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Its a good story it could be better with more updates and a bit more info about his friends but its a good story nevertheless so keep it going
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So far this has been a very great read the chapter's are timely and the way the author combines two different genres is excellent. Keep up the good work
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....................................................Just another Naruto fanfiction...............................................................................................
I find this fun and funny to read 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾🤟👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾🤟👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾👊🏾🤟
Just amazing. This book had me from the beginning. This book got better as it progressed. I can't wait for more. I need more. I can't wait to read what happens next
cool idea, story has good potential, but the writing is extremely off-putting. ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Write fast Best story ever Nice fusion of star war power and naruto 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤😍😍😍😍❤❤
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Storey is good but need some space as it is quite hard to read some of the paragraph which is really long. Other than that all ate very good as MC is not op and nor weak. Keep up the good works.
So far 5/5 everything is in right place OP MC ,OC fiancé. Reincarnation in konoha is so fucking cliché and wave mission which is cannon is - but at least you change something and end it quickly. Also I don't understand why make Naruto relative he is not MC and nobody give a single flying **** about him anymore. At least you pay more time writing relationships and not plot which we already good know. Keep this up and maybe create you own orginal plot in this amazing ninja world.
continue in this same rhythm and do not stop writing. View More...........................................................................................................
this novel is phenomenal and very funny and yet is very good for reading and fun I hope you continue in this same rhythm and do not stop writing.
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