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Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack Of Various Characters
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Synopsis
Living forever and wandering from one world to another on the whims of a system that bound itself to you without a single 'by your leave' isn't all that it's cracked up to be.
Su Li dies of chronic illness and is bound to such a system. Now, this could be considered a blessing in disguise for others.
However, the trouble is that she isn't interested in a system and to compound it all, two men - two distinctly different men - keep on following her on this world-hopping business.
Two men as incompatible as fire and water, as different as the sun and the moon.
The only thing they share in common is Su Li and their sheer determination to not leave her side.
One of them remembers their past worlds each time they start anew, whereas the other doesn't.
One of them says that she lights up his dark world and the other says that she is his entire world.
One of them says that it doesn't matter if she loves him or not, she is his to cherish and pamper.
The other says that she is the only one he would ever love.
Though sceptical and wary, Su Li decides to put her best foot forward and make the best out of her circumstances.
Why are these two men trailing her?
Will she be able to get rid of the shackles placed on her by the system?
Will she repudiate her deal with the system?
Will she find out the answers to all her doubts and questions or will silence and melancholy be her only answer?
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An excerpt from the book :
"You care that much about Zixi? Because of him, you are ready to discard concerns about your own safety? Is it worth it? Is Xun Zixi really worth it?"
Su Li was agitated by Li Rong's unceasing questions.
She weighed her words properly and said in a hoarse voice, "It's worth it."
Suddenly her eyes glazed in tears and she repeated her words, "He is worth it to me."
Li Rong was stunned to see her in tears and was rendered speechless by the conviction behind her answer.
"Well, I can't change your mind. You won't leave him in a lurch and I can't turn my back on you."
They rushed back the way they had come and prayed that it wouldn't be too late on their part.
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I am really enjoying the story very much. The idea of two ML's great and I just can't wait for more.!!!! Thumbs up to the Author!!! Keep up the good work.
Fufufu~ I wanted to give a review too 😗 It's hard to find a decent Quick transmigration novel with a female lead that I haven't read. Happy to find this gem~ Has stable updates and the plotline is progressing quite well, it has been only the first arc so far but I love it :p Keep doing you thing author-san!
Sorry if this review will make people angry or something. Sorry to author for late review. Honestly, I have add-in this novel in library 2 days ago but hesitate to read till today. It because of the cover, 1st impression is it not attracting and feel not relating to the title. After read for few chapters, yup, this story is quite interesting and well developed in character and background. Good job author. Sorry to say this, my problem is, it just i feel so suffocate when chapter has long lenght (word count apprx between 1300-1700). Sometime i also feel like the story give a reason for his/her certain action or story telling (on why/what happen/what he/she gonna do next - for example: using therefore / then). Anyway, good job author. Keep it up. For sure many readers will read this interesting story. I will recommended to my friends.
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3..2..1.. [It's review system here! Welcome to the review world!] Lol. I came here and intended to read your story from a writer perspective but then.. Boom! There I go reverted back to being just a reader that was lost in a good story! I didn't expect that I could find a good novel system here, this is a hidden gem. I'm anticipating for more chapter and improvement from the author.
i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^ i love it! more author! please don't drop it! ^_^
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The novel has a very good concept of a female which is important for two men which are contrary of each other,the novel's author is very experienced and it is shown in quality of her novel,the synopsis is enough to understand how good the novel is.
So amazing to stumble upon such a hidden gem. Really waiting for more. I actually like the world and characters. Can't wait for more updates
The first few chapters are hard to read. Once you get past the grammar, redundancy and big words that you have to look up and find out that some a poorly used it's a great read. It keeps you wondering what will happen next and why there is a system in place. Unfortunately the author has a hard time keep the time line, spelling of characters name and the characters themselves straight. Example mom dies a "short few years" after the FL birth but later on you read she was drilled in etiquette from her mother? Few years is 4 minimum then you find out no it was actually at the age of ten. A full decade later. Another is when the FL leaves, gone for four years, then it's three years. As for the romance it's a bit lacking, the FL is very distant but Li Rong's and Yu Yan's scene of mistaken intimacy (though it was very small) was heart racing! You could feel her pain when she finds out he mistakes her for someone else. The story is far from cliche and it's interesting that she could get transmigrated again after she passes.
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Amazing work i really love the female protagonist Yu Yan and The Sistem, put those two and a great story you Will get a perfect novel, keep going i Will add yo my library for no lose any chapter in the future ...
The plot is progressing good. Not too slow or too fast, just right. The characters are great too.... The story is interesting.... I love ghosts.. Heheheh.. Keep it up author...
The author's vast vocabulary of words made the flow of the novel pleasing to read. The characters are also superb since there's life breathed into them. There are no dumb story development, everything is well thought as far as I had read.
That's an awesome conceptual plot there. What's more, I just don't know why but it seems that plot was made only for this world created by this this novel and only for these characters, all of it fits amazingly. Long way of saying that the flow is fantastic.
Just as author claims — writing quality is top notch! The story is really enjoyable. Development is on good speed too. Must read novel! Keep up the good work, Author-sama!
I would have rated it 5 if not for unreliable update schedule and slow development. But still it is one of those quick transmigration stories that are realistic, characters are humane not too op. There is right amount of comedy, tragedy and anticipation.
Your grammar is top notch! It's really hard for me to read novels with poor grammar. I couldn't help but correct their mistakes inside my head so I couldn't immerse myself in the story. So good job on that front! 🖒 I've only read half of the 1st arc but I already like the way you tell your story. And I love quick tranmigrations so that's an added bonus. 😊 Tho I wish in the 1st chapter you could have shown how the system came into contact with the FL, like some dialogues between them or something, rather than showing it thru narration. Anyways, I'll add your story in my library and continue reading it whenever I have free time. Good job! 😊
It's quite a creative novel and has a decent plotline. It is also well-written, and as far as I have read, it's amazing! Keep up with the good work!
The start was nice and idyllic. I got the feeling Su Li was quite content with her ghost state and going with the flow. There were no surprises about her situation. Although she had some regrets, which is normal I guess. The host came across as a typical omniscient character. Although, I found it hard to determine when it was speaking as its dialogue was clumped in with the rest of the paragraph. You're paragraphs could probably be broken up a bit better, so it doesn't read like one big info dump. In a paperback book it's okay to have long chapters. On screen, long paragraph makes the eyes wander away from the story. Unfortunately, this tended to be the case for me. Best to keep paragraphs per action or point expressed. Otherwise, the story is a good start. Keep writing.
Such a amazing novel totally in love with this novel.......the character of FL is really something I mean she is not interested in anything.......I was laughing like mad 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣when I read that she became a male I mean seriously emperor.....thanks author for such a unique novel......
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Heya everyone I really didn't want to review my own novel but am writing this to inform everyone the I have edited the first arc. Therefore, all the paragraph length problems and the few grammatical errors that were sprinkled here and there have also been solved. More than the paragraph length, I had been worried about any grammatical errors that I had made since am one of those Grammar Nazis lol Don't forget to read, review, recommend, vote and comment on the story. Those few things are infinitely sweeter than marshmallows to me 😁😂😛