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This would one of the best RWBY fics out there if it was being updated more often ...
This is one of the best RWBY fics I've read. The mc is interesting and I really like his character growth especially with the purgatory stuff. Ngl it started kind of cracked and I though it would just be some empty calories without mucg substance but it gets pretty filling over time and I loved bitting in expecting some potato chips only to get the juicy, moist, wet, and succulent taste of a good piece of steak with salt drizzled with fat.😎👍.
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Excalibuuuuuurrrrrrrr!!!!!! História muito boa, continue assim. Excalibuuuuuurrrrrrrr!!!!!! Ansioso para ler os próximos capítulos Eeeeeeeeeeex-calibuuuuuuuuuur!!!!!!
A fun wee read, The Mc isn’t a pushover/yes man to everyone or acts like a soulless monster who kills and assaults anyone he wants. While having amusing interactions with the people around him, though at times he can be a little much with the laziness, well, I can't say he can be entirely blamed, controlling system and crappy entity that lobbed him to remnant lest he got excaliba though i wonder if hell ever be able to use magic because I wonder if he could ever pull a castoria or maby just make Rhongomyniad a magecraft don't know I would just like to see it.
It's an incredible fic! The premise is simple, but interesting. The beginning is good, although not incredible, but little by little the story unfolded and became more complicated, especially after chapter 20, and the fic revealed itself to be much more than good and became a truly incredible story. Now the negative point is the non-existent update stability. The author only writes when he feels like it, so it's not even possible to guarantee one chapter per month. Even with this problem, I'm giving it 5 stars because in the end it's a fanfic. Normally I would take stars off for this since the author has a patreon, but he made it clear in the synopsis that this fic would not have any schedule and would only be updated when I felt like it, so I'll keep it at 5 stars.
It seems to have been written by the GODS themselves, its updating is acceptable and its development both in its story and in that of the characters is tremendous. Simply splendid!!!
I have no clue about any of this RWBY stuff and only started reading this cause of Excalibur being a major part of the story but the author writes in a way that you can pick up on the meaning of things even if in a general manner. The story itself is nice with a unwilling protagonist thrust in a situation where he must "save" the world and make friends along the way it seems. Updates were a bit delayed I believe around 9 months ago but it has started picking up regularly at the time of this review. All in all, I'm looking forward to when he gets to a widely acknowledged Gojo Satoru or All Might (The Strongest Deterrent) kind of status in this world. 🙏🙏🙏
I need more chapters, this is peak fiction. Best thing I've read in a while, genuinely.
The quality of writing is great, it stands above the rest of the Webnovel books you see on here. I like the characterization of the Mc, it’s a nice take on the typical reincarnation with a system and the author is doing it well. The update stability is there were definitely going to get a chapter and it’s not to long before the next one. I like the character design in regards to how he is characterized it’s really funny seeing him act. And the world backround we have more to be seen but in the purgatory arc we had a little more of the in universe backround fleshed out which I will be waiting for.
Interesting story and development as far as I've read the character is changing and learning the characters are different from the anime and have fun and interesting interactions but the most negative point would be the system or what should I call him the son of a bitch god if the author wanted to create a character that would make villains like the joker darkseid or even the one above all seem kind the author succeeded because even these villains at some point have done something good as the god/system says about being a hero when he is a true demon I hope the protagonist can free himself and destroy the damn god
Awsome ff, dont know anything bout rwby but the ff is written in a was so thats not a problem. Mc deliveres what is promised, depressed but still funny guy. The update stability is, idk. The author made it very clear from the beginning he will update as he feels and thats just what we get. Good humor, very strong mc, it has a system but not in the conventional sense. The system is mostly there to force the mc to not just laze around and let the world end.
Me gustó mucho el tipo de humor que manejas te en esta historia 👍. Bb bb. Bbb. Bb. B b. Vv vv. .. . .
absolute cinema, completely 10/10 story, love this. one thing I love specifically is the fact that the system is an actual threat, unlike in other fanfics where the Mc always completes the missions and never get to be punished, here the Mc fails and is actually punished for it. not only is this refreshing to see, but it establishes the system as a legitimate threat and not just a gimmick that the Mc can use to level up. I knew this author wrote good fanfics, but personally, this is one of his best works absolutely marvelous.
honestly, the big problem is that the main character is boring and bland. i understand that having monotone characters that are nonchalant is enjoyable. i enjoy them, but the main character is so much so that it's to the point that he seems to have no will of his own like he's a piece of paper that's only going with other people's winds and never truly going on his own it seems like he takes nothing seriously and it just seem disappointing when you put him with an awesome character like artoria and give him excalibur but he constantly degrades it to the point I feel like he is just a doll
Imma be honest was hoping for a good story with someone who wielded great power and even if not enjoying being in his position worked hard or such or reluctantly cared. What it is atm anyway is a person who has been enslaved to his system and is fighting it but tbh the system is what killed my enthusiasm for the story
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Master class. Its rare to find a story with a good story, good character building, good premise, OP done right in a saitama sort of way without making him just exodia obliterate everyone and any potential romance is done slowly building up to instead of "OMG my fav waifu, lesss goooo" If I had to recommend any book on an actual balanced power stone list, this would probably be either number 1 or top 3. The only issue I have with this story is the updates, I need more. MORE!
