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A young man died and was reborn in the world of original. follow as he empower himself and his siblings to the very peak of this world.
my first writing a fanfic, if you have any ideas or suggestions, please them.
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I don't own anything pertaining the originals and only my OC.
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Best originals fanfic I have read. I am ruting for u author u get what it means to be an originals. Hope u do not drop the story.🤞 good luck with the story (ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!!)
My original review was erased by Webnovel’s janky phone UI, but here’s a tl;dr review. As of Ch 5: 2.8/5 There are frequent tense shifts and a flagrant lack of punctuation. I find this difficult to read, and many people who don’t have English as their first language will agree. The plot is somewhat novel but there are a few plotpoints that feel forced and cringe-inducing (his discussions with God and the events with MC’s father). This is a middle-of-the-pack webnovel, but I hope the author continues with it so they can improve their writing skills and grasp of English.
u guys do realise by the time the originals plot actually starts there gonna be so op there gonna 1 tap everyone
author's shameless review.this fanfic is all about the OC and his siblings, not everything is going to follow the canon, I'm going to change something and save whoever I deem savable.I hope you enjoy your time.
Forcing events a twisting the laws of magic so that you can have a "BAD GUY" they fight is lame. I would rather have them become OP then have a lame bad guy show down or him annoying them all the time.
Overall good reading material. But there's some very forced events. And some scenes just doesn't make sense. Like Esther's obsession over killing vampires, they didn't kill her or did any heinous things when she was alive. Freya being immortal witch also doesn't make sense.
Great fic,I really enjoyed it I hope you don't drop it author, and I personally recommend anyone you have this fic to read, you will love it, it is completely different from the other fanfic out there.
It's actually very good.... keep it up....... .......,..............................................................................................................,..,''''''''''''......................
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Besides the first couple of chapters with grammar this is an amazing story and I highly recommend !!
The best originals fanfic I've read in a while, I am rooting for you author and keep up the good work, thank you [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]