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The idiocy of the FL is unbelievable The author has taken every "weak to strong" trope and stuffed the FL. It's a hate read alright
Noah would you look at that, two people alone in the room, they are noble, something might happen. Keke, the blondies are baddies! I want more~ no I demand more!!
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This story is wonderful so far. The characters are very engaging and the story moves along at a good pace. The author has done a good job. My only issue is that the story needs to be edited. There are many areas where either the wrong pronoun is used (for example, using she instead of he & vice versa) and a few places where the wrong name is used for a character. Other than those few things, I really like the story and can't wait to read more. It is definitely a good read.
This is an absolutely great book in everything but grammar. it needs an editor to correct grammar usage and typos. Other than that, I absolutely love this book and the plot so far. I even spent coins and voting on this book.
The idiocy of the FL is unbelievable The author has taken every "weak to strong" trope and stuffed the FL. It's a hate read alright
Noah would you look at that, two people alone in the room, they are noble, something might happen. Keke, the blondies are baddies! I want more~ no I demand more!!
Reveal Spoiler This story is wonderful so far. The characters are very engaging and the story moves along at a good pace. The author has done a good job. My only issue is that the story needs to be edited. There are many areas where either the wrong pronoun is used (for example, using she instead of he & vice versa) and a few places where the wrong name is used for a character. Other than those few things, I really like the story and can't wait to read more. It is definitely a good read.
This is an absolutely great book in everything but grammar. it needs an editor to correct grammar usage and typos. Other than that, I absolutely love this book and the plot so far. I even spent coins and voting on this book.