Rise of a beast master in the cultivation world

Alex was a poor orphan living in the black frost city. one day, he was nearly beaten to death for trying to save a bird. Just as he was about to die,a Mysterious treasure appeared, calling itself the 'Beast master system', healed him and made a contract between Alex and the beast he tried to save before. From there on the entire universe came to know about a cultivator capable of commanding beasts and using their abilities, a being capable of making even gods tremble with fear upon seeing him.
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Hi guys, the author the here. so just wanted to let you know that this is my first book and I hope you like it. and tell me what you think that could be improved. thanks