... Can't wait for more chapters! Keep Writing Author!
Spirit Soul plays a huge role in the Multiverse of my stories. Because of that, I can only recommend my other novels. However, because I'm shameless, I'm gonna say that this is the best story I've written so far. As such, give it a try, and don't have any prejudice against my poor MC :3
hahahahahaha finally, a harem novel from hideousgrain 👍👍👍👍 ............................... ............................ .............
Epic, just epic! I can't say anything else without spoiling things. Another awesome novel in the HideousGrain Multiverse! I swear I think it's his best work to date!
Having read both the stories written by the author(yeah I know GE is still being written, but you get my point), I can definitely say that he is experimenting with his writing style, plot, and the story itself. Spirit Soul appears to be similar yet different than the author's previous writing ventures in many aspects. While we see the usual slow pace at which the story unfolds, he does paint a fine picture of what the world looks and feels like. The first few chapters look promising and I hope to find out more of what the author's mind has in store for us. Kudos to you, hiddy!!