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Fleurbear

I'm not good at writing reviews but here it goes. So I looooooove this book so much ( ha my heart is beating with excitement thinking about what happened this latest chapter)! The characters are awesome and the interactions are interesting and funny. The world and the magic has a proper interesting concept that is intriguing. I think that the author is amazing and puts really pretty and interesting ways of describing the situation and what is happening. Someone in the comments once complained about the slow way it was progressing but I love every chapter and sometimes the chapters build up ******* and when the scheme is revealed it is soooo satisfying! I really recommend that for you to read it, it's just so good. I get exited waiting for the next chapter! (Was that an okay review? It was my fist one so sorry if I wasn't able to get across what it's like, but I think you should really read it and give the author support as this is a beautiful book!)

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EGOTISTICAL438

π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒢𝓉𝒽𝓉𝒢𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“Œπ’Άπ“Ž 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’½π‘œπ“‡ π’Έπ‘œπ“ƒπ“‹π‘’π“Žπ“ˆ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’»π‘’π‘’π“π’Ύπ“ƒπ‘”π“ˆ π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Έπ’½π’Άπ“‡π’Άπ’Έπ“‰π‘’π“‡π“ˆ 𝒢𝓇𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œ π“‡π‘’π’Άπ“π’Ύπ“ˆπ“‰π’Ύπ’Έ 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π‘’π“‚π‘œπ“‰π’Ύπ‘œπ“ƒπ“ˆ , 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝓅𝒢𝒾𝓃, 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π’½π“Šπ“‡π“‰, 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝒾𝓉, π“Œπ’½π’Ύπ’Έπ’½ π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒢𝓂𝒢𝓏𝒾𝓃𝑔 π“‰π‘œ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π‘’π“‡π‘’ 𝐼 𝒽𝒢𝓋𝑒 π“ƒπ‘œ π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‰π‘œ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ’Έπ“‡π’Ύπ’·π‘’ 𝒾𝓉. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ήπ‘œπ‘’π“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 π“Šπ“… π“‰π‘œ 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ 𝓇𝒢𝓃𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝒾𝓉 π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ 𝒢 5 π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝒢 4 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π’Άπ“‰π‘’π“‹π‘’π“‡. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‹π‘’π“ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ‘’π“‡π“‹π‘’π“ˆ 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝒾𝓉 π“ƒπ‘’π‘’π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‚π‘œπ“‡π‘’ π“…π‘’π‘œπ“…π“π‘’ π“‰π‘œ 𝒢𝓅𝓅𝓇𝑒𝒸𝒾𝒢𝓉𝑒 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π“Ž.

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krysth

First of all, lemme get with the storytelling. The style reminds me of those eerie Brothers Grimm stories I used to read back in High School back when I found out that classic tales actually have a darker original. They give off a similar vibe and I'm really liking it. Though the story progress is a tad bit slow compared to the other stories found on this site, I DO LOVE THE SLOW BURN. In fact, this pace doesn't actually feel all that slow to me. It's actually pretty neat that we get to know more about our MC from their every interaction with other characters. Think of it like a teabag. You don't rush to drink it, you have to let it soak for a bit. MC's thought processes are well planned out and how he gives a peek of the psycho in everyone. I also love the back and forth arguments he has with the original Agnes. You could see that they're learning a bit from each other with every small fight or discussion they have. Though I doubt they'll get to trusting each other fully *wink* AH! Almost forgot, I also appreciate the unique magic system! The whole philosophy thing is genius, not only do you get to play around with a new system (a breath of fresh air from the norm of this site) you also take a shot at building the world while you're at it. Every kingdom/ruler's philosophy tells a bit about the world and it paints a sort of "backdrop" where this story can grow onto. I could talk about it more but it's like 12am and my brain's shutting off from the medication I'm taking so I'll cut it short. The book is just really really swell and I'm thankful for author Hyo's hardwork and efforts to bring this lovely and twisted story to us readers.

