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No good. Honestly one of the the least enjoyable novels I’ve read. Every character is incredibly unlikable and I honestly don’t care about the plot after the “MC” leaves the camp and I ended up just skipping a bunch of chapters waiting for his to his revenge, but unfortunately there’s gonna be a tonne of filler between now and then so it’s just not worth the read.
I found my way here after devouring the author's first novel. Curious to see how Ali is faring post-Shiva's demise, I was pleasantly surprised by what I discovered. Initially, I thought there might be a huge time difference between Earth and Arcadia—like, one Earth year equals ten in Arcadia. But after binging all the free chapters, I was shocked to find out who sent Ali the system. And now I'm left wondering: was it Rio, all powered up and maybe even merged with that red-eyed personality from his head, or was it the guy in chains with the red eyes around Chapter 117? Tough call. The novel's not bad, but with just a few chapters out, it's hard to gauge its full potential. Still, it's heading in a cool direction, and I'm hoping for some epic crossover between this world and Arcadia, or at least a meetup between the main characters. Taking a break from reading for now, but eagerly awaiting more chapters.
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I like the emotional stuff about betrayal, love, revenge and others, I think that it has a lot of potential and can go far but I can’t read anymore bc I would need to pay 🙄🫨lol but ya I like it and def recommend it
After 25 chapters or so i had to drop this. i dont know how long till he gets to be a real villain but after this long of a prolouge just to know his revenge for kevin i cant read it anymore. the moment where he could have killed him he gets teleported away because of plot and then i thought how often do these things happen? and till now mc didnt have a single win only betrayals, deaths and in the beginning his pathetic life. i mean yeah its ok to have a tranformation from low to high but even after 20 chaps there is nothing. yeah there is the system now but then this whole "oh no something happend and you have to teleport away" happend . i am thinking when author decides to put the chapters behind tickets and how long till kevin dies. i dont want to waste them here when there are better options. for me its ok when the mc prepares or slowly manipulates the heroes so that many chapters are ok to have but this was really one of my most hated tropes where the mc fights his enemes and then either side just runs away successfully because of plot. i mean the beginning and synopsis is where the author catches the reader but i literally had to skip a few chapters SPOILER: after ali confronts kevin in the city and after he gets to know emily so i can know "ahh finally he gets the system" dragging this for so long is really not a win for me maybe having a slower pace is good but not that slow for only L's for the Mc.its really not satisfying to read you know? But then i was like finallyyy he gets his revenge, only for the author to say not for you my man😶 *proceeds to teleport mc away because of plot* so i hope you know how much this triggered me.
Bad so bad, back fourth between present is just bad way start a novel and ive never finshed one thats done it. 1 star i cant bloody see the stars to rate properly.
I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.
Beware, its all over the place, but in a good, way, enjoying it so far, keep up the good shjt
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5 star WQ 5 star US 1 stars for the rest. You stretched the story way too thin for personallity settings. Then took a nosedive into the abyss for world setting I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.
1st chapter, and this is already a no-go. The MC is clearly a masochist and a simp. It’s no wonder she chose the protagonist over him, honestly. For the first time in my life, your novel has made me wish for the protagonsit to get cucked. My lord this is garbage. You’ve ruined my mood.
I don’t really write reviews but I like this story so I had to support. Keep it up I’m liking the story and I’m looking forwards to what’s to come.
Thanks😄😄........................................................................................................................................
This is really good, Came after I caught up with Life of a Nobody, one of the favourite thing about this novel is that the MC's character is the base of the story and I hope that the author will keep this as a character driven story and not a cliche harem apocalyptic with collecting female leads, Right now this got me hooked. Keep it up author.
