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Overall, I do love the story. In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so. System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards. I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
now before I actually go into my review I will say this the first 30 chapters are a pain to get through. but there is reason for this and it is explained in the story later on why the main character acts as such and why this system acts like a oddly stupid system as well. now onto my review. overall this is an absolutely great novel. we get to see the main character come with and spoilers for those wondering. We see the main character come to terms with the fact that he is no longer a human and is instead of Beast and we really see him embody that. he no longer tries to act like a human and he doesn't even try to regain a human form even though it's been confirmed that he can multiple times, because even though he has attachment to his old life he doesn't want it to shape the way he approaches his new life. and sure the story can seem slow and I agree that is a bit drawn out at points but when you're actually reading the story more than one chapter at a time and you aren't just waiting for daily releases and you have like 30 chapter stockpiled to read you don't even notice that sometimes some bits are longer than they should be because the author writes really well. And the story truly gets you drawn in and all the information you are fed is given to you when it is important or before something important happens and then from there on you can start connecting the dots why things that happened previously in the story moved in the manner they did. If you look at any of the other reviews I leave you'll see I'm usually extremely harsh on stories that I like and you this is one of those stories where I don't have much to say about it other than it's a great book. out of all the 500 books I have in my library and probably only the 250 a readout of the already 300 books I've previously read this is one of those books that I always keep coming back to. Sure I don't reread the story like I do some other novels but what's really good about this story is even if I leave it alone for two or three months just to get that nice stockpile of 92 over 100 chapters I still know what's going on in the story because it doesn't rely on cliches. a lot of the story is new and different at least when the main character actually gets past his non cultivating period. and you know I could go on singing praises for this book but I just thought I'd leave my honest review then if anyone right at this point let me know how you feel about the book 2 because this is one of the few that I truly do think deserves more of the following than it has even though I don't think it's as good of a book is say incident man in the apocalypse or the Magus in the Wizard World it's still a great book.
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Probably one of the best novels I have read. As mentioned by other people the mc is childish and there seems to be big plot holes. but if u just have the patience to read 25 ish chapters it will stop and you will start to get explanations to all of it. The novel has really good world building and all the things make sense for the novel. The characters are fun, interesting and have very good development where it makes sens. When you start reading the novel you will never what to stop. A strong recommendation and a must read according to me. 10/10
i have read about 900 chaps i can say this is good but just on thing is that chaps are too small and that system is little too helpful but book is very good overall 9.7 out of ten
overall story , characters and world building is ok. But I am eager to know when MC gets ascended into the immortal world and what stories we get
Loved it it was absulutely beautiful enjoyed it, just the end felt like it was a bit rushed or something like that but still loved it.
chapter 57 in And Omg.. it's been years since I had this much fun reading a novel Writing and Pacing is very good too I won't spoil but from chapter 46 it's became too enjoyable that I can't stop grinning lol.
when I read this, the novel was already completed, so i gave it 5 stars on updating stability. the writing quality is good, but there are typos on plenty of chapters, so only 4 stars. character development deserves 5 stars. There are some unique characters aside from the mc that make the novel more complex and fun. finally, world background and story development deserve 4 stars. both have the same problem the author developed and hint at a background on the immortal world but stopped the novel at the highest level of the mortal world. The last chapter solves some of it by giving an overview about how great the mc will be. however, this isn't enough since we are left hanging about mc master, Tim father, Tim enemy, skull God, mc superior on the Dao, immortal court, four guardian clan, system origin, mc reincarnation, mc ever got a human like body, romance, tian clan. don't mistake me. This is a good novel and well worth an enjoyable read. however, it is so good at designing for background and story that what could be just minor flaws on an inferior novel is much more evident and frustrating. even more since the author could easily novel this with some extra chapters and have a perfect novel.
An excellent story for introduction to a new character in his other novel. I wouldn't mind more chapters focusing on Lin Wu and hus journey till he became the worm Sovereign. Congratulations on the great job.
5-Stars, because the Author looks like a Indian Cultivator. Just a joke, but he really is nice:) Anyway, heres the review. In the beginning, the MC is kinda stupid, but it has a reason. The MC grows not only in power, but also as a person. The grammar is good, in my opinion. World building + story development is nice too. Writing Quality is good, and gets even better over time. Ending was kinda rushed.
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painfully annoying mc with his weird catchphrases is ruining this story. i see multiple reviews that says that "it is painful to read first 20/30 chapters but it gets better afterwards." it shouldnt be like that. readers shouldnt have to suffer through chapters in order to reach " the real story". do better author. not recommended.
MC feels incredibly dumb and childish. I could not even give it much of a try because of how bad it was. He was a college student, but seems like he only has the maturity of a 4 year old child
Hey author, just wanted to say it's a great story, but is this story in the same verse as"Walker of the worlds"? Cuz istg everything is very much the same. If this is explained later in the novels (how they are connected or if they meet) then please tell me! It will honestly be funny if it's so.
