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Please know that I am only reviewing the first 5 chapters. Synopsis: I’m disappointed in this section. I dislike it when authors put in a snippet from their book instead of focusing on what their book is about. This detracts from the whole of the book itself. I’m happy to see that some of the synopsis was used correctly. I think the author could benefit greatly from redoing this part. It’s what the readers first see and is most important. Writing Quality: I wish, in moments like these, that I was not a reviewer. This story has great potential. I find myself wondering what will happen and what the young princess has planned. Yet… I must stumble over so many writing mistakes that it’s hard to keep my mind on the story itself. Nearly every paragraph had writing mistakes. Whether that be the wrong word being used or the author removing words completely or just simple mistakes. I will show examples, and these are mainly coming from the first chapter: Issue – Here you will see that the wrong words were added and the sentence grammar itself is wrong – “Song Minhyun said mockingly glancing round the room in envy, the Empress has always had want she wanted, the Emperor's love, and this court yard,and an outstanding child.” Issue – Here we see once again, the wrong words were used. – “"And I see you couldn't birth an healthy child dear royal concubine." Empress Ki said while taking another shot of drink from her wine bottle.” Issue – Here, we will find my top #1 frustration. The author uses the word “am” instead of “I’m”. They do it often. Also, the sentence structure is going everywhere AND the punctuation is incorrectly placed. – “Song Minhyun soft spot being hit she couldn't hide the bloodlust in her eyes any longer, "since you know why am here, bring that brat out let's end it quickly." Song Minhyun said annoyed at the fact the Empress still had the courage to drink at her death .” Issue – In this example, we notice that the author jumps tenses. Meaning, past to present writing styles. Not to mention that once again the paragraph’s sentence structure and word use are everywhere but correct. – ““Empress Ki realized a smile of relief as blood spat out from her mouth finally she was free from the daily mind games and don't have to worry about being schemed against anymore, she just hopes her daughter is free from all this.” Issue – Once again, we see that the author uses the “am” instead of “I’m”. There are also errors in spelling. – “"Am sorry mother, it was an oversight in my path for letting a lowlife get pass me, I promise to be on guard next time." Han jiwoo said apologetically.” I suggest that the author take time to use Grammarly or other writing programs. Then when the program has highlighted the errors and they’re fixed, please reread their work to verify any mistakes and create a d better flow. I will have to give this section a 2. I would give it a 1 but the author seems to know what’s interesting for the reader and has potential. But I cannot give it more than that. Story Development: The story begins great. There’s intrigue and heartache and it truly sucks you right into the story. I feel like the author knows what she’s doing and where she wants her story to go. This is nice since I normally find authors who are lost in their decisions. This section is 4 stars. Character Design: I enjoyed the FL and her character. However, I don’t know what the character looks like. Does she have long hair? Does she have blue eyes? Is she short? There are no character descriptors in this book. Not for the Main characters or side characters. The characters are intriguing and pull me in but it’s lacking in descriptors. This section receives 3 stars. World Background: I feel like this section is one of the stronger sections. The world is pretty visual for me. I do wish that there was more description, but I can tell when and where this story is taking place. I do suggest that the author take more time to describe the buildings and rooftops that the FL runs on. Along with her home and the area she spars with her Master. I just want MORE. This section receives 3.
It's very good story I like the beggningof story and in initial chapter I feeled like it is going too fast but yeah other then that the story is very good and the plot was also attention seeking keep up the work looking forward to it
Really good plot and storyline, I highly recommend it. I'm waiting for the next chapter 😌
Such an amazing story I love the plot, the characters involved and most of all the setting keep it up!!!
First, it's good but there are lots of plot holes and grammar problems. I would recommend it, but still needs some check up here and there
Not bad, it's a nice story. I'd love to read more of it, keep up the amazing work author!
Great book, I love it, the author's description is vivid and the first few chapters made me want to read more. Good job author.
A good romance novel that was fun to read. There were some grammar errors but unless you are an english teacher then it doesn’t take away from the story.