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Kannarin

good i cant believe this, 100 out of 10 if only there is more i ma stop now because its night already and im reading this lights off and its making my eyes and head hurts but overall thiz story is good the begining the body and all the delivery the interactions the story itself is quite realustic in a sense that the character are alive not just words

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melancholy_sins0

I FINALLLYY FOUND YOUUUUUUU PLEEASE OH PleEase Don't GEt COntrActEd beFore I finIsh You. i DOn'T wAnNA gO BRokeE. Actually though, Author... I wouldn't mind if you got contracted. I'll support you with my measly, daily power stones. -Thumbs up- Your writing's just my style :D Don't feel pressured though. I'd like anything you'd put on, so don't feel pressured. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd

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Hu_Murphy

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Azurtha
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While definitely a dark tale, it is nonetheless quite captivating. The author, and in turn the main character, both have a luscious vocabulary that drips off the tongue and onto the page, painting a tapestry that takes time to savor its many details. When you think you have the whole story figured out, a new, deeper layer is added to the mix, making it all the more intriguing. Each section of the tale is fraught with excitement and the author has not let the sense of suspense leave the audience's perspective for a moment. A great delve into the deeper, shadier recesses of society, morality, and the human psyche as a whole.

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Uncivilicized

Yeah I'm not gonna write a review, everything has already been said be others. It's a great but short book without much updating stability. However, I can almost guarantee that you will enjoy it while it lasts ^-^ Chapters aren't short either so you've got about a day of great reading material.

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xalsyn
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I like this novel if you want to kill time you can read it. Youvall can always try if this novel is as good as i say ................................................................

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Meowmeowpeow

I love this novel. It’s one if not my favorite one. It’s the one which got me into trying to explore writing my own novel too! It’s just a story with a rich plot and very well though out flow. That’s basically it. My review. Yes it’s just that good you should experience yourself.

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Thisone

Come across this novel in a forum thread on this site. The op wanted recommendations on novels with evil mc, But he also added: "Quick note, novels that just state that mc is evil and then have him do things like saving this girl who will then become a part of their harem/wife for no apparent reason, then proceeding to do all manners of good things, can go die in a hole." But does not seems like the guy who recommended the novel read that part. Because that's exactly was the Mc does in this novel. And i and so sick of it because it's the same as every other novel.

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6AVERAGE

This story is very entertaining and interesting however the author does not update it anymore.Even though the story is no longer updated.I will still continue to support it as this story is different from all those cliche novels.Please come back author πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ™πŸ™

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YAGOOEMON

After stella is death and more depressing story with MC still can use magic , i don't want to continue this story again... But the story is very good but someone like me who like Ganderbander yuri but her first loveinterest die it no for me

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Meowmeowpeow

Alright just to start of this review, I have to say, THIS IS AN AMAZING NOVEL!!! The character development really has backstory to each character and lets you in on their thoughts and how they were brought up. Also how other characters such as one who was only around for small amounts of time, had great backstory and connections albeit a side character had been throughly thought out. The story is amiss of of even any grammar mistakes (well super rare; only have caught ~5) and is done well with proper English; the writing skill of the author definitely makes it easier to read and is definitely pro level writing (author to publish this lol)! The world even is shown with problems and the reader is slowly brought up to speed with the latest news and information of their surroundings which shows exceptional writing skill and design of the novel. Really!! This book is definitely on pro level and you definitely should give this novel a go! TLDR: Pro level book with amazing development and is a fun read! Little to no grammar issues make understanding easy! Give it a go!!

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sweety009

Like it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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WilliSugars

Pretty good series but I wish the author wasn't so focused on their other seris... you have a perfectly good one right here with people waiting for you to come back :(.

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Fortigan

This story is without any doubt a cut above the rest. It's unique in so many ways that are refreshing to experience. Note that I said "experience" instead of "read", because the way it's written is very immersive. Every scene has a well defined mood due to the descriptive and detailed writing style. There is a good amount of internal monologue in this, which in many stories can be boring, drag on, and make the story feel slow. That is not the case with this one as the main character has incredible perception and deductive reasoning skills that make those monologues intellectually stimulating to read. The process also paints a very vivid picture of their personality and further develops the character. It's not just a matter of them thinking out load, but instead it's more about "what" they are thinking about, "what" they are focusing on, "what" details matter to them, and "what" kind of conclusions they come to. The world is also being developed in the most perfect of ways. The author is not painting themselves into a corner at all, as more and more doors are revealed instead of being closed. There are many directions this story can take, with near limitless growth potential. Expect to be pulled into a brilliant and unconventional mind that has a very unique perspective on a world that is familiar enough for us to relate to, yet different enough to keep our imaginations engaged.

