Severus Snape-Prince

LV 5

Fuzzzy

This is a decent story overall but it has several detractors that affect its rating, the story's poor grammar, and it comes across as disjointed and choppy. The grammar can be fixed very easily because the author often forgets to use filler words or transition words, such as "the" or "when" and other such words. Sentence structure could also be improved because that is the main proponent to the story feeling disjointed, I suggest that the author reads the sentences out loud to see if it feels clunky. Overall this is a decent story, that has potential but it needs to be refined a bit more, for a more enjoyable reading experience.

LV 2

Abhinayrajmulupuri

hmm not read yet but reviews are good,😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

LV 4

Animeci_Prenses

I love this boook. Never leave this book. This book is So goood. I Want more New chapter. Give me more New chapter. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 6

Phoenix1998

Liked it. cant wait for more...............................................................................................................................Liked it. cant wait for more...............................................................................................................................

LV 2

Endless_Suffering

Imma change this the moment the author starts using the words 'the' and 'are'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Imma change this the moment the author starts using the words 'the' and 'are'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 14

3DToto

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LV 5

Puzzle1231

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LV 5

Puzzle1231

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LV 3

creepycatisawesone

please don't drop it. . I'll review properly after 15 chapters but till now it's pretty good And it's SEVERUS SNAPE GUYS (θ‿θ)ʘ‿ʘ(✷‿✷)(ʘᴗʘ✿)( ╹▽╹ )(ㆁωㆁ)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(✯ᴗ✯)( ╹▽╹ )(ㆁωㆁ)(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)(ㆁωㆁ)<(￣︶￣)>(人*´∀｀)｡*ﾟ+( ꈍᴗꈍ)

LV 3

Great_Abby

so far, great grammar, and a great character! mc is not edge or dark, and not a goody two shoes. plus, this is a severus snape fanfic, so it is a 5 star!