Love this book. It's an epic one, good to read. Love your descriptive writing. Nice world settings, everything are in place. Keep it up author.
I really like the story. I'm just teasing Maidservant Kim. Kudos! Keep learning and improving. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
i am not a fan of romance novels but I enjoyed reading the first few chapters of it. I like the historical side of it. the writing quality is good, didn't notice many grammar or writing errors.
The main character is quite enthralling. I love historical settings, so maybe I'm biased when I say the setting is very interesting to me. I would love to see where the story goes from here.
The world could use some more detail, but other than that, it’s a pretty good read! Keep up the good work!
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A delightful read from a talented author. I was surprised that I ended up liking it, even though I'm not a fan of romance. Aside for some grammatical errors and questionable word choices its a delightful book. Keep it up
This is a great historical romance and it is a delight to read despite the grammar mistakes here and there. I hope the author continues to explore and enjoy working on the intricacies of the plot and the grand conclusion. This has the potential to capture many, keep up the good work !
I really love the story and here are my over all rating. —Character world setting; 8/10 —plot enticement; 9.5/10 —Cliffhangers; 5/10 Grammar and punctuation; 7/10 It need editting and try adding emotions to it. After reading the first chapter; I woah it! And I badly want to read it. Hope you update regular and don't leave me hanging 🥺🤨🥰
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Reminder: Please avoid foreign words in your story. Especially if the chapters are already locked (premium). Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
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I just stumbled upon this novel and am going to check it out looks like something promising..
First, it is good, The story needs to be more descriptive, A lot of plot holes, and a bit of grammar, but not bad overall, I'd recommend it.
The story needs more description and the setting. The plot is going nicely. And the character feels like a robot. Overall, with a little editing, you can improve it. I recommend checking it.
it's giving me historical vibe and I love it. infact it's giving me Manhwa vibes and I double love it. I can't read to dig through and complete it. kudos to the author
Please know that I am only reviewing the first 5 chapters. Synopsis: I’m disappointed in this section. I dislike it when authors put in a snippet from their book instead of focusing on what their book is about. This detracts from the whole of the book itself. I’m happy to see that some of the synopsis was used correctly. I think the author could benefit greatly from redoing this part. It’s what the readers first see and is most important. Writing Quality: I wish, in moments like these, that I was not a reviewer. This story has great potential. I find myself wondering what will happen and what the young princess has planned. Yet… I must stumble over so many writing mistakes that it’s hard to keep my mind on the story itself. Nearly every paragraph had writing mistakes. Whether that be the wrong word being used or the author removing words completely or just simple mistakes. I will show examples, and these are mainly coming from the first chapter: Issue – Here you will see that the wrong words were added and the sentence grammar itself is wrong – “Song Minhyun said mockingly glancing round the room in envy, the Empress has always had want she wanted, the Emperor's love, and this court yard,and an outstanding child.” Issue – Here we see once again, the wrong words were used. – “"And I see you couldn't birth an healthy child dear royal concubine." Empress Ki said while taking another shot of drink from her wine bottle.” Issue – Here, we will find my top #1 frustration. The author uses the word “am” instead of “I’m”. They do it often. Also, the sentence structure is going everywhere AND the punctuation is incorrectly placed. – “Song Minhyun soft spot being hit she couldn't hide the bloodlust in her eyes any longer, "since you know why am here, bring that brat out let's end it quickly." Song Minhyun said annoyed at the fact the Empress still had the courage to drink at her death .” Issue – In this example, we notice that the author jumps tenses. Meaning, past to present writing styles. Not to mention that once again the paragraph’s sentence structure and word use are everywhere but correct. – ““Empress Ki realized a smile of relief as blood spat out from her mouth finally she was free from the daily mind games and don't have to worry about being schemed against anymore, she just hopes her daughter is free from all this.” Issue – Once again, we see that the author uses the “am” instead of “I’m”. There are also errors in spelling. – “"Am sorry mother, it was an oversight in my path for letting a lowlife get pass me, I promise to be on guard next time." Han jiwoo said apologetically.” I suggest that the author take time to use Grammarly or other writing programs. Then when the program has highlighted the errors and they’re fixed, please reread their work to verify any mistakes and create a d better flow. I will have to give this section a 2. I would give it a 1 but the author seems to know what’s interesting for the reader and has potential. But I cannot give it more than that. Story Development: The story begins great. There’s intrigue and heartache and it truly sucks you right into the story. I feel like the author knows what she’s doing and where she wants her story to go. This is nice since I normally find authors who are lost in their decisions. This section is 4 stars. Character Design: I enjoyed the FL and her character. However, I don’t know what the character looks like. Does she have long hair? Does she have blue eyes? Is she short? There are no character descriptors in this book. Not for the Main characters or side characters. The characters are intriguing and pull me in but it’s lacking in descriptors. This section receives 3 stars. World Background: I feel like this section is one of the stronger sections. The world is pretty visual for me. I do wish that there was more description, but I can tell when and where this story is taking place. I do suggest that the author take more time to describe the buildings and rooftops that the FL runs on. Along with her home and the area she spars with her Master. I just want MORE. This section receives 3.