I gotta say I thought the protagonist of this fic would've put me off enough that it made this fic unbearable to read. But what I got instead is a breath of fresh air since the MC is not perfect nor is he trying to reap all the benefits of the world he is currently residing. Instead, He is well. Human. A person who has their own beliefs and ideas, A person with their own Identity, A person who is alive. Sure he may be frustratingly unreasonable but that's what makes him stand out the rest of the MC in the Webnovel fanfiction section. 4.4/5
Yo these 11 chapters? loving it so far , this fanfic has so much potential, and it’s easily one of the best 'RWBY' fanfic on this platform for me. The only thing I gotta say (and I KNOW everyone feels me on this) is... 'updates' 🥲 Like, please bro, we’re all begging for more frequent ones. But fr, keep it up , this is 🔥
Neeeeeed mooooooore 🤤 Naah srx this story made me discovery the rwby serie and I'm glad for it. But the updates are too random, either nothing for months or multiples chapters in one month.
Es una muy buena obra, de los pocos crosovers de Fate/RWBY Personalmente creo que es una de las mejores historias que e leído. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this is hot stuff. and the MC is funny for my broken sense of humour not to say that the grammar is also good.
I’m just like Alex fr ☠️ Now what do I say…The author is one great and godly being that… Ok no more filler.
Everything about this story is good, and I like it, I just hope that the updates will be stable and maybe update a few chapters a week. I only read the first three chapters so I don't know the new chapters, but the first three chapters made me interested and it was fun to read.
Shameless 5-Star Review Cause... EXCALIBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. Enough said. For fun fic so don't take it TOO seriously. Of course, I'll try my best as always that it makes sense and never reaches "Crack" Levels. Hope ya'll enjoy XD
This would one of the best RWBY fics out there if it was being updated more often ...
This is one of the best RWBY fics I've read. The mc is interesting and I really like his character growth especially with the purgatory stuff. Ngl it started kind of cracked and I though it would just be some empty calories without mucg substance but it gets pretty filling over time and I loved bitting in expecting some potato chips only to get the juicy, moist, wet, and succulent taste of a good piece of steak with salt drizzled with fat.😎👍.
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Excalibuuuuuurrrrrrrr!!!!!! História muito boa, continue assim. Excalibuuuuuurrrrrrrr!!!!!! Ansioso para ler os próximos capítulos Eeeeeeeeeeex-calibuuuuuuuuuur!!!!!!
A fun wee read, The Mc isn’t a pushover/yes man to everyone or acts like a soulless monster who kills and assaults anyone he wants. While having amusing interactions with the people around him, though at times he can be a little much with the laziness, well, I can't say he can be entirely blamed, controlling system and crappy entity that lobbed him to remnant lest he got excaliba though i wonder if hell ever be able to use magic because I wonder if he could ever pull a castoria or maby just make Rhongomyniad a magecraft don't know I would just like to see it.
It's an incredible fic! The premise is simple, but interesting. The beginning is good, although not incredible, but little by little the story unfolded and became more complicated, especially after chapter 20, and the fic revealed itself to be much more than good and became a truly incredible story. Now the negative point is the non-existent update stability. The author only writes when he feels like it, so it's not even possible to guarantee one chapter per month. Even with this problem, I'm giving it 5 stars because in the end it's a fanfic. Normally I would take stars off for this since the author has a patreon, but he made it clear in the synopsis that this fic would not have any schedule and would only be updated when I felt like it, so I'll keep it at 5 stars.
It seems to have been written by the GODS themselves, its updating is acceptable and its development both in its story and in that of the characters is tremendous. Simply splendid!!!
I have no clue about any of this RWBY stuff and only started reading this cause of Excalibur being a major part of the story but the author writes in a way that you can pick up on the meaning of things even if in a general manner. The story itself is nice with a unwilling protagonist thrust in a situation where he must "save" the world and make friends along the way it seems. Updates were a bit delayed I believe around 9 months ago but it has started picking up regularly at the time of this review. All in all, I'm looking forward to when he gets to a widely acknowledged Gojo Satoru or All Might (The Strongest Deterrent) kind of status in this world. 🙏🙏🙏
I need more chapters, this is peak fiction. Best thing I've read in a while, genuinely.
