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A min-maxing Self-Insert ruins himself at character creation because S.P.E.C.I.A.L.
Story Written by Fulcon.
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I assume this is Fulcon? If not, than this is just straight up plagiarism. Especially considering the fact that Fulcon has up to 62 chapters on fanfiction.net. If this is Fulcon, then ignore everything I’ve just said and read this novel. It’s definitely one of the best Naruto SI out there. Fulcon does an especially great job of retaining all the characters personalities, a problem a lot of SI novels have.
I will be the bad guy on the comments this time and say will the grammar is good everything else is terrible. The main character is the real deal breaker because he is one of the most retarded I have ever read about yet he is constantly talking up his intellect. The story it’s self will have lots of potential is mashed together in a really bad way were they just make you cringe. And last the mc is a idiot!!!
I don't like how he reveals his powers (like how he tells his friends or maybe everyone Lol that he has to have missions to lvl up or smthng) and through the reason of having this special 'bloodline'. His system also has counterstops and he doesn't learn anything on his own(like his social skills I mean do u have to upgrade ur social skills every lvl up to improve ur social life? Doesn't conversing to ppl improve ur social skills? Why does he need to upgrade up smthng like that?) He also acts like a child and is kinda immature and makes rash decisions, he also doesn't think first and the consequences of his decisions and just go in first without thinking what would happen to his teammates even though his 30- year's old or smthng and he even has his Int MAX like how can he not think first? Anyway that's all.
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Just up to a few chapters in and i can tell MC is a really f****d up character.How can charisma affect his personality when hes already a grown ass thirty year old man.It's plain COMMON SENSE.He should at least be average in interacting with other people instead of failing miserably.I mean come on the guy should at least know know how to interact with other people in his his previous life or is is there some part in the story that he doesnt talk anyone else until he is transmigratted.I know author is trying to make it as realistic as possible but this is over-realistic. Well at least its good to know that he'll fix later on but this something that doesn't coincide with 'common dollar'
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The mc is stupid as hell. He is gets mad at everyone for a good reason and then crawl back to them with an apology. He can't stick to his decisions. SPOILERS HERE:- He gets angry at his friends (blind faith in the village) hokage(manipulate him, could not control him, expelled him), and then comes back to them begging. He is just like a puppet for his friends. He decided that hidden villages, are not fair to take even malicious missions, so they need to be eradicated. Then he suddenly comes back, say sorry to everyone, gets hitched. He makes Minato come to life, he also betrayed the MC, he just don't care. he got too much power, didn't do anything special, just acts like a lapdog for his friends.
I tried to give it a chance but i cant do it .Reading a novel with naruto world as the background you expect an mc who will train hard and have the atitude of a shinobi what you get is a retard that thinks he is playing a game talking and complaining to himself all the time ....
I found this really fun and interesting story and I'm curious if there's any stories like this. please reply if you do know any. ..............
Love it. Best "original" book I have read. Love how the author explain from all points of view. The mc feels exceptionally real. Mc thoughts are genuine, not mentioning how op and flawed he is at the same time. I have read till 62 chapters and I can say for sure the author has put a lot of effort in writing this story.
Nice in beginning then turns boring As boring that you will start thinking that you are reading the same novel Low charisma whole latter chapters are the wailing of my about his ****ty charisma 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😌😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😏😴😴it's gets this much boring
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This novel looks like its gonna be a blast. funfunfunvfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfunfun
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I'm so sure that I finished this fanfiction but I can't remember it so I'll probably read it again But can you tell me if there is romance in this novel because I really don't enjoy novels without it And if so is it a tragic romance because I HATE that Because that's why I might have stopped reading it Maybe I don't remember it because I tend to drop fanfictions with tragic endings for the MC and heroine
Oh my God....this is THE BEST naruto fanfic i have ever read...the characters are actually rational here hahaha... though i think that a bunch 11 yr old figured out almost everything is a bit dangerous for him. I wouldnt be suprised if akatsuki knows alot already especially tobi through zetsu.
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This review will be quite harsh 1 star for writing quality, why ? Because of, first the extremely special vocabulary of games which keeps me from even understanding certain sentences (and I read lots of mtls so I’ve become pretty good at understanding the meaning of a sentence from only a few words). Second, the most basic grammar and time correlation in a sentence isn’t respected. 1 star stability : not much to say, even though it’s been rectified, the very fact that the novel was put on this website without the express permission of the original author... 3 star story dev : the story seems intersting but I just can’t get into it due to grammar (I’ve only read three chapters so I don’t dare say it’s gonna be bad but I did start thinking it wasn’t going in the right direction from only this so...) Character design 3 star : nothing to say just like for story dev World background 2 : it’s a fanfic in a world which wasn’t created by the author, the world of Naruto, if you loved the original story then you’ll probably appreciate this one, but that’s a given so only 2 To conclude, if you are fond of the different game universes this novel refers to with the vocabulary, if you don’t mind grammar and if you like Naruto then you’ll probably enjoy this... I won’t tell anyone not to read this as I’ve only been as far as the third chapter and it might be a lot better after, but it really is the first novel on qidian I’m THIS disapointed in
I just love this original, hard to explain how great it is. Just read it. 140 characters ensue. abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
Great fanfic with OP mc DEFINITELY READ IT!!!(now for 140) READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT READ IT
Hello, my name is Fulcon, and I'm the original author of this fanfiction. I first posted this story on Spacebattles on March 11, 2016. You can read it here. h t t p s : / / forums . spacebattles . com / threads / shinobi - the - rpg - naruto - si . 380860 / If the link doesn't work, simply search for it on the forum. I posted it on FFnet nearly a year later. URL is this: h t t p s : / / w w w . fanfiction . net / s / 12433631 / 1 / SHINOBI - The - RPG I have worked for over two years on this story. It is currently 62 chapters in the making, so if you are in a real hurry to see what's going on in this story, I recommend heading over there and getting much, much further in the story. The reason I'm telling you about this is because I am not Leylin_Farlier, and my permission to post this story on another site was never sought at all. At best, this is merely an attempt to give the story more coverage. At worst, this is plagiarism. Given that this person has never once named me or attempted to give me credit, I can only assume it's the latter. That simply will not do. Leylin, I've put SHINOBI: The RPG on Hiatus for a few weeks. You have until then to put in the following changes to this story to give me proper credit - or you can take it down. Either is fine with me. #1: You are to write, in bold letters 'Story Written by Fulcon' at the bottom of this cover picture. #2: Change the description of the story to include 'Story Written by Fulcon'. #3: Change the author's thoughts at the end of each chapter too 'The Previous was a Fanbased Work of Fiction, written by Fulcon. Naruto is owned by Shueisha, Viz Entertainment and Masashi Kishimoto. Please support the Official Release.' Listen, Leylin. Uploading someone else's story to another site and claiming it as your own isn't cool. It's not funny, it's not going to get you any further in life, it's only going to end in public humiliation. At best. But if you make the changes that I requested, we can forget you attempted to steal anything and you can keep hosting my story. Because it is mine. And I'd appreciate it if you acknowledged that fact.