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Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story
I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWĺl. love your write.
WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!
A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!
Got about 12 chapters in. The dialog is pretty weird. Not terrible. Feels unnatural. The MC is a hypocrite who adds nothing to the story even though it is about him. A random time skip happens with no mention from the author? Overall it seemed like a mess thrown together and called a story
I read all your histories, hope one day u do a Alexander the Great based novel. or one in Germany before WWĺl. love your write.
WOW. This is a great find, I really hope you continue with this it has the potential to be so amazing. Good job author you have my support!
A interesting and incredible story that deserves to be read! An dtoryline that get you intruigt and close to the world with the background not lacking!