The quality of writing is great, it stands above the rest of the Webnovel books you see on here. I like the characterization of the Mc, it’s a nice take on the typical reincarnation with a system and the author is doing it well. The update stability is there were definitely going to get a chapter and it’s not to long before the next one. I like the character design in regards to how he is characterized it’s really funny seeing him act. And the world backround we have more to be seen but in the purgatory arc we had a little more of the in universe backround fleshed out which I will be waiting for.
Interesting story and development as far as I've read the character is changing and learning the characters are different from the anime and have fun and interesting interactions but the most negative point would be the system or what should I call him the son of a bitch god if the author wanted to create a character that would make villains like the joker darkseid or even the one above all seem kind the author succeeded because even these villains at some point have done something good as the god/system says about being a hero when he is a true demon I hope the protagonist can free himself and destroy the damn god
Awsome ff, dont know anything bout rwby but the ff is written in a was so thats not a problem. Mc deliveres what is promised, depressed but still funny guy. The update stability is, idk. The author made it very clear from the beginning he will update as he feels and thats just what we get. Good humor, very strong mc, it has a system but not in the conventional sense. The system is mostly there to force the mc to not just laze around and let the world end.
Me gustó mucho el tipo de humor que manejas te en esta historia 👍. Bb bb. Bbb. Bb. B b. Vv vv. .. . .
absolute cinema, completely 10/10 story, love this. one thing I love specifically is the fact that the system is an actual threat, unlike in other fanfics where the Mc always completes the missions and never get to be punished, here the Mc fails and is actually punished for it. not only is this refreshing to see, but it establishes the system as a legitimate threat and not just a gimmick that the Mc can use to level up. I knew this author wrote good fanfics, but personally, this is one of his best works absolutely marvelous.
honestly, the big problem is that the main character is boring and bland. i understand that having monotone characters that are nonchalant is enjoyable. i enjoy them, but the main character is so much so that it's to the point that he seems to have no will of his own like he's a piece of paper that's only going with other people's winds and never truly going on his own it seems like he takes nothing seriously and it just seem disappointing when you put him with an awesome character like artoria and give him excalibur but he constantly degrades it to the point I feel like he is just a doll
Imma be honest was hoping for a good story with someone who wielded great power and even if not enjoying being in his position worked hard or such or reluctantly cared. What it is atm anyway is a person who has been enslaved to his system and is fighting it but tbh the system is what killed my enthusiasm for the story
Reveal Spoiler Master class. Its rare to find a story with a good story, good character building, good premise, OP done right in a saitama sort of way without making him just exodia obliterate everyone and any potential romance is done slowly building up to instead of "OMG my fav waifu, lesss goooo" If I had to recommend any book on an actual balanced power stone list, this would probably be either number 1 or top 3. The only issue I have with this story is the updates, I need more. MORE!
I gotta say I thought the protagonist of this fic would've put me off enough that it made this fic unbearable to read. But what I got instead is a breath of fresh air since the MC is not perfect nor is he trying to reap all the benefits of the world he is currently residing. Instead, He is well. Human. A person who has their own beliefs and ideas, A person with their own Identity, A person who is alive. Sure he may be frustratingly unreasonable but that's what makes him stand out the rest of the MC in the Webnovel fanfiction section. 4.4/5
Yo these 11 chapters? loving it so far , this fanfic has so much potential, and it’s easily one of the best 'RWBY' fanfic on this platform for me. The only thing I gotta say (and I KNOW everyone feels me on this) is... 'updates' 🥲 Like, please bro, we’re all begging for more frequent ones. But fr, keep it up , this is 🔥
Neeeeeed mooooooore 🤤 Naah srx this story made me discovery the rwby serie and I'm glad for it. But the updates are too random, either nothing for months or multiples chapters in one month.
Es una muy buena obra, de los pocos crosovers de Fate/RWBY Personalmente creo que es una de las mejores historias que e leído. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
this is hot stuff. and the MC is funny for my broken sense of humour not to say that the grammar is also good.
I’m just like Alex fr ☠️ Now what do I say…The author is one great and godly being that… Ok no more filler.
Everything about this story is good, and I like it, I just hope that the updates will be stable and maybe update a few chapters a week. I only read the first three chapters so I don't know the new chapters, but the first three chapters made me interested and it was fun to read.
Shameless 5-Star Review Cause... EXCALIBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. Enough said. For fun fic so don't take it TOO seriously. Of course, I'll try my best as always that it makes sense and never reaches "Crack" Levels. Hope ya'll enjoy XD