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Lazy_dude

This story is unique and good........but my life is already dark enough.And i'm reading to heal.......so i'll leave this story for awhile and have some fun with heart warming novels.......Keep up the work author, you deserve a title!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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meenavikas446

It's interesting and also very good and really I don't what's going on but I thik this may be interesting because all stories are good in their own way

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sweetpea1972

I'm loving this novel. Thank you author. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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BravoEchoVictor

I love this so much its so great I mean the scenario is cliche trasmigrate to a broken engagement like usual but the fun part is that its a guy it takes what would be another cliche story and makes it fun and new and I love it

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Daoist_DogHead

So far I read only 17 chapters, and I must say I'm impressed by the writing quality and Agnes character. Hope it will go on like this for the rest of the book (and I will miss Estella)!

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DingySongy22

Ohhhhhh isn’t this sooooo exciting. Could this possibly be another great novel. Whoaaaaas!!! Gotta have ta read this story for sure. But I’ll wait until there’s more chapters I hate waiting for new chapters so once there’s more chapters I’ll read. Yah!!!

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jotiu87

This novel takes my interest so do with my other novels regarding rebirth, transmigration w/c is one of my favorite genres.im a diligent and avid reader of this site and I'm always hyper active and quite excited everytime my novels updates..I'm looking forward for this bcoz I believe I definitely enjoy reading this novel.thanks..

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TjunBing

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Lunaprate

While there are minor grammatical errors throughout the chapters, this has been a brilliant book. The plot was one of a kind, and the main character is peculiar, in a good way. At times, it grows dull, but it, as if instinctively and actively, shifts to an interesting view point, which draws you in. The multiple POVs are ******, which is nice, at least for me.

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TjunBing

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cielmylove

Its super good and i love the plot so much i love everythingggga bouttt itttttt youre not gonna regeet reading it because its so good to be true you know the writing quality are super b the character all suited their role and

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peaches22

The story is nice. There is a little yuri mixed in it due to the lead being male in her previous life. I like the story but Im not fond of yuri so I stop reading midway. So far it is a good story...

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StressedSnake

You know a novel is great once you scroll down and all you see are 5 stars everywhere, and they are well deserved, fantastic main character, a unique and fresh approach to some of the world aspects and great pacing. Give it a try, thank me later.

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lumydee
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Fleurbear

I'm not good at writing reviews but here it goes. So I looooooove this book so much ( ha my heart is beating with excitement thinking about what happened this latest chapter)! The characters are awesome and the interactions are interesting and funny. The world and the magic has a proper interesting concept that is intriguing. I think that the author is amazing and puts really pretty and interesting ways of describing the situation and what is happening. Someone in the comments once complained about the slow way it was progressing but I love every chapter and sometimes the chapters build up ******* and when the scheme is revealed it is soooo satisfying! I really recommend that for you to read it, it's just so good. I get exited waiting for the next chapter! (Was that an okay review? It was my fist one so sorry if I wasn't able to get across what it's like, but I think you should really read it and give the author support as this is a beautiful book!)

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EGOTISTICAL438

π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒢𝓉𝒽𝓉𝒢𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“Œπ’Άπ“Ž 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’½π‘œπ“‡ π’Έπ‘œπ“ƒπ“‹π‘’π“Žπ“ˆ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’»π‘’π‘’π“π’Ύπ“ƒπ‘”π“ˆ π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Έπ’½π’Άπ“‡π’Άπ’Έπ“‰π‘’π“‡π“ˆ 𝒢𝓇𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œ π“‡π‘’π’Άπ“π’Ύπ“ˆπ“‰π’Ύπ’Έ 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π‘’π“‚π‘œπ“‰π’Ύπ‘œπ“ƒπ“ˆ , 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝓅𝒢𝒾𝓃, 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π’½π“Šπ“‡π“‰, 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝒾𝓉, π“Œπ’½π’Ύπ’Έπ’½ π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒢𝓂𝒢𝓏𝒾𝓃𝑔 π“‰π‘œ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π‘’π“‡π‘’ 𝐼 𝒽𝒢𝓋𝑒 π“ƒπ‘œ π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‰π‘œ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ’Έπ“‡π’Ύπ’·π‘’ 𝒾𝓉. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ήπ‘œπ‘’π“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 π“Šπ“… π“‰π‘œ 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ 𝓇𝒢𝓃𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝒾𝓉 π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ 𝒢 5 π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝒢 4 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π’Άπ“‰π‘’π“‹π‘’π“‡. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‹π‘’π“ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ‘’π“‡π“‹π‘’π“ˆ 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝒾𝓉 π“ƒπ‘’π‘’π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‚π‘œπ“‡π‘’ π“…π‘’π‘œπ“…π“π‘’ π“‰π‘œ 𝒢𝓅𝓅𝓇𝑒𝒸𝒾𝒢𝓉𝑒 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π“Ž.

