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The quality dipped very quickly. Initially the plot revolved around the main character's revenge. I mean, that's one of the reason, he went through that regression bs along with the heroines in the first place. Ir, author even gave a sidenote that the heroines will suffer and beg the MC for forgiveness. He even committed that MC would not forgive them. But, nothing of sort happened except for one in the initial phase and I couldn't even count that as a form of retribution or revenge. As for others, well it was meh. Later, the revenge plo gets completely abandoned on a whim and the author decided to create a whole new plot for some reason. Author seems to think that he is some sort of mystery writer weaving some complex story stating everything will be resolved in the later part of the story. But, he doesn't seem to realize that if you want to create a complex story, you need to gradually progress the plot. That's why stories have different arcs for progression and foreshadowing. You can't just thrust one thing on another, thinking it would add depth to the story. The pacing of the story is quite horrendous. Sometimes, it is very slow and all of a sudden it becomes too fast. This inconsistency persists throughout the story. Also, author has complicated the story too much within just a hundred chapters. I guess the aim is to keep the readers intrigued or something along the line. But, I just became bored and irritated. Still, it was worth a read for like 60 chapters.
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No logic and Insain shit happens all the time the author throws bullshit at bullshit and says it natural… nothing ever goes right and the mc has lost and gained all his power over and over again it’s stupid just take all his power and be done with it… I had hope when the whole system reveal part came but… the story’s insanity and no logic ruins it… The first arc before he leaves the continent is on / dies and comes back… (when he should have just stayed dead or let system revive him but no had to make bullshit be ur anwser why couldn’t his mother just kill herself to make mc feel better or give us a fucking direction) The plot holes are insain. One moment he’s ready to kill everyone and is abt too but then spares them and now his hated enemies now work for him… if ik this mc was this much of a bitch I would have never read it. Solid ig for quality of writting otherwise it all goes down hill. Ch 70 and onward make no sense and this world should just delate itself…. Wasn’t that the logic and explanation behind where the system came from and its history lmao
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The story is overly complicated and frustrating. I don't understand why the author keeps complicating the protagonist's second life. If his first life was terrible, his second life should be about him just steamrolling over everyone. Instead, we have a mysterious family background, unexplained mysterious characters, and the MC making stupid decisions like not using his slave seal on everyone. What is the point of the novel? Just see mc going trough all the shit again? if that's the case we could just read his 1 life. Many elements are confusing, especially since each chapter includes flashbacks from different characters without clearly indicating the timeline. Moreover, most of the heroines are portrayed as -1000 IQ. I understand the concept of fate/plot armor, but the execution here is excessive and disappointing. P.S: most of the time, the MC's plans are confusing and lack clarity. The author doesn't adequately explain the main character's thoughts and motivations, which forces readers to piece things together without having all the necessary information. This often makes the protagonist's actions seem utterly foolish because we can't fully understand why they are doing what they're doing.
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Author I love the story but please give us a break like you have on the edge of our seats ever since i started reading this like I'm always on the edge of my seat please give us some rest
I've been reading for 36 chapters, and I am still grasping at straws here. I don't know what the characters are doing as the explanations are unclear and the story seems to jump all over the place. I especially don't know much about what happens after the time skip. I thought it was good but slowly losing interest. Lmk if in the later chapters, the story becomes more concise.
I have so many questions about the things happening and author gives no explanations. like how the mc knew so many things that he predicted, author never explains. I read 120 chapand seriously I won't be surprised if I find the author blew the entire planet and started a whole different story for the mc bruh. But still I liked the story but slowly mc clearly is shown to be favoring girls. How is he a villain? I started reading the story on the premise that mc would be a villain and he isn't as the story is passing. I am dropping it now after reading 120 chapters.
The novel is insane. Logic non existent. Consistency is something that happens in other stories. Characters are highly unrelatable (except for the cat girl, the Sylvester healer girl and Luna to an extent). MC is just a psycho. Yes, he was betrayed. Yes, I like his revenge, and his convoluted and layered ploys are pretty good. But he treats everyone as a tool or as a means to an end, even the good ones (those two). There is an insane amount of time skips and flashbacks. The plot is complex and clever, and the author must have put in a lot of work, but most things are delivered in such a chaotic way, that half the events don't make sense at all.