It's very good story I like the beggningof story and in initial chapter I feeled like it is going too fast but yeah other then that the story is very good and the plot was also attention seeking keep up the work looking forward to it
Really good plot and storyline, I highly recommend it. I'm waiting for the next chapter 😌
Such an amazing story I love the plot, the characters involved and most of all the setting keep it up!!!
First, it's good but there are lots of plot holes and grammar problems. I would recommend it, but still needs some check up here and there
Not bad, it's a nice story. I'd love to read more of it, keep up the amazing work author!
Great book, I love it, the author's description is vivid and the first few chapters made me want to read more. Good job author.
A good romance novel that was fun to read. There were some grammar errors but unless you are an english teacher then it doesn’t take away from the story.
Love this book. It's an epic one, good to read. Love your descriptive writing. Nice world settings, everything are in place. Keep it up author.
I really like the story. I'm just teasing Maidservant Kim. Kudos! Keep learning and improving. I'm looking forward to seeing more!
i am not a fan of romance novels but I enjoyed reading the first few chapters of it. I like the historical side of it. the writing quality is good, didn't notice many grammar or writing errors.
The main character is quite enthralling. I love historical settings, so maybe I'm biased when I say the setting is very interesting to me. I would love to see where the story goes from here.
The world could use some more detail, but other than that, it’s a pretty good read! Keep up the good work!
Quickly improve your ranking with 5-star genuine reviews and power stones. Please contact Telegram: webnovel666, Discord: webnovel666#8755.`` This section of the novel is truly remarkable - the author's vivid description of the setting and characters is captivating and draws the reader in.
A delightful read from a talented author. I was surprised that I ended up liking it, even though I'm not a fan of romance. Aside for some grammatical errors and questionable word choices its a delightful book. Keep it up
This is a great historical romance and it is a delight to read despite the grammar mistakes here and there. I hope the author continues to explore and enjoy working on the intricacies of the plot and the grand conclusion. This has the potential to capture many, keep up the good work !
I really love the story and here are my over all rating. —Character world setting; 8/10 —plot enticement; 9.5/10 —Cliffhangers; 5/10 Grammar and punctuation; 7/10 It need editting and try adding emotions to it. After reading the first chapter; I woah it! And I badly want to read it. Hope you update regular and don't leave me hanging 🥺🤨🥰
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Reminder: Please avoid foreign words in your story. Especially if the chapters are already locked (premium). Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
Reveal Spoiler I just stumbled upon this novel and am going to check it out looks like something promising..
First, it is good, The story needs to be more descriptive, A lot of plot holes, and a bit of grammar, but not bad overall, I'd recommend it.
The story needs more description and the setting. The plot is going nicely. And the character feels like a robot. Overall, with a little editing, you can improve it. I recommend checking it.
it's giving me historical vibe and I love it. infact it's giving me Manhwa vibes and I double love it. I can't read to dig through and complete it. kudos to the author