loved ur other novel, this one looks also promising. story is good and characters too.Aavri is a hoe ngl
So,i am here to give a review because the poor author wanted it.Its very good,it made us feel rage and sadness of the MC even though we know him for a short time,it made us feel connected with MC emotions.Although there is only one thing i am afraid of which is harem tag,i hope you make a harem properly because mostly authors adds alot of girls without much romance between them,so it kinda feels forced,lets hope you dont make same mistake,also please harem in short digits while he is allowed to have one night stand if it is needed in the plot and make the romance between them smooth and nice
Author I have so many questions about this novel, so I'll drop them here, so you can answer me. first of all, what happened to earth? how come there are zombies now? is it because of your first mc's death? . also who's the little kid? and when is he gonna merge with his system, cause until now the system is just helping him from shadows. also isn't giving the first protagonist of earth a system, too much. now you gotta up your game and difficulty for the protagonists that will come after Kevin's death, .cuz if they aren't as tough as Kevin it won't be fun. . also how does the villain system even wants him to deal with the protagonist powered with a system on his own. that's really evil of him lol - like it. ohh and make aarvi a maid and have him serve our mc for all her life. let's drown her in guilt forever
I like that this story isn't slow paced like your other book. At least I hope so. I binged it in one sitting and fairly it's good enough till now. MC though looked dumb at the beginning but after he really accepted his villain persona I liked how he didn't hesitate to wipe out the protagonist's entire base to kill him. Hope he doesn't get back with the girl who betrayed him, which I know is unlikely considering he already wrote a love letter to that other girl . she didn't come into the story but something tells me she'll be a villainess and I would like that. keep writing, 👍
Let's go. I shall start this novel too. just saw your review on pandanovel and here I am. hope it's not poison
So I'm forced to give this review, but I did read it a little. The novel's pretty good and the story from what the author told me so far seems promising enough. the characters are fine and nice. MC is a nice mix of psycho and simple guy - liked the times when he was cruel and hopes he does it more often. ohh and the crossover between author's both novels, that's gonna be a banger from what I got to know so look forward to it
great author , great story , great characters , this the review , but is aarvi going to be heroine or maid,( i suggest make her a zombie) just joking
Harem ✅ Villain ✅ Author ✅ Its good enough reason to support and give 5 stars for this Novel Note: I Wish Author other Novel was Harem...😁
i expected good things from the author based on the last novel and it didn't disappoint except for the fact that I have not seen near enough funeral chapters as yet but its' still new so I excuse him for that.I would say give it a try you might like it everyone is different and has their own opinions and preferences so give it a try and see if you like it or not.
Have been waiting for this book for centuries and man it is the best till now other than this same author main novel (definitely not because author paid me to say this)
well if I can't be shameless and boast about my own book, then what's the point of me being hidden behind a keyboard. so here you go --- this novel is the best novel ever written. I gave it 5* cuz that's the minimum it deserves. this novel is gonna go down in history and your children shall read it for generations to come - so don't you dare ignore this novel and move out. just add this novel in your library and read it. I guarantee on my left kidney that you'll love it. I swear on Noah and kevin's name
No good. Honestly one of the the least enjoyable novels I’ve read. Every character is incredibly unlikable and I honestly don’t care about the plot after the “MC” leaves the camp and I ended up just skipping a bunch of chapters waiting for his to his revenge, but unfortunately there’s gonna be a tonne of filler between now and then so it’s just not worth the read.
I found my way here after devouring the author's first novel. Curious to see how Ali is faring post-Shiva's demise, I was pleasantly surprised by what I discovered. Initially, I thought there might be a huge time difference between Earth and Arcadia—like, one Earth year equals ten in Arcadia. But after binging all the free chapters, I was shocked to find out who sent Ali the system. And now I'm left wondering: was it Rio, all powered up and maybe even merged with that red-eyed personality from his head, or was it the guy in chains with the red eyes around Chapter 117? Tough call. The novel's not bad, but with just a few chapters out, it's hard to gauge its full potential. Still, it's heading in a cool direction, and I'm hoping for some epic crossover between this world and Arcadia, or at least a meetup between the main characters. Taking a break from reading for now, but eagerly awaiting more chapters.
Reveal Spoiler I like the emotional stuff about betrayal, love, revenge and others, I think that it has a lot of potential and can go far but I can’t read anymore bc I would need to pay 🙄🫨lol but ya I like it and def recommend it
After 25 chapters or so i had to drop this. i dont know how long till he gets to be a real villain but after this long of a prolouge just to know his revenge for kevin i cant read it anymore. the moment where he could have killed him he gets teleported away because of plot and then i thought how often do these things happen? and till now mc didnt have a single win only betrayals, deaths and in the beginning his pathetic life. i mean yeah its ok to have a tranformation from low to high but even after 20 chaps there is nothing. yeah there is the system now but then this whole "oh no something happend and you have to teleport away" happend . i am thinking when author decides to put the chapters behind tickets and how long till kevin dies. i dont want to waste them here when there are better options. for me its ok when the mc prepares or slowly manipulates the heroes so that many chapters are ok to have but this was really one of my most hated tropes where the mc fights his enemes and then either side just runs away successfully because of plot. i mean the beginning and synopsis is where the author catches the reader but i literally had to skip a few chapters SPOILER: after ali confronts kevin in the city and after he gets to know emily so i can know "ahh finally he gets the system" dragging this for so long is really not a win for me maybe having a slower pace is good but not that slow for only L's for the Mc.its really not satisfying to read you know? But then i was like finallyyy he gets his revenge, only for the author to say not for you my man😶 *proceeds to teleport mc away because of plot* so i hope you know how much this triggered me.
