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Actually a nice read, only problem was on 2 chapters the explanations for the fights weren't good but everything else works.
Other than the grammar the fic is trash. For some reason mc want to go on a goose Chase and find a way to go back to his world even if he is in a extremely low fantasy world, already passed countless years and can't forget he have another body. Chance is that if he go back everyone will be dead already. And the worst of it is that auhtor don't make mc think about any of these questions, nor author explain why mc reached the logic that he have a chance to go back. In the end a fic that synopses make you want to read but 2 chapter already want to make you rage quit by how frustanting and lack in details it is
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well done, this is what I was going for. something nice and easy but still quite entertaining
This story is terrible. while the writing quality is average the way that the author goes about trying to build the MC leaves much to be desired. From not having the guts to choose between being a tamer or hunter to trying to use gods as an excuse when his 'new family' doesn't want him to leave. The MC is so stuck in the thought that he can somehow find a way beck to his original world that he can't develop in the current one. HTTYD is a world with little to no concept of magic so the thought of being able to do the impossible and traversing at least worlds, if not universes, without settling down and understanding how to get stronger in the new world is ludicrous. What I think the author should to is rewrite the first couple of chapters where the MC is forced to think about how to survive the current world first, probably through a dragon attack, and then as he ages from child to teen come to terms that he doesn't have the power to determine when or how to get home so he can stop focusing on that. I would also have MC sneak out on a merchant ship after his family refused to let him leave rather than try to use the gods as an excuse.
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good story so far but we don't know how the Mc look author post a picture of him please
finally a fanfic for how you train your dragon keep up the good work author
So far it’s good, I’d like to give a suggestion. Adding pictures for how you think your character looks and your ocs would be nice.
Irei ler com um pouco de expectativa, sempre que vejo uma sinopse onde diz que o Mc tá querendo voltar pro mundo original eu dropo na hora, tipo quem em sã consciência iria querer voltar pra terra?. Mas irei dar uma chance dessa vez.
Thank you you so much for making this Masterpiece 🤩🤩🤩😀🤩😀🤩 and pls don't drop it.
It is translated. Writing quality is passable considering the level of the page. Updates are constant and may change in the future. The characters leave a lot to be desired since we have no information about anything except the most basic until chapter 13. The development of the story is very slow and with no development. The world is blank, only 3 factions have been shown, the rest are blank. Good idea but with too many things wasted on the protagonist he has not done anything to improve his life of all the things you have to earn money you draw drawings.That is the most wasted 16 years that is seen and shows none of the common or basic knowledge of the previous life. Good idea but it makes you a little angry at all the lost potential. Good luck
It's a 5 stars just because of how rare it is to see a how to train your dragon novel. hoping it's a good read
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I had the absolute pleasure of coming across a fanfic that, without a doubt, deserves all five stars possible. This well-written, captivating story is a real treasure trove for fans of the universe it's based on. One of the first things that caught my attention was the quality of the writing. The author or author is skilled in creating engaging dialogues and detailed descriptions, which made me feel like I was inside the story. The narrative flows smoothly, maintaining a steady pace that left me eager to find out what would happen next. The characters are extremely well developed and realistic. Each of them has their own distinct personality and clear motivations, which makes them easily identifiable and memorable. In addition, the interaction between the characters is believable and exciting, creating strong ties and interesting conflicts throughout the plot. Finally, I would like to mention the dedication and commitment of the author or author to regularly update the fanfic. Nothing is more frustrating than getting caught up in a story and then waiting months for a new update. Fortunately, this isn't an issue with this fanfic, as the author or author maintains a consistent schedule, which makes for a seamless and immersive reading experience. In summary, this fanfic deserves all five stars and more. I strongly recommend reading this extraordinary story to all fans who are passionate about how to train your dragon. I apologize if my grammar is bad because I'm still learning English because it's not my native language
Look big dawg ima be real rn this is five stars bc it’s a HOTYD fic I also wanted to no what’ your update schedule bc I love these types of fics keep uploading and have my stones
Wish I could raise zero so I could balance out all the unjust five star reviews
Actually a nice read, only problem was on 2 chapters the explanations for the fights weren't good but everything else works.