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krysth

First of all, lemme get with the storytelling. The style reminds me of those eerie Brothers Grimm stories I used to read back in High School back when I found out that classic tales actually have a darker original. They give off a similar vibe and I'm really liking it. Though the story progress is a tad bit slow compared to the other stories found on this site, I DO LOVE THE SLOW BURN. In fact, this pace doesn't actually feel all that slow to me. It's actually pretty neat that we get to know more about our MC from their every interaction with other characters. Think of it like a teabag. You don't rush to drink it, you have to let it soak for a bit. MC's thought processes are well planned out and how he gives a peek of the psycho in everyone. I also love the back and forth arguments he has with the original Agnes. You could see that they're learning a bit from each other with every small fight or discussion they have. Though I doubt they'll get to trusting each other fully *wink* AH! Almost forgot, I also appreciate the unique magic system! The whole philosophy thing is genius, not only do you get to play around with a new system (a breath of fresh air from the norm of this site) you also take a shot at building the world while you're at it. Every kingdom/ruler's philosophy tells a bit about the world and it paints a sort of "backdrop" where this story can grow onto. I could talk about it more but it's like 12am and my brain's shutting off from the medication I'm taking so I'll cut it short. The book is just really really swell and I'm thankful for author Hyo's hardwork and efforts to bring this lovely and twisted story to us readers.

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Kannarin

good i cant believe this, 100 out of 10 if only there is more i ma stop now because its night already and im reading this lights off and its making my eyes and head hurts but overall thiz story is good the begining the body and all the delivery the interactions the story itself is quite realustic in a sense that the character are alive not just words

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DaoistvsxFZQ

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melancholy_sins0

I FINALLLYY FOUND YOUUUUUUU PLEEASE OH PleEase Don't GEt COntrActEd beFore I finIsh You. i DOn'T wAnNA gO BRokeE. Actually though, Author... I wouldn't mind if you got contracted. I'll support you with my measly, daily power stones. -Thumbs up- Your writing's just my style :D Don't feel pressured though. I'd like anything you'd put on, so don't feel pressured. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd

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Hu_Murphy

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Azurtha
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While definitely a dark tale, it is nonetheless quite captivating. The author, and in turn the main character, both have a luscious vocabulary that drips off the tongue and onto the page, painting a tapestry that takes time to savor its many details. When you think you have the whole story figured out, a new, deeper layer is added to the mix, making it all the more intriguing. Each section of the tale is fraught with excitement and the author has not let the sense of suspense leave the audience's perspective for a moment. A great delve into the deeper, shadier recesses of society, morality, and the human psyche as a whole.

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Uncivilicized

Yeah I'm not gonna write a review, everything has already been said be others. It's a great but short book without much updating stability. However, I can almost guarantee that you will enjoy it while it lasts ^-^ Chapters aren't short either so you've got about a day of great reading material.

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xalsyn
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I like this novel if you want to kill time you can read it. Youvall can always try if this novel is as good as i say ................................................................

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Meowmeowpeow

I love this novel. It’s one if not my favorite one. It’s the one which got me into trying to explore writing my own novel too! It’s just a story with a rich plot and very well though out flow. That’s basically it. My review. Yes it’s just that good you should experience yourself.

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Thisone

Come across this novel in a forum thread on this site. The op wanted recommendations on novels with evil mc, But he also added: "Quick note, novels that just state that mc is evil and then have him do things like saving this girl who will then become a part of their harem/wife for no apparent reason, then proceeding to do all manners of good things, can go die in a hole." But does not seems like the guy who recommended the novel read that part. Because that's exactly was the Mc does in this novel. And i and so sick of it because it's the same as every other novel.