Author you should add more characters in character description sometimes I want to see character for comparison with story but they are not present
One of the best novels I have read the story is really interesting and I like the character of ryuk very much and the world back is also very good. Bit I have just one complaint to the author the story is moving very, very slow from titanora arc upto the latest chapters of the jade dominion. Like it just takes them forever to arrive at the upper town and in between they meet just one or two important characters while the others are just useless characters with chapters wasted on them like those four thugs. And some times the chapters just ends 😞in some useless informations that we do not need at all. And what about his revenge we are hardly seeing any revenge now at all. I just hope you fast thing up a little bit because chapters of jade dominion arc are getting boring to read. I'm at chapter 291 so i hope that the upcoming chapters are interesting to read. Overall the novel is great and definitely unique with great storyline. 👍 i hope the author updates chapter more frequently. And please don't drop this novel author it is very good. So keep up the good work author and thanks for the novel.
Hey author is he goona take the heroines in the past or not . Or he gonna go for new heroines?
Unusually for a ‘revenge’ story, what you see on the cover is not what you get. After a certain point, the revenge plot is pretty much abandoned for a mystical political thing. Can’t say I was expecting it, but there’s only so much you can milk out of the original premise. Still, it gets very cluttered and struggles to balance all the plates it’s spinning. It would be fine if I could binge it, but the release schedule works against it. Old information becomes plot critical… but you haven’t thought about it in 3 months. So yah, not my cup of tea but it is a pretty good read. Maybe I’ll pick it up when/if it’s finished
great novel! i definitely would continue reading it if only the cost for each chapter weren't that expensive. forgive me author
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I give this novel 5 stars, the reason? why I love the misunderstandings and the indescribable sensation that it causes, bringing together several emotions in the same character, especially how these emotions affect the protagonist or the heroine, which is neither love nor hate. I like misunderstandings due to unnecessary but at the same time necessary tragedy, the author I don't know if he forgives the heroines but the development is not bad for the 16 chapters that I read. Good job ❤️🩹🫀
So the MC took revenge on the heroines it’s good for me but I want to know if he will take revenge on his mother since she the one that let like half of the heroines to betrayed him and she knew they will attack him but did nothing
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Honestly i really like how well this is written and give props to author for how good it is. The only thing that ruins it for me is author stating mc won't forgive them. I'm a sucker for happy endings where mc and harem reconcile and forgive each other lol. So it's sad when after all of them loving eachother it just ends bitterly. Good novel tho none the less
No words author just review by seeing title i am going tp read it i hope it will be good
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Till chapter 23, mc has embraced his villain path and hasn't forgive any of the heroines. There is some mystery with few of the heroines and mc got his thick plot armor as well but overall a great novel. As a pro Kr and Cn regret misunderstanding harem novel reader. this would be classified as pretty high tier in that regard just because mc aint bishing out on making the heroines life as miserable as possible for his sadism. I personally dont think mc in this life will kill the heroines but just push them to suicide or something, or maybe just torment them enough and later on have them join the harem as secondary wives. Mc is pretty strong but has next to no information about the top dogs of the world even though in previous life he killed millions after millions and became a tyrant and still dont know anything worthwhile about the so called top families in other continent. I will personally stop here just to see how it ends before i continue, i have been burned by way too many regret novels and their trashy heroic mc ends :< Anyway if you are fine with mystery of the plot and things being explained slowly, you can try this novel.
My honest Review: To be honest with you I only read this novel in about chapter 13 or so and it was quite good and I recommend this one if you like a revenge with a emotional plot
Although it’s a emotional roller coaster, sometimes I’m frustrated other times sad or angry. It’s a really good book, the author’s ability to drag you into the story is phenomenal.
is it just making heroine regret and them asking forgiveness type novel? Will the mc get any girl (not heroine though)?
