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I don't want to stress you out but could the chapters be a little bit longer ? by the way I love the concept of the story so far please continue it
the story so far so good but i hope the mc doesn't get so op like be super saiyan 2 power level in the Frieza saga i well be happy if he like Vegeta he has the good moments and the bad ones
5 stars for very obvious reason...Right? Well, I am here because I see that the main character is RED from Undertale fan game. Just make sure that you dont turn her into something entirely different.
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could the mc have unique techniques because i see a lot of potential on the techniques that she can have or learn from her race ? Maybe you can make her race as very strong race that one of become the God of Destruction of universe 7 before before Beerus but later the race controlled by some wizard and there no way to make them back so he destroy the entire race except one or tow thats just an idea i hope it's make the story more interesting or something , by the way it's just suggest so you don't need to do anything with it
I don't want to stress you out but could the chapters be a little bit longer ? by the way I love the concept of the story so far please continue it
the story so far so good but i hope the mc doesn't get so op like be super saiyan 2 power level in the Frieza saga i well be happy if he like Vegeta he has the good moments and the bad ones
5 stars for very obvious reason...Right? Well, I am here because I see that the main character is RED from Undertale fan game. Just make sure that you dont turn her into something entirely different.
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Shameless review from author. Please comment helpful tips to make my writing better, or even a meme is fine. Please add to your library!
could the mc have unique techniques because i see a lot of potential on the techniques that she can have or learn from her race ? Maybe you can make her race as very strong race that one of become the God of Destruction of universe 7 before before Beerus but later the race controlled by some wizard and there no way to make them back so he destroy the entire race except one or tow thats just an idea i hope it's make the story more interesting or something , by the way it's just suggest so you don't need to do anything with it