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6AVERAGE

This story is very entertaining and interesting however the author does not update it anymore.Even though the story is no longer updated.I will still continue to support it as this story is different from all those cliche novels.Please come back author πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ™πŸ™

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YAGOOEMON

After stella is death and more depressing story with MC still can use magic , i don't want to continue this story again... But the story is very good but someone like me who like Ganderbander yuri but her first loveinterest die it no for me

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Meowmeowpeow

Alright just to start of this review, I have to say, THIS IS AN AMAZING NOVEL!!! The character development really has backstory to each character and lets you in on their thoughts and how they were brought up. Also how other characters such as one who was only around for small amounts of time, had great backstory and connections albeit a side character had been throughly thought out. The story is amiss of of even any grammar mistakes (well super rare; only have caught ~5) and is done well with proper English; the writing skill of the author definitely makes it easier to read and is definitely pro level writing (author to publish this lol)! The world even is shown with problems and the reader is slowly brought up to speed with the latest news and information of their surroundings which shows exceptional writing skill and design of the novel. Really!! This book is definitely on pro level and you definitely should give this novel a go! TLDR: Pro level book with amazing development and is a fun read! Little to no grammar issues make understanding easy! Give it a go!!

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sweety009

Like it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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WilliSugars

Pretty good series but I wish the author wasn't so focused on their other seris... you have a perfectly good one right here with people waiting for you to come back :(.

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Fortigan

This story is without any doubt a cut above the rest. It's unique in so many ways that are refreshing to experience. Note that I said "experience" instead of "read", because the way it's written is very immersive. Every scene has a well defined mood due to the descriptive and detailed writing style. There is a good amount of internal monologue in this, which in many stories can be boring, drag on, and make the story feel slow. That is not the case with this one as the main character has incredible perception and deductive reasoning skills that make those monologues intellectually stimulating to read. The process also paints a very vivid picture of their personality and further develops the character. It's not just a matter of them thinking out load, but instead it's more about "what" they are thinking about, "what" they are focusing on, "what" details matter to them, and "what" kind of conclusions they come to. The world is also being developed in the most perfect of ways. The author is not painting themselves into a corner at all, as more and more doors are revealed instead of being closed. There are many directions this story can take, with near limitless growth potential. Expect to be pulled into a brilliant and unconventional mind that has a very unique perspective on a world that is familiar enough for us to relate to, yet different enough to keep our imaginations engaged.

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Lazy_dude

This story is unique and good........but my life is already dark enough.And i'm reading to heal.......so i'll leave this story for awhile and have some fun with heart warming novels.......Keep up the work author, you deserve a title!πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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meenavikas446

It's interesting and also very good and really I don't what's going on but I thik this may be interesting because all stories are good in their own way

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sweetpea1972

I'm loving this novel. Thank you author. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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BravoEchoVictor

I love this so much its so great I mean the scenario is cliche trasmigrate to a broken engagement like usual but the fun part is that its a guy it takes what would be another cliche story and makes it fun and new and I love it

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Daoist_DogHead

So far I read only 17 chapters, and I must say I'm impressed by the writing quality and Agnes character. Hope it will go on like this for the rest of the book (and I will miss Estella)!

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DingySongy22

Ohhhhhh isn’t this sooooo exciting. Could this possibly be another great novel. Whoaaaaas!!! Gotta have ta read this story for sure. But I’ll wait until there’s more chapters I hate waiting for new chapters so once there’s more chapters I’ll read. Yah!!!

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jotiu87

This novel takes my interest so do with my other novels regarding rebirth, transmigration w/c is one of my favorite genres.im a diligent and avid reader of this site and I'm always hyper active and quite excited everytime my novels updates..I'm looking forward for this bcoz I believe I definitely enjoy reading this novel.thanks..

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TjunBing

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Lunaprate

While there are minor grammatical errors throughout the chapters, this has been a brilliant book. The plot was one of a kind, and the main character is peculiar, in a good way. At times, it grows dull, but it, as if instinctively and actively, shifts to an interesting view point, which draws you in. The multiple POVs are ******, which is nice, at least for me.

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TjunBing

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cielmylove

Its super good and i love the plot so much i love everythingggga bouttt itttttt youre not gonna regeet reading it because its so good to be true you know the writing quality are super b the character all suited their role and

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peaches22

The story is nice. There is a little yuri mixed in it due to the lead being male in her previous life. I like the story but Im not fond of yuri so I stop reading midway. So far it is a good story...

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StressedSnake

You know a novel is great once you scroll down and all you see are 5 stars everywhere, and they are well deserved, fantastic main character, a unique and fresh approach to some of the world aspects and great pacing. Give it a try, thank me later.

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lumydee
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