Other than the grammar the fic is trash. For some reason mc want to go on a goose Chase and find a way to go back to his world even if he is in a extremely low fantasy world, already passed countless years and can't forget he have another body. Chance is that if he go back everyone will be dead already. And the worst of it is that auhtor don't make mc think about any of these questions, nor author explain why mc reached the logic that he have a chance to go back. In the end a fic that synopses make you want to read but 2 chapter already want to make you rage quit by how frustanting and lack in details it is
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well done, this is what I was going for. something nice and easy but still quite entertaining
This story is terrible. while the writing quality is average the way that the author goes about trying to build the MC leaves much to be desired. From not having the guts to choose between being a tamer or hunter to trying to use gods as an excuse when his 'new family' doesn't want him to leave. The MC is so stuck in the thought that he can somehow find a way beck to his original world that he can't develop in the current one. HTTYD is a world with little to no concept of magic so the thought of being able to do the impossible and traversing at least worlds, if not universes, without settling down and understanding how to get stronger in the new world is ludicrous. What I think the author should to is rewrite the first couple of chapters where the MC is forced to think about how to survive the current world first, probably through a dragon attack, and then as he ages from child to teen come to terms that he doesn't have the power to determine when or how to get home so he can stop focusing on that. I would also have MC sneak out on a merchant ship after his family refused to let him leave rather than try to use the gods as an excuse.
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Reveal Spoiler This is a bland first work by a novice author, but you lack descriptions.................................................... b........б...............,.... .
good story so far but we don't know how the Mc look author post a picture of him please
finally a fanfic for how you train your dragon keep up the good work author
So far it’s good, I’d like to give a suggestion. Adding pictures for how you think your character looks and your ocs would be nice.
Irei ler com um pouco de expectativa, sempre que vejo uma sinopse onde diz que o Mc tá querendo voltar pro mundo original eu dropo na hora, tipo quem em sã consciência iria querer voltar pra terra?. Mas irei dar uma chance dessa vez.
Thank you you so much for making this Masterpiece 🤩🤩🤩😀🤩😀🤩 and pls don't drop it.
It is translated. Writing quality is passable considering the level of the page. Updates are constant and may change in the future. The characters leave a lot to be desired since we have no information about anything except the most basic until chapter 13. The development of the story is very slow and with no development. The world is blank, only 3 factions have been shown, the rest are blank. Good idea but with too many things wasted on the protagonist he has not done anything to improve his life of all the things you have to earn money you draw drawings.That is the most wasted 16 years that is seen and shows none of the common or basic knowledge of the previous life. Good idea but it makes you a little angry at all the lost potential. Good luck
It's a 5 stars just because of how rare it is to see a how to train your dragon novel. hoping it's a good read
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I had the absolute pleasure of coming across a fanfic that, without a doubt, deserves all five stars possible. This well-written, captivating story is a real treasure trove for fans of the universe it's based on. One of the first things that caught my attention was the quality of the writing. The author or author is skilled in creating engaging dialogues and detailed descriptions, which made me feel like I was inside the story. The narrative flows smoothly, maintaining a steady pace that left me eager to find out what would happen next. The characters are extremely well developed and realistic. Each of them has their own distinct personality and clear motivations, which makes them easily identifiable and memorable. In addition, the interaction between the characters is believable and exciting, creating strong ties and interesting conflicts throughout the plot. Finally, I would like to mention the dedication and commitment of the author or author to regularly update the fanfic. Nothing is more frustrating than getting caught up in a story and then waiting months for a new update. Fortunately, this isn't an issue with this fanfic, as the author or author maintains a consistent schedule, which makes for a seamless and immersive reading experience. In summary, this fanfic deserves all five stars and more. I strongly recommend reading this extraordinary story to all fans who are passionate about how to train your dragon. I apologize if my grammar is bad because I'm still learning English because it's not my native language
Look big dawg ima be real rn this is five stars bc it’s a HOTYD fic I also wanted to no what’ your update schedule bc I love these types of fics keep uploading and have my stones
Wish I could raise zero so I could balance out all the unjust five star reviews