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what the hek is going on with this fanfic?? The randomness is so cancerous that it started to hurt my brain. I tried putting my brain on auto mode and tried to go more than 10 chapters but i failed. Suddenly gaining powers, suddenly practicing in dojo makes u cut a building, suddenly we know that he is part of an organization, suddenly he already had emiya's power. This novel seems to be written by a child suffering from adhd.
It's too random it hurts my head. The reviews are sus, they are probably alt accounts. People said this was similar to another fanfiction so the author probably took a fanfiction and changed it a little.
A review after 3 chapters, which is a bit too few in my opinion, but meh. Writing quality: 🟡🟡🟡 the author uses the right word and grammar is fine… but it‘s a mess. Stability for Updates: 🟡🟡🟡🟡🟡 haven’t checked, but I think there are daily updates Story development: 🟡🟡 it has potential, but a lot of details have been left out and it‘s jumping from one thing to another, which is very confusing. The start was also kinda weird. Character design: 🟡🟡🟡 so far it felt like a summary with little character interaction, we know a bit about mc‘s personality through his interactions, but not much. World background: 🟡🟡 we know that 3 animes are mixed up so far and met a few characters from them… and that‘s it. There’s nothing about the world so far, no locations have been described, nothing.
Gonna be honest. This feels like a fever dream. I really have no clue what’s going on, but still I’m going to read it lol.
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No one wanted to rate this book of mine that's why i should do it myself.I'm writing for fun also i just decided to rewrite this book and change the story.you better expect that the update would be random because the College would start soon
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Writing style is good easy to understand. Story was written well and only some part wasn't explained well. The story was developing properly but the relationship was not due to forbidden technique the time skip
The story is good and the first chapter was interesting the author didn't really explain a lot of things that's why it just made me think that the MC can do a lot of things.
Everything was good and all, but the world was a bit confusing. Nevertheless, it's still a good story, and by Chapter 15, it became really exciting. I found myself eagerly waiting for the new chapters to be released. This is my first time writing a review about a novel, so forgive me if it's not perfect.
The start of the first few chapters is a good one. I hope the author keeps it up and does not drop it. Its already 5 stars for me for being a Honkai fanfic and a chatgroup
what the hek is going on with this fanfic?? The randomness is so cancerous that it started to hurt my brain. I tried putting my brain on auto mode and tried to go more than 10 chapters but i failed. Suddenly gaining powers, suddenly practicing in dojo makes u cut a building, suddenly we know that he is part of an organization, suddenly he already had emiya's power. This novel seems to be written by a child suffering from adhd.
It's too random it hurts my head. The reviews are sus, they are probably alt accounts. People said this was similar to another fanfiction so the author probably took a fanfiction and changed it a little.
A review after 3 chapters, which is a bit too few in my opinion, but meh. Writing quality: 🟡🟡🟡 the author uses the right word and grammar is fine… but it‘s a mess. Stability for Updates: 🟡🟡🟡🟡🟡 haven’t checked, but I think there are daily updates Story development: 🟡🟡 it has potential, but a lot of details have been left out and it‘s jumping from one thing to another, which is very confusing. The start was also kinda weird. Character design: 🟡🟡🟡 so far it felt like a summary with little character interaction, we know a bit about mc‘s personality through his interactions, but not much. World background: 🟡🟡 we know that 3 animes are mixed up so far and met a few characters from them… and that‘s it. There’s nothing about the world so far, no locations have been described, nothing.
Gonna be honest. This feels like a fever dream. I really have no clue what’s going on, but still I’m going to read it lol.
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
I like it don't really care if you do🥇🥇🥇🥇🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜👍🤜🤜🤜🥇⭐🥇⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍🤜🥇🤜🥇🤜🥇🤜👍⭐🥇🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐👍🤜🥇⭐🥇🤜👍🤜🥇
No one wanted to rate this book of mine that's why i should do it myself.I'm writing for fun also i just decided to rewrite this book and change the story.you better expect that the update would be random because the College would start soon
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Writing style is good easy to understand. Story was written well and only some part wasn't explained well. The story was developing properly but the relationship was not due to forbidden technique the time skip
The story is good and the first chapter was interesting the author didn't really explain a lot of things that's why it just made me think that the MC can do a lot of things.
Everything was good and all, but the world was a bit confusing. Nevertheless, it's still a good story, and by Chapter 15, it became really exciting. I found myself eagerly waiting for the new chapters to be released. This is my first time writing a review about a novel, so forgive me if it's not perfect.
The start of the first few chapters is a good one. I hope the author keeps it up and does not drop it. Its already 5 stars for me for being a Honkai fanfic and a chatgroup
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