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I see that it has the Yuri tag and not the harem tag, so at least I hope it stays that way. If it has romance, I hope you don't make the protagonist the passive one. Many stories are ruined like that, leaving the protagonist obeying her partner :'v As for the story, I really like this type of style:")
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It starts off good and a bit fast paced but around 100 chapters or so it completely transformed into a new and different story, for example, Emily is supposed to be reborn into this world yet we have a childhood friend of hers??? , the characters Lilith and all of her trustable advisors just disappear?? without any explanation, it becomes about shadowlands and whatnot when it's not , they are dragons and demons yet there is not one mention of it anywhere in the latest chapters?? It feels like the author got bored and is plagiarising the story from someone else while changing only the names because the newer chapters don't actually match the tone, setting, world , characters of the story since the beginning at all, it has great potential but the author ruined it.
Reveal Spoiler I see that it has the Yuri tag and not the harem tag, so at least I hope it stays that way. If it has romance, I hope you don't make the protagonist the passive one. Many stories are ruined like that, leaving the protagonist obeying her partner :'v As for the story, I really like this type of style:")
i will like to help you on how to improve your book performance publications profitability but am not sure if you on any social media platform to discuss further
It starts off good and a bit fast paced but around 100 chapters or so it completely transformed into a new and different story, for example, Emily is supposed to be reborn into this world yet we have a childhood friend of hers??? , the characters Lilith and all of her trustable advisors just disappear?? without any explanation, it becomes about shadowlands and whatnot when it's not , they are dragons and demons yet there is not one mention of it anywhere in the latest chapters?? It feels like the author got bored and is plagiarising the story from someone else while changing only the names because the newer chapters don't actually match the tone, setting, world , characters of the story since the beginning at all, it has great potential but the author ruined it.
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