Read every chapter, by far one of my favorite chapters. The ending was abrupt though, Tim's story wasn't wrapped up, neither any of the yellow dragon stuff. didn't get to see any immortal worlds, etc. It felt like the author just wanted to end it when it definitely had at least 500 more chapters of plot left in it. I'm sad to see the end honestly. I love this novel so much
it's great with everything expect for the fact that the mc's goal in this novel is to build kingdoms or something but it is mainly focused on this aspect after 500 chap but it will become the thing in the story no more development of mc. he still upgrades his cultivation but the skills he gains is basically to build subordinates.
I liked it. My only suggestion to those interested in the book is to skip the first 20 or so chapters. Those first 20 chapters are a good laugh at best, or an insufferable slog at worst. have a nice day.[img=Speechless]
Absolutely love this, and I cant wait too see more of Lin Wu in Walker of the Worlds!
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I loved the story, waited throughout the whole time it was on break. Would recommend others read. My biggest issues is the ending⦠such a curve ball rushed ending that It leaves me feeling like I was given a billion dollars then kicked in the balls and told it was all fake bills. Would love a sequel that goes on to further continue the story tho.
nice novel. it was interesting with no boring cliche.i have read over 1030 chapters and am gonna say that you are not gonna reading it up to now.
it started pretty slow and Author takes his time to develop World Building characters and power System. But Overall the the Story is really good and entertaining.
I will say it like this, I really really like this novel. It is different, it hits differently. And because I am reading Walker of worlds so do I know OR at least I hope I have an idea on where/how the story will go. But I have a question: Is this on hiatus, are you making a giant backlog of chapters, are you having writers block. I am asking because I want MOAR!
the novel was so good i finished in 1 week, tho it stopped at 1080 chapters, is it possible that the author dropped it? i would like the rest of the story if possible
Honestly how to make a story and without giving Mc powers without backtracking and changing things cause writer forgot which ones or how m uch
Feels like the story is abandoned. This story used to be updated constantly but not the author is focusing on his other stories.
The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something) Thanks for the great book author! (/^β½^)/
Overall, I do love the story. In the beginning, mc is weirdly dumb, there is a reason for this. He got better after chapter 21 or so. System gave weird rewards at 1st. But after a while, I understand that this is a support system, it doesn't give any physical rewards. I think the story format can be improved, user status doesn't need to show everything everytime, I only want to read the changes.
now before I actually go into my review I will say this the first 30 chapters are a pain to get through. but there is reason for this and it is explained in the story later on why the main character acts as such and why this system acts like a oddly stupid system as well. now onto my review. overall this is an absolutely great novel. we get to see the main character come with and spoilers for those wondering. We see the main character come to terms with the fact that he is no longer a human and is instead of Beast and we really see him embody that. he no longer tries to act like a human and he doesn't even try to regain a human form even though it's been confirmed that he can multiple times, because even though he has attachment to his old life he doesn't want it to shape the way he approaches his new life. and sure the story can seem slow and I agree that is a bit drawn out at points but when you're actually reading the story more than one chapter at a time and you aren't just waiting for daily releases and you have like 30 chapter stockpiled to read you don't even notice that sometimes some bits are longer than they should be because the author writes really well. And the story truly gets you drawn in and all the information you are fed is given to you when it is important or before something important happens and then from there on you can start connecting the dots why things that happened previously in the story moved in the manner they did. If you look at any of the other reviews I leave you'll see I'm usually extremely harsh on stories that I like and you this is one of those stories where I don't have much to say about it other than it's a great book. out of all the 500 books I have in my library and probably only the 250 a readout of the already 300 books I've previously read this is one of those books that I always keep coming back to. Sure I don't reread the story like I do some other novels but what's really good about this story is even if I leave it alone for two or three months just to get that nice stockpile of 92 over 100 chapters I still know what's going on in the story because it doesn't rely on cliches. a lot of the story is new and different at least when the main character actually gets past his non cultivating period. and you know I could go on singing praises for this book but I just thought I'd leave my honest review then if anyone right at this point let me know how you feel about the book 2 because this is one of the few that I truly do think deserves more of the following than it has even though I don't think it's as good of a book is say incident man in the apocalypse or the Magus in the Wizard World it's still a great book.
