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Popadanets v anime Naruto v Roka Li
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There is something wrong with your writing method....most of the time it feels like you are speaking with yourself....too much explanation...Mann people who read a fan-fic basically know the story so you could have explained a bit less...In the story do something rather than thinking in your mind all the time.....Still nice try writing.....
Мне очень понравилось, Автор у тебя есть оригинал на русском? Может там побольше глав есть? ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I love it now to get the extra words ggvbhhhhb hhhhhhhhjjjjjjhhbbkigvjbgvvbbbhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjuuuhhhhhhhvhbbbjbkbbiibbibibijbbiibkvxt(f56yygggg )) hghhhhg hvcucchvvhvjvuuvuvvuvuvuvuucuvviigivuguvuvvuuvuvuvuvuvuvugugugvuvvuucuvcuvuvuuvuvuvuvuvuvuvucuvcuucuvigigcicuuvuvivigigiigiggigiigigigigiggigigiuggguugguugugguufcuuguguguguguguguguggiigigigugufufiggiigiggigiugugugguugguguguguugugguguugugguugguguguguugugguugguguugguguugguguguugguiggiugguugguguguugugguguugugugguig
The 1st fanfic I have read that its about Rock Lee, the english is bad but its at least understandable but plot-wise its good so although I would normaly just give 4 stars (good plot, bad english) BUT WITH ROCK LEE I give 5 stars
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just posting my review here cauz I dont really understand how like the story is taking place I mean like it's kinda distracting when the paragraphs are always split apart and the way the writing is constructed is confusing. plus the POV is just whack I mean how they interact with their surroundings and converse with people is just confusing and is really hard to wrap my head around it
hahahaha location Forest of death Lee: "I'm going to tell you the story about a great shinobi named John Rambo 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 AWESOME story and entertaining as hell
esto promete jajaja , lo poco que leo hasta ahora me gustó mucho jeje , ojalá tenga romance jeje aunque sea un poco la verdad estaría bien jaja ,, no se porque no tiene calificación todavía , es una obra de arte jeje
A guy reincanate as Rock Lee, no system, no cheats, but entertaining as heck. Story it self is hilarious. Mc antics and Author naration makes this story a comedic masterpiece. As for Mc personality, it's kind. I really liked his personality. Writing quality is bad but not worse, u can easily understand what's going on and once u get into it u might even forget about it. All in all, you should definitely give this a try.