What I most like about this story is one think. [REVENGE] although MC doesn't do it intentionally, just seeing the regret and pain of the betrayal is satisfying.(it give thensame taste as Remarried Empress)
ok so updated review. Just wow.......................................................................................................................
Well just awesome. I've read authors other work too. Both are masterpieces, absolutely stunning. I don't do many reviews but every bit worth it. Keep up the work my G
I FREAKING love this book! The MC is the full embodiment of "F**k these bishes" He was betrayed and unlike most "reincarneted villians" he didn't just let them suffer a little and then take them back or Manipulates them into being his Slaves. He straight-up destroys the ones who hurt him not only physically but mentally as well and makes those hypocritical bishes pay. It is quite refreshing and makes my day!
Just binged all the way to chapter 357 in the span of 3 days. Had initial dropped the book at chap 97 but restarted it months later from chap 1. I was initial frustrated due to these types of books that love to keep the mc in the dark constantly at every step and make him feel powerless. Not gonna lie it was struggle to read island arc. And the constant ploys of drishti and other powerful individuals. But things really started to catch my interest when an actual female lead with depth was introduced with esme and how the author started to let mc not be a total punching bag to higher powers as we have seen for most of the novel. I do also like how the mc is starting to show more emotion as timea goes on. He was a bit edgy initially but he was just betrayed lol.i do hope that it doesnt turn into a mindless r18 novel now that dual cultivation was introduced. I was a bit disappointed that mc first relations in this timeline wasnt with a fiance or other prominent female figure, hopefully it doesnt turn into a pokemon style harem. Also as crazy as she is im hoping Diana will become apart of the harem and that there will be some more character progression on her end. Anyways those where some of my thoughts and personal opinions on the novel. Overall there is alot of junk on this website but this isnt one of thise. This book is shaping into something that can be thousands of chapters with how be have barely scratched the surface of the world let alone outside it. I will continue to look foward to weekly updates. Its amazing how many well performing books the author is doing at once, keep up the good work!!!
Reveal Spoiler The quality dipped very quickly. Initially the plot revolved around the main character's revenge. I mean, that's one of the reason, he went through that regression bs along with the heroines in the first place. Ir, author even gave a sidenote that the heroines will suffer and beg the MC for forgiveness. He even committed that MC would not forgive them. But, nothing of sort happened except for one in the initial phase and I couldn't even count that as a form of retribution or revenge. As for others, well it was meh. Later, the revenge plo gets completely abandoned on a whim and the author decided to create a whole new plot for some reason. Author seems to think that he is some sort of mystery writer weaving some complex story stating everything will be resolved in the later part of the story. But, he doesn't seem to realize that if you want to create a complex story, you need to gradually progress the plot. That's why stories have different arcs for progression and foreshadowing. You can't just thrust one thing on another, thinking it would add depth to the story. The pacing of the story is quite horrendous. Sometimes, it is very slow and all of a sudden it becomes too fast. This inconsistency persists throughout the story. Also, author has complicated the story too much within just a hundred chapters. I guess the aim is to keep the readers intrigued or something along the line. But, I just became bored and irritated. Still, it was worth a read for like 60 chapters.
Reveal Spoiler No logic and Insain shit happens all the time the author throws bullshit at bullshit and says it natural… nothing ever goes right and the mc has lost and gained all his power over and over again it’s stupid just take all his power and be done with it… I had hope when the whole system reveal part came but… the story’s insanity and no logic ruins it… The first arc before he leaves the continent is on / dies and comes back… (when he should have just stayed dead or let system revive him but no had to make bullshit be ur anwser why couldn’t his mother just kill herself to make mc feel better or give us a fucking direction) The plot holes are insain. One moment he’s ready to kill everyone and is abt too but then spares them and now his hated enemies now work for him… if ik this mc was this much of a bitch I would have never read it. Solid ig for quality of writting otherwise it all goes down hill. Ch 70 and onward make no sense and this world should just delate itself…. Wasn’t that the logic and explanation behind where the system came from and its history lmao
Reveal Spoiler The story is overly complicated and frustrating. I don't understand why the author keeps complicating the protagonist's second life. If his first life was terrible, his second life should be about him just steamrolling over everyone. Instead, we have a mysterious family background, unexplained mysterious characters, and the MC making stupid decisions like not using his slave seal on everyone. What is the point of the novel? Just see mc going trough all the shit again? if that's the case we could just read his 1 life. Many elements are confusing, especially since each chapter includes flashbacks from different characters without clearly indicating the timeline. Moreover, most of the heroines are portrayed as -1000 IQ. I understand the concept of fate/plot armor, but the execution here is excessive and disappointing. P.S: most of the time, the MC's plans are confusing and lack clarity. The author doesn't adequately explain the main character's thoughts and motivations, which forces readers to piece things together without having all the necessary information. This often makes the protagonist's actions seem utterly foolish because we can't fully understand why they are doing what they're doing.
