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This is good, really unique. However, I need more chapters. I will post another review when I have at least 15 chapters to read in a binge. So, Author-san, I am waiting for you.
I really love your story and the characters. And I like the way you don't add Harem because I'm not a huge fan.
There’s a lot of good stories recently, I say this book is one of them. I can see the potential, and this book would soon become popular. This work is also easy to read and understand. The main character has his own persona which positively drives the story. I recommend this book, this is well written. Sincerely, Allen_Clay012
liking what I have seen so far, I'm quite interested at where this story is going. The first chapter really was quite catchy to be honest, and I don't think anyone has used this vengeance system concept before. Worldbuilding is great as well. Will be expecting more improvement in characters description though, but well done author 🪶
all I could say is that it has an interesting concept and design. The main character and the system also has a slightly funny conversation which is suitable for me because I don't like too much comedy or seriousness. Overall it has great potential definitely should try it!
The story is a nice read because the writing is good, you won't frown from the grammar and the narration is engaging, the characters' conversations are flowing smoothly and not boring. Give it a try, everyone!
Alright, this story is super awesome! The MC is a cool and funny character. And plus, the writer has an incredible style of writing. Honestly, this is one of the best system books I've read. I hope you go places with this story. I believe you will.
First of all attractive cover . The start of story is really strong to pull the readers into the story . The story unfold before my eyes as I continued on. It's really a good story with interesting plot and characters . Recommended to everyone
Love the story, could only imagine what it must be like to kill your own friend, poor Bruce. Author made the description easy to understand. A good book with potential for real.. ..
It's a good story although I have trouble understanding the description type of story. Ugh, my bad, I'm not native and I'm not used to reading long descriptions with lots of allusions. But from the dialog I read in some chapters, this is interesting and could be a fresh idea. I've never read a story with a system that is alive and can speak so fluently. Keep up the good work to keep updating this story! ❤💛💜
It's quite refreshing to see very capable and talented writers. I love what I've seen so far, especially the worldbuilding and writing itself. I'll like to see more of Aethens as I read further. My main review will come in a bit 🙏🏼. As for now, it's perfect.
The writing quality of this author is top tier… the words flow so smoothly that you’re sucked into the world of this book. Few chapters in, but this story has already made its mark. I haven’t read something like this before, but I am thoroughly enjoying myself with this one.
I could give this book hundred stars if possible!!!Couldn't believe there were no more chapters to read after I reached the end. Waiting for an update from my amazing author.I love love love love love this book.Definitely going to follow it to the end🙌🙌🥰Already added it in my library 😉
Hey folks! So the shameless author is here, shamelessly giving my own work a big pat on the back. Yep I know, Shamelessness level: Expert! But hey, if you've got any questions about the novel, don't be shy! Ask away and I'll do my best to answer... well, as long as the questions make sense, that is.
Need more chapters author😂, pretty hooked at the revenge part, still waiting for more updates.
This is good, really unique. However, I need more chapters. I will post another review when I have at least 15 chapters to read in a binge. So, Author-san, I am waiting for you.
I really love your story and the characters. And I like the way you don't add Harem because I'm not a huge fan.
There’s a lot of good stories recently, I say this book is one of them. I can see the potential, and this book would soon become popular. This work is also easy to read and understand. The main character has his own persona which positively drives the story. I recommend this book, this is well written. Sincerely, Allen_Clay012
liking what I have seen so far, I'm quite interested at where this story is going. The first chapter really was quite catchy to be honest, and I don't think anyone has used this vengeance system concept before. Worldbuilding is great as well. Will be expecting more improvement in characters description though, but well done author 🪶
all I could say is that it has an interesting concept and design. The main character and the system also has a slightly funny conversation which is suitable for me because I don't like too much comedy or seriousness. Overall it has great potential definitely should try it!
The story is a nice read because the writing is good, you won't frown from the grammar and the narration is engaging, the characters' conversations are flowing smoothly and not boring. Give it a try, everyone!
Alright, this story is super awesome! The MC is a cool and funny character. And plus, the writer has an incredible style of writing. Honestly, this is one of the best system books I've read. I hope you go places with this story. I believe you will.
First of all attractive cover . The start of story is really strong to pull the readers into the story . The story unfold before my eyes as I continued on. It's really a good story with interesting plot and characters . Recommended to everyone
Love the story, could only imagine what it must be like to kill your own friend, poor Bruce. Author made the description easy to understand. A good book with potential for real.. ..
It's a good story although I have trouble understanding the description type of story. Ugh, my bad, I'm not native and I'm not used to reading long descriptions with lots of allusions. But from the dialog I read in some chapters, this is interesting and could be a fresh idea. I've never read a story with a system that is alive and can speak so fluently. Keep up the good work to keep updating this story! ❤💛💜
It's quite refreshing to see very capable and talented writers. I love what I've seen so far, especially the worldbuilding and writing itself. I'll like to see more of Aethens as I read further. My main review will come in a bit 🙏🏼. As for now, it's perfect.
The writing quality of this author is top tier… the words flow so smoothly that you’re sucked into the world of this book. Few chapters in, but this story has already made its mark. I haven’t read something like this before, but I am thoroughly enjoying myself with this one.
I could give this book hundred stars if possible!!!Couldn't believe there were no more chapters to read after I reached the end. Waiting for an update from my amazing author.I love love love love love this book.Definitely going to follow it to the end🙌🙌🥰Already added it in my library 😉
Hey folks! So the shameless author is here, shamelessly giving my own work a big pat on the back. Yep I know, Shamelessness level: Expert! But hey, if you've got any questions about the novel, don't be shy! Ask away and I'll do my best to answer... well, as long as the questions make sense, that is.
Need more chapters author😂, pretty hooked at the revenge part, still waiting for more updates.