Bad so bad, back fourth between present is just bad way start a novel and ive never finshed one thats done it. 1 star i cant bloody see the stars to rate properly.
I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.
Beware, its all over the place, but in a good, way, enjoying it so far, keep up the good shjt
Reveal Spoiler 5 star WQ 5 star US 1 stars for the rest. You stretched the story way too thin for personallity settings. Then took a nosedive into the abyss for world setting I dont even know anything by chapter 20 and why it happened, plot holes are massive, while no real progress even more confusing the way you did the transmigration is just confusing and makes no sense. the story didnt pull me in the first 20 chapters sorry. I cant read this.
1st chapter, and this is already a no-go. The MC is clearly a masochist and a simp. It’s no wonder she chose the protagonist over him, honestly. For the first time in my life, your novel has made me wish for the protagonsit to get cucked. My lord this is garbage. You’ve ruined my mood.
I don’t really write reviews but I like this story so I had to support. Keep it up I’m liking the story and I’m looking forwards to what’s to come.
Thanks😄😄........................................................................................................................................
This is really good, Came after I caught up with Life of a Nobody, one of the favourite thing about this novel is that the MC's character is the base of the story and I hope that the author will keep this as a character driven story and not a cliche harem apocalyptic with collecting female leads, Right now this got me hooked. Keep it up author.
loved ur other novel, this one looks also promising. story is good and characters too.Aavri is a hoe ngl
So,i am here to give a review because the poor author wanted it.Its very good,it made us feel rage and sadness of the MC even though we know him for a short time,it made us feel connected with MC emotions.Although there is only one thing i am afraid of which is harem tag,i hope you make a harem properly because mostly authors adds alot of girls without much romance between them,so it kinda feels forced,lets hope you dont make same mistake,also please harem in short digits while he is allowed to have one night stand if it is needed in the plot and make the romance between them smooth and nice
Author I have so many questions about this novel, so I'll drop them here, so you can answer me. first of all, what happened to earth? how come there are zombies now? is it because of your first mc's death? . also who's the little kid? and when is he gonna merge with his system, cause until now the system is just helping him from shadows. also isn't giving the first protagonist of earth a system, too much. now you gotta up your game and difficulty for the protagonists that will come after Kevin's death, .cuz if they aren't as tough as Kevin it won't be fun. . also how does the villain system even wants him to deal with the protagonist powered with a system on his own. that's really evil of him lol - like it. ohh and make aarvi a maid and have him serve our mc for all her life. let's drown her in guilt forever
I like that this story isn't slow paced like your other book. At least I hope so. I binged it in one sitting and fairly it's good enough till now. MC though looked dumb at the beginning but after he really accepted his villain persona I liked how he didn't hesitate to wipe out the protagonist's entire base to kill him. Hope he doesn't get back with the girl who betrayed him, which I know is unlikely considering he already wrote a love letter to that other girl . she didn't come into the story but something tells me she'll be a villainess and I would like that. keep writing, 👍
Let's go. I shall start this novel too. just saw your review on pandanovel and here I am. hope it's not poison
So I'm forced to give this review, but I did read it a little. The novel's pretty good and the story from what the author told me so far seems promising enough. the characters are fine and nice. MC is a nice mix of psycho and simple guy - liked the times when he was cruel and hopes he does it more often. ohh and the crossover between author's both novels, that's gonna be a banger from what I got to know so look forward to it
great author , great story , great characters , this the review , but is aarvi going to be heroine or maid,( i suggest make her a zombie) just joking
Harem ✅ Villain ✅ Author ✅ Its good enough reason to support and give 5 stars for this Novel Note: I Wish Author other Novel was Harem...😁
i expected good things from the author based on the last novel and it didn't disappoint except for the fact that I have not seen near enough funeral chapters as yet but its' still new so I excuse him for that.I would say give it a try you might like it everyone is different and has their own opinions and preferences so give it a try and see if you like it or not.
Have been waiting for this book for centuries and man it is the best till now other than this same author main novel (definitely not because author paid me to say this)
well if I can't be shameless and boast about my own book, then what's the point of me being hidden behind a keyboard. so here you go --- this novel is the best novel ever written. I gave it 5* cuz that's the minimum it deserves. this novel is gonna go down in history and your children shall read it for generations to come - so don't you dare ignore this novel and move out. just add this novel in your library and read it. I guarantee on my left kidney that you'll love it. I swear on Noah and kevin's name