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it's better to just watch a resume of Greek mythology than read this garbage script of canon Myth
Incredible. Writing a book of my own about the same character/setting, I was blown away by what you had. Your Zeus felt like a leader and a powerful one at that. And the battle on the island had me pumped. It was so cool seeing what you did for Titanomachy. And I had been taking notes to add to my story. Hope you continue after the war. Great story!
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Well it is really disappointing its same as original with just a self insert along with no creativity in using his powers man if you are a reincarnated person you will definitely steal other works moves or try do develop your abilities.
So far the story was pretty bland and i honestly thought this Zeus would be better then the original one but he isn’t. He’s weak and apparently can’t control lightning without his weapon and that honestly sucks and another thing i didn’t like was he doesn’t have his past memories. Someone else explained a bit more below so read their review on the story as well considering I’m not the best when it comes to explaining some other things 😅
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So far I only have praise for this work. It is still in beginning and is full of potential.[img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins] .Putting theses emoticons to fill the requirement of words.
I haven't read this, but I have a question will mc keep Zeus rapist attitude? cause if not then I will just drop it
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imo it could be better. with the way the plot is going it would be just like og greek mythology with just a little better zeus mc. Dialogue interactions are lacking and MC is pretty boring so far. little to no grammar mistakes ill give it that. all in all best wishes author, keep going.
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Once again another Zeus fanfic where MC from the modern world seemingly forgets his past memories. It's like there was no need for reincarnation. Just give the original Zeus a diary with all future events and it will be the same as now. I would say the writing quality is good just because there were minimal grammar errors but there are no good descriptions. The events read out like a history script. The MC also strangly seems accustomed to this new world and his powers, we never get to know how he trained, what he liked, and whether he was able to develop his powers more than the original Zeus or not. Very bland story and seems more like a history nerd's wish to make Zeus slightly different. Sadly, he chose to use the reincarnation trope but it was not well implemented.
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I haven't read it yet I'll wait until after the titanomachy because most stores like this are dropped during it or shortly after it but I'll give you 5 star's for effort
Doesn't Zeus have lightning powers since he is the god of the sky? The fight between Zeus and kampe was cool but I feel like you should've let him use his inherit abilities as a god.
Hi Author here, I hope you all enjoy this new book I’ve posted, criticisms are welcome as long as they are instructive. Thank you.
It’s just the titan war basically the same as has been told thousands of times. The main character is just Zeus the reincarnation was bait. 40 chapters and there is no story, so frustrating
it's better to just watch a resume of Greek mythology than read this garbage script of canon Myth
Incredible. Writing a book of my own about the same character/setting, I was blown away by what you had. Your Zeus felt like a leader and a powerful one at that. And the battle on the island had me pumped. It was so cool seeing what you did for Titanomachy. And I had been taking notes to add to my story. Hope you continue after the war. Great story!
Reveal Spoiler Well it is really disappointing its same as original with just a self insert along with no creativity in using his powers man if you are a reincarnated person you will definitely steal other works moves or try do develop your abilities.
So far the story was pretty bland and i honestly thought this Zeus would be better then the original one but he isn’t. He’s weak and apparently can’t control lightning without his weapon and that honestly sucks and another thing i didn’t like was he doesn’t have his past memories. Someone else explained a bit more below so read their review on the story as well considering I’m not the best when it comes to explaining some other things 😅
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Reveal Spoiler So far I only have praise for this work. It is still in beginning and is full of potential.[img=coins][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins] .Putting theses emoticons to fill the requirement of words.
I haven't read this, but I have a question will mc keep Zeus rapist attitude? cause if not then I will just drop it
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imo it could be better. with the way the plot is going it would be just like og greek mythology with just a little better zeus mc. Dialogue interactions are lacking and MC is pretty boring so far. little to no grammar mistakes ill give it that. all in all best wishes author, keep going.
Reveal Spoiler Once again another Zeus fanfic where MC from the modern world seemingly forgets his past memories. It's like there was no need for reincarnation. Just give the original Zeus a diary with all future events and it will be the same as now. I would say the writing quality is good just because there were minimal grammar errors but there are no good descriptions. The events read out like a history script. The MC also strangly seems accustomed to this new world and his powers, we never get to know how he trained, what he liked, and whether he was able to develop his powers more than the original Zeus or not. Very bland story and seems more like a history nerd's wish to make Zeus slightly different. Sadly, he chose to use the reincarnation trope but it was not well implemented.
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I haven't read it yet I'll wait until after the titanomachy because most stores like this are dropped during it or shortly after it but I'll give you 5 star's for effort
Doesn't Zeus have lightning powers since he is the god of the sky? The fight between Zeus and kampe was cool but I feel like you should've let him use his inherit abilities as a god.
Hi Author here, I hope you all enjoy this new book I’ve posted, criticisms are welcome as long as they are instructive. Thank you.
It’s just the titan war basically the same as has been told thousands of times. The main character is just Zeus the reincarnation was bait. 40 chapters and there is no story, so frustrating