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Reincarnated with the country building system
4.35 (12 ratings)
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[Scanning completed]
[Host detected. System activated]
“What's going on?”
[Host, I am the system. I will help You Build Your Empire]
In This story our MC name is Alberto a World War II veteran.
He was killed in action in World War II. But God decided to give him another life. He sends him to a fantasy world. This fantasy realm is ten times the size of Earth, teeming with legendary creatures and vast nations that rival even the might of the Mongol Empire.
Where our main character will build his country entirely from scratch using the system given by God. A powerful system that is capable of making him a powerful being
So let's enjoy our main character's journey together.
Join Alberto on his epic journey as he transforms from a soldier into a sovereign, building alliances, facing formidable foes, and perhaps even discovering love amidst the chaos.
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— ★ This story is perfect for fans of fantasy, politics, science fiction, Horror, Conquest, and romance. If you enjoy complex characters, intricate plots, and richly detailed world-building, then this is the story for you. |★|
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Very Good story. Different from other stories. Because here the main character was an experienced soldier. Who has real combat experience. Also, the characters of the summoned soldiers have been beautifully portrayed. So that it feels real. It also seems that its world building will be the best
This story is a masterful blend of politics, intrigue, and romance, set against the backdrop of a richly detailed world. The author has woven a complex and engaging narrative that will keep you on the edge of your seat. The plot is engaging and complex, with a clear sense of tension and stakes. The diplomatic mission, the internal struggles of the Britannia Kingdom, and the Empire's ambitions all create a sense of complexity and intrigue. The world-building is also impressive, with a clear sense of the military unit's equipment and tactics. The use of real-world military hardware, such as the M1 Abrams tank and the Sukhoi Su-57 jets, adds a sense of authenticity to the story. The descriptions of the Empire's architecture, the Britannia Kingdom's port city, and the customs house are vivid and evocative, making it easy to visualize the settings.
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Very interesting story! This is only based off one chapter but I would definitely recommend for people who love fantasy
Interesting story. Really fantasy based. Not a bad thing, interesting to read. I think it is kinda funny the way that everything just happens to him all of a sudden and this it is like... boom... you are now in charge of a world!
Hello everyone 🤗 I'm going to make an announcement. I will delete this novel after two days. Because, I want to republish it after some revisions. So if you want any changes in this story then let me know. Also, if you have any suggestions on how I can make my story more interesting, please let me know. Finally thank you all for being with me.🥰 Please give your feedback 🙏 Please check my original works, You find the book there [New name: Reincarnated with country system]
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
It's a great novel. Can't wait to read more and see how the nation would grow[img=recommend]
Here we have a story mixed with historical and fantasy elements. I can already tell you that Alberto... Sorry, I mean Lt. Alberto, has some crazy goals in mind after being reincarnated. There's themes of duty, sacrifice, and rebirth—which is quite common for novels like this one. Black does an interesting job showing off the world-building. Not too bad of a new universe. The battles with mythical creatures were also a tad interesting. What more can you want in a fantasy realm? However, despite its strong premise, the pacing could use some work, particularly during exposition-heavy sections. Some readers may not have a problem with it, though. It's commendable nonetheless and could benefit from a tighter focus to maintain narrative momentum. A cover for the novel would also be pleasing to see. Other than that, interesting work there, Black.
I love this novel every single thing in the novel is amazing it's a great fantasy novel I recommend to people who love fantasy Good job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like it, the use of actions is weak though. "Bang!" could benefit to proper use of expressions like, "A loud bang cut out next to me, deafening my hearing." Overall I like the story so far
Firstly. I really loved the idea of a soldier dying for the sake of his country then getting isekaied to another world and awarded a system for his efforts is attractive in a sense. Also having a system to summon actual human soldiers instead of monster is unique and different which can lead up to several plotlines. Yes, kingdom building novels are the hype nowadays so I won't get into that aspect. However, even though chapter one started strong, the quality fell off in the following chapters. ML has next to no personality and just goes along with anything presented to him without a second thought. It's hard to believe someone like that is the emperor of a nation
Good Job. ...