Reveal Spoiler Author I love the story but please give us a break like you have on the edge of our seats ever since i started reading this like I'm always on the edge of my seat please give us some rest
I've been reading for 36 chapters, and I am still grasping at straws here. I don't know what the characters are doing as the explanations are unclear and the story seems to jump all over the place. I especially don't know much about what happens after the time skip. I thought it was good but slowly losing interest. Lmk if in the later chapters, the story becomes more concise.
I have so many questions about the things happening and author gives no explanations. like how the mc knew so many things that he predicted, author never explains. I read 120 chapand seriously I won't be surprised if I find the author blew the entire planet and started a whole different story for the mc bruh. But still I liked the story but slowly mc clearly is shown to be favoring girls. How is he a villain? I started reading the story on the premise that mc would be a villain and he isn't as the story is passing. I am dropping it now after reading 120 chapters.
The novel is insane. Logic non existent. Consistency is something that happens in other stories. Characters are highly unrelatable (except for the cat girl, the Sylvester healer girl and Luna to an extent). MC is just a psycho. Yes, he was betrayed. Yes, I like his revenge, and his convoluted and layered ploys are pretty good. But he treats everyone as a tool or as a means to an end, even the good ones (those two). There is an insane amount of time skips and flashbacks. The plot is complex and clever, and the author must have put in a lot of work, but most things are delivered in such a chaotic way, that half the events don't make sense at all.
Author you should add more characters in character description sometimes I want to see character for comparison with story but they are not present
One of the best novels I have read the story is really interesting and I like the character of ryuk very much and the world back is also very good. Bit I have just one complaint to the author the story is moving very, very slow from titanora arc upto the latest chapters of the jade dominion. Like it just takes them forever to arrive at the upper town and in between they meet just one or two important characters while the others are just useless characters with chapters wasted on them like those four thugs. And some times the chapters just ends 😞in some useless informations that we do not need at all. And what about his revenge we are hardly seeing any revenge now at all. I just hope you fast thing up a little bit because chapters of jade dominion arc are getting boring to read. I'm at chapter 291 so i hope that the upcoming chapters are interesting to read. Overall the novel is great and definitely unique with great storyline. 👍 i hope the author updates chapter more frequently. And please don't drop this novel author it is very good. So keep up the good work author and thanks for the novel.
Hey author is he goona take the heroines in the past or not . Or he gonna go for new heroines?
