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hey Arthur I hope you're alive and and I hope you do continue with this story please don't leave the story unfinished
This fanfic is a very good one I got sent to the hospital and diagnose with overdose of drugs......... ..... ........................... ..... ..... .............. .....
well well well this is just fuc**ng amazing .no confusion .no bs .no drama .no harem (guys atlast a good no harem )
Overall, it's alright. Description could be a lot more... descriptive. Also the way you write the dialogue with 'character-text' is really annoying to read. Just use "text" without mentioning the character or "text" - character, New line. Or Character: text. Or something similar.
Hey, author I know, it's been 4 months, but I'll say it again. Please continue this novel
hey Arthur I hope you're alive and and I hope you do continue with this story please don't leave the story unfinished
This fanfic is a very good one I got sent to the hospital and diagnose with overdose of drugs......... ..... ........................... ..... ..... .............. .....
well well well this is just fuc**ng amazing .no confusion .no bs .no drama .no harem (guys atlast a good no harem )
Overall, it's alright. Description could be a lot more... descriptive. Also the way you write the dialogue with 'character-text' is really annoying to read. Just use "text" without mentioning the character or "text" - character, New line. Or Character: text. Or something similar.
Hey, author I know, it's been 4 months, but I'll say it again. Please continue this novel