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wow the story line is amazing am completely hooked. Good work author more updates please
Author, you really know how to get readers to continue reading. Interesting character. Rare story. Your use of English is top notch. Great job author. I honestly love this book.
I personally love this book. The storyline and the characters are dope.It's a unique story that I've not seen before.I hope it continues like this. Keep up the good work author.
This One is great masterpiece in the making . The story line , twisted plots , perfect harmony and flow makes it one of the best on the block.
Dude LoL, your synopsis had me going for a moment there, the novels just as good, seriously like your sense of humor 🤣😂, Seriously can't wait to see what sort of mischief Asmodeus gets into.
"Filled with enchanting worlds, compelling characters, and unexpected twists, 'Whispering Stars' is an immersive journey you won't want to end."
The story have potential, great plot and well detailed description, but it would be much easier to read if you space the paragraphs. But it's a great story and I highly recommend.
this book is simply amazing, I usually wouldn't read these sort of books but this one has me hooked right from the first chapter! l would love to see more of it ❤️
I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.
Author This is my first time reading this kind of book. The first 5 chapters has me laughing. I see the humor in your words and the world building is good as its progresses. Keep it up and looking foward to reading more from you
wow. good introduction and the explanations were clear. also, i like the part that you were using the original sins devil names on the characters it makes it more interesting
The story was intriguing, mixing family rivalry and temptation themes. The characters had depth, but some parts felt slow. It's worth a read if you like supernatural drama.
The story has an interesting twist on the Devil's rivalry and lust's rise. Characters are unique, but pacing felt a bit uneven. Good for a change of pace in supernatural fiction.
Haven't read it yet but It looks good from the first chapter, I'll save it till chapters are stockpiled.
Great book. The author did a great job in writing this novel. I would love to read more from this book. Please keep updating it I can't wait, seems like am obsessed.
love the plot suspense 🥰took my time to read it over again, looking forward to more updates love it 😊
Honest review. The author really knows how to tell a story. The character's conversation is not forceful and I loved it. Unique plot. I hope you'll be able to finish the book. I added it to my library to make sure I'm updated ❤️🤗
First of all, the story has a grear theme obviously derived from the bible. I hope you execute it well, dear author! Very interesting to read. But I hope do something about paraphrasing. All in All a very good read
I love the plot. A world where the powerful beings contest. Very thrillingNice one.
I really love the whole concept of it , especially the biblical history please keep it up the story is really interesting and cool . Authour just needs to work on the punctuation that's all but the writing is top notch.🔥
Interesting idea and theme of story. I have been dreading to read something like this (TBH). Keep up the chapter pouring. But there's something I quite find a little bit error. 1. The Punctuation 2, Paraphasing. 3. the conversation. This book is a diamond needed to be polished to see it's potential:)
I would just state out the author's problem1. author needs to create a long chapter, maybe 1k to 1.5k words per chapter2. if the author is seeking a contract, he should really stop using emoticons3. author needs to work on paragraphs and spacingaside from all these, the story is quite interesting, and I won't lie I'm really a fan of history, but the author needs to work on his writing skills, maybe try reading a few books and you'll get the hang of it
This one is good, however, it would be so much better if every chapter were long. overall, amazing.
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Out of the box concept of demonsvery interestingbut the chapters are a bit too short
It's a bit hard to follow, and the chapters are extremely short. Overall, the story is pretty compelling and has a lot of potential. I like it for what it is and will continue to read it. 😊
I’m actually very impressed and excited by the development of the story. The story is really epic and the plot develops beautifully as well. It definitely kept me hooked and all I can say, I can’t wait for the upcoming chapters too! <3
wow the story line is amazing am completely hooked. Good work author more updates please
Author, you really know how to get readers to continue reading. Interesting character. Rare story. Your use of English is top notch. Great job author. I honestly love this book.
I personally love this book. The storyline and the characters are dope.It's a unique story that I've not seen before.I hope it continues like this. Keep up the good work author.
This One is great masterpiece in the making . The story line , twisted plots , perfect harmony and flow makes it one of the best on the block.
Dude LoL, your synopsis had me going for a moment there, the novels just as good, seriously like your sense of humor 🤣😂, Seriously can't wait to see what sort of mischief Asmodeus gets into.
"Filled with enchanting worlds, compelling characters, and unexpected twists, 'Whispering Stars' is an immersive journey you won't want to end."
The story have potential, great plot and well detailed description, but it would be much easier to read if you space the paragraphs. But it's a great story and I highly recommend.
this book is simply amazing, I usually wouldn't read these sort of books but this one has me hooked right from the first chapter! l would love to see more of it ❤️
I hop you won’t take offense in this, but consider editing your book. I suggest using grammar-checking apps like Grammarly. This story has a nice premise, but it would be better if you touch up the grammar, spelling, and punctuations.
Author This is my first time reading this kind of book. The first 5 chapters has me laughing. I see the humor in your words and the world building is good as its progresses. Keep it up and looking foward to reading more from you
wow. good introduction and the explanations were clear. also, i like the part that you were using the original sins devil names on the characters it makes it more interesting
The story was intriguing, mixing family rivalry and temptation themes. The characters had depth, but some parts felt slow. It's worth a read if you like supernatural drama.
The story has an interesting twist on the Devil's rivalry and lust's rise. Characters are unique, but pacing felt a bit uneven. Good for a change of pace in supernatural fiction.
Haven't read it yet but It looks good from the first chapter, I'll save it till chapters are stockpiled.
Great book. The author did a great job in writing this novel. I would love to read more from this book. Please keep updating it I can't wait, seems like am obsessed.
love the plot suspense 🥰took my time to read it over again, looking forward to more updates love it 😊
Honest review. The author really knows how to tell a story. The character's conversation is not forceful and I loved it. Unique plot. I hope you'll be able to finish the book. I added it to my library to make sure I'm updated ❤️🤗
First of all, the story has a grear theme obviously derived from the bible. I hope you execute it well, dear author! Very interesting to read. But I hope do something about paraphrasing. All in All a very good read
I love the plot. A world where the powerful beings contest. Very thrillingNice one.
I really love the whole concept of it , especially the biblical history please keep it up the story is really interesting and cool . Authour just needs to work on the punctuation that's all but the writing is top notch.🔥
Interesting idea and theme of story. I have been dreading to read something like this (TBH). Keep up the chapter pouring. But there's something I quite find a little bit error. 1. The Punctuation 2, Paraphasing. 3. the conversation. This book is a diamond needed to be polished to see it's potential:)
I would just state out the author's problem1. author needs to create a long chapter, maybe 1k to 1.5k words per chapter2. if the author is seeking a contract, he should really stop using emoticons3. author needs to work on paragraphs and spacingaside from all these, the story is quite interesting, and I won't lie I'm really a fan of history, but the author needs to work on his writing skills, maybe try reading a few books and you'll get the hang of it
This one is good, however, it would be so much better if every chapter were long. overall, amazing.
Reveal Spoiler Out of the box concept of demonsvery interestingbut the chapters are a bit too short
It's a bit hard to follow, and the chapters are extremely short. Overall, the story is pretty compelling and has a lot of potential. I like it for what it is and will continue to read it. 😊
I’m actually very impressed and excited by the development of the story. The story is really epic and the plot develops beautifully as well. It definitely kept me hooked and all I can say, I can’t wait for the upcoming chapters too! <3