Reveal Spoiler Probably one of the best novels I have read. As mentioned by other people the mc is childish and there seems to be big plot holes. but if u just have the patience to read 25 ish chapters it will stop and you will start to get explanations to all of it. The novel has really good world building and all the things make sense for the novel. The characters are fun, interesting and have very good development where it makes sens. When you start reading the novel you will never what to stop. A strong recommendation and a must read according to me. 10/10
i have read about 900 chaps i can say this is good but just on thing is that chaps are too small and that system is little too helpful but book is very good overall 9.7 out of ten
overall story , characters and world building is ok. But I am eager to know when MC gets ascended into the immortal world and what stories we get
Loved it it was absulutely beautiful enjoyed it, just the end felt like it was a bit rushed or something like that but still loved it.
chapter 57 in And Omg.. it's been years since I had this much fun reading a novel Writing and Pacing is very good too I won't spoil but from chapter 46 it's became too enjoyable that I can't stop grinning lol.
when I read this, the novel was already completed, so i gave it 5 stars on updating stability. the writing quality is good, but there are typos on plenty of chapters, so only 4 stars. character development deserves 5 stars. There are some unique characters aside from the mc that make the novel more complex and fun. finally, world background and story development deserve 4 stars. both have the same problem the author developed and hint at a background on the immortal world but stopped the novel at the highest level of the mortal world. The last chapter solves some of it by giving an overview about how great the mc will be. however, this isn't enough since we are left hanging about mc master, Tim father, Tim enemy, skull God, mc superior on the Dao, immortal court, four guardian clan, system origin, mc reincarnation, mc ever got a human like body, romance, tian clan. don't mistake me. This is a good novel and well worth an enjoyable read. however, it is so good at designing for background and story that what could be just minor flaws on an inferior novel is much more evident and frustrating. even more since the author could easily novel this with some extra chapters and have a perfect novel.
An excellent story for introduction to a new character in his other novel. I wouldn't mind more chapters focusing on Lin Wu and hus journey till he became the worm Sovereign. Congratulations on the great job.
5-Stars, because the Author looks like a Indian Cultivator. Just a joke, but he really is nice:) Anyway, heres the review. In the beginning, the MC is kinda stupid, but it has a reason. The MC grows not only in power, but also as a person. The grammar is good, in my opinion. World building + story development is nice too. Writing Quality is good, and gets even better over time. Ending was kinda rushed.
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painfully annoying mc with his weird catchphrases is ruining this story. i see multiple reviews that says that "it is painful to read first 20/30 chapters but it gets better afterwards." it shouldnt be like that. readers shouldnt have to suffer through chapters in order to reach " the real story". do better author. not recommended.
MC feels incredibly dumb and childish. I could not even give it much of a try because of how bad it was. He was a college student, but seems like he only has the maturity of a 4 year old child
Hey author, just wanted to say it's a great story, but is this story in the same verse as"Walker of the worlds"? Cuz istg everything is very much the same. If this is explained later in the novels (how they are connected or if they meet) then please tell me! It will honestly be funny if it's so.
Read every chapter, by far one of my favorite chapters. The ending was abrupt though, Tim's story wasn't wrapped up, neither any of the yellow dragon stuff. didn't get to see any immortal worlds, etc. It felt like the author just wanted to end it when it definitely had at least 500 more chapters of plot left in it. I'm sad to see the end honestly. I love this novel so much
it's great with everything expect for the fact that the mc's goal in this novel is to build kingdoms or something but it is mainly focused on this aspect after 500 chap but it will become the thing in the story no more development of mc. he still upgrades his cultivation but the skills he gains is basically to build subordinates.
I liked it. My only suggestion to those interested in the book is to skip the first 20 or so chapters. Those first 20 chapters are a good laugh at best, or an insufferable slog at worst. have a nice day.[img=Speechless]
Absolutely love this, and I cant wait too see more of Lin Wu in Walker of the Worlds!
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I loved the story, waited throughout the whole time it was on break. Would recommend others read. My biggest issues is the ending⦠such a curve ball rushed ending that It leaves me feeling like I was given a billion dollars then kicked in the balls and told it was all fake bills. Would love a sequel that goes on to further continue the story tho.
nice novel. it was interesting with no boring cliche.i have read over 1030 chapters and am gonna say that you are not gonna reading it up to now.
it started pretty slow and Author takes his time to develop World Building characters and power System. But Overall the the Story is really good and entertaining.
I will say it like this, I really really like this novel. It is different, it hits differently. And because I am reading Walker of worlds so do I know OR at least I hope I have an idea on where/how the story will go. But I have a question: Is this on hiatus, are you making a giant backlog of chapters, are you having writers block. I am asking because I want MOAR!
the novel was so good i finished in 1 week, tho it stopped at 1080 chapters, is it possible that the author dropped it? i would like the rest of the story if possible
Honestly how to make a story and without giving Mc powers without backtracking and changing things cause writer forgot which ones or how m uch
Feels like the story is abandoned. This story used to be updated constantly but not the author is focusing on his other stories.
The main character is interesting to watch develop, grow, and get stronger. There are some things I didn't expect to happen in this book that happened in a good way that I didn't anticipate! Trust me when I say there is a plot twist will make you think "oh that makes sense now that I think about it". I just hope that worm boy's form gets a bit more visually appealing. (I just want him to get a neat pattern or something) Thanks for the great book author! (/^β½^)/