Unusually for a ‘revenge’ story, what you see on the cover is not what you get. After a certain point, the revenge plot is pretty much abandoned for a mystical political thing. Can’t say I was expecting it, but there’s only so much you can milk out of the original premise. Still, it gets very cluttered and struggles to balance all the plates it’s spinning. It would be fine if I could binge it, but the release schedule works against it. Old information becomes plot critical… but you haven’t thought about it in 3 months. So yah, not my cup of tea but it is a pretty good read. Maybe I’ll pick it up when/if it’s finished
great novel! i definitely would continue reading it if only the cost for each chapter weren't that expensive. forgive me author
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I give this novel 5 stars, the reason? why I love the misunderstandings and the indescribable sensation that it causes, bringing together several emotions in the same character, especially how these emotions affect the protagonist or the heroine, which is neither love nor hate. I like misunderstandings due to unnecessary but at the same time necessary tragedy, the author I don't know if he forgives the heroines but the development is not bad for the 16 chapters that I read. Good job ❤️🩹🫀
So the MC took revenge on the heroines it’s good for me but I want to know if he will take revenge on his mother since she the one that let like half of the heroines to betrayed him and she knew they will attack him but did nothing
Reveal Spoiler Honestly i really like how well this is written and give props to author for how good it is. The only thing that ruins it for me is author stating mc won't forgive them. I'm a sucker for happy endings where mc and harem reconcile and forgive each other lol. So it's sad when after all of them loving eachother it just ends bitterly. Good novel tho none the less
No words author just review by seeing title i am going tp read it i hope it will be good
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Reveal Spoiler Till chapter 23, mc has embraced his villain path and hasn't forgive any of the heroines. There is some mystery with few of the heroines and mc got his thick plot armor as well but overall a great novel. As a pro Kr and Cn regret misunderstanding harem novel reader. this would be classified as pretty high tier in that regard just because mc aint bishing out on making the heroines life as miserable as possible for his sadism. I personally dont think mc in this life will kill the heroines but just push them to suicide or something, or maybe just torment them enough and later on have them join the harem as secondary wives. Mc is pretty strong but has next to no information about the top dogs of the world even though in previous life he killed millions after millions and became a tyrant and still dont know anything worthwhile about the so called top families in other continent. I will personally stop here just to see how it ends before i continue, i have been burned by way too many regret novels and their trashy heroic mc ends :< Anyway if you are fine with mystery of the plot and things being explained slowly, you can try this novel.
My honest Review: To be honest with you I only read this novel in about chapter 13 or so and it was quite good and I recommend this one if you like a revenge with a emotional plot
Although it’s a emotional roller coaster, sometimes I’m frustrated other times sad or angry. It’s a really good book, the author’s ability to drag you into the story is phenomenal.
is it just making heroine regret and them asking forgiveness type novel? Will the mc get any girl (not heroine though)?
What I most like about this story is one think. [REVENGE] although MC doesn't do it intentionally, just seeing the regret and pain of the betrayal is satisfying.(it give thensame taste as Remarried Empress)
ok so updated review. Just wow.......................................................................................................................
Well just awesome. I've read authors other work too. Both are masterpieces, absolutely stunning. I don't do many reviews but every bit worth it. Keep up the work my G
I FREAKING love this book! The MC is the full embodiment of "F**k these bishes" He was betrayed and unlike most "reincarneted villians" he didn't just let them suffer a little and then take them back or Manipulates them into being his Slaves. He straight-up destroys the ones who hurt him not only physically but mentally as well and makes those hypocritical bishes pay. It is quite refreshing and makes my day!
Just binged all the way to chapter 357 in the span of 3 days. Had initial dropped the book at chap 97 but restarted it months later from chap 1. I was initial frustrated due to these types of books that love to keep the mc in the dark constantly at every step and make him feel powerless. Not gonna lie it was struggle to read island arc. And the constant ploys of drishti and other powerful individuals. But things really started to catch my interest when an actual female lead with depth was introduced with esme and how the author started to let mc not be a total punching bag to higher powers as we have seen for most of the novel. I do also like how the mc is starting to show more emotion as timea goes on. He was a bit edgy initially but he was just betrayed lol.i do hope that it doesnt turn into a mindless r18 novel now that dual cultivation was introduced. I was a bit disappointed that mc first relations in this timeline wasnt with a fiance or other prominent female figure, hopefully it doesnt turn into a pokemon style harem. Also as crazy as she is im hoping Diana will become apart of the harem and that there will be some more character progression on her end. Anyways those where some of my thoughts and personal opinions on the novel. Overall there is alot of junk on this website but this isnt one of thise. This book is shaping into something that can be thousands of chapters with how be have barely scratched the surface of the world let alone outside it. I will continue to look foward to weekly updates. Its amazing how many well performing books the author is doing at once, keep up the good work!!!
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