Well the story is still quite new with only a few chapters as of this moment. The writing quality is decent in the sense that it's easy to read. The plot is okay, so far it somewhat feels ( it starts ) like many Spanish pokeon fanfics that you would hear in YouTube or read in Wattpad, no offense to the author, although I'll give it some points for not giving the Mc op cheats at the get go. My only real complain is how shorts the chapters are in which I understand as I belive that the author claim he was just testing the water with this book but I personally feel that in my opinion, these 4 - 5 chapters could've been In one chapter. Well regardless, I'm gonna give the book a 4.2 star as it got potential but it depends on what the author does with the story that it can either make it better or worse. If you're reading this, I recommend that you read when the author post at least 8 chapters to better see the plot and pace of the story.
shameless offer review here, I think I'm gonna try and make this story at least 3-4 stars, new readers. please give your honest opinion about the choices I make or my writing style, I appreciate you peoples opinion and it would help me alot to improve
Well the story is still quite new with only a few chapters as of this moment. The writing quality is decent in the sense that it's easy to read. The plot is okay, so far it somewhat feels ( it starts ) like many Spanish pokeon fanfics that you would hear in YouTube or read in Wattpad, no offense to the author, although I'll give it some points for not giving the Mc op cheats at the get go. My only real complain is how shorts the chapters are in which I understand as I belive that the author claim he was just testing the water with this book but I personally feel that in my opinion, these 4 - 5 chapters could've been In one chapter. Well regardless, I'm gonna give the book a 4.2 star as it got potential but it depends on what the author does with the story that it can either make it better or worse. If you're reading this, I recommend that you read when the author post at least 8 chapters to better see the plot and pace of the story.
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