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Probably much more enjoyable if you are into cultivation, I've never been able to get into it but still found some enjoyment in reading this, all it needs is some less grammar mistakes and it would be a solid 5 star.
flaws: grammar and punctuation strengths: pacing, dialogue and character writing so far, the story is good, and inciting. there may be a few grammar errors, but it won’t ruin your enjoyment while reading. all in all, i believe this novel holds potential
This novel has some grammar and punctuation flaws, but overall is good. It just needs to fix two problems, get a stabel update release and it need of more time. This has the potential to become something good but if the Author dosent fix a consistent chapter update, he will lose out big.
Probably much more enjoyable if you are into cultivation, I've never been able to get into it but still found some enjoyment in reading this, all it needs is some less grammar mistakes and it would be a solid 5 star.
flaws: grammar and punctuation strengths: pacing, dialogue and character writing so far, the story is good, and inciting. there may be a few grammar errors, but it won’t ruin your enjoyment while reading. all in all, i believe this novel holds potential
This novel has some grammar and punctuation flaws, but overall is good. It just needs to fix two problems, get a stabel update release and it need of more time. This has the potential to become something good but if the Author dosent fix a consistent chapter update, he will lose out big.