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Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Summary:

It's time for a family discussion--and other things. Maddie and Jack try to navigate their way through the after-portal crisis. The first steps start in the lab. Danny is uncomfortable, and Jazz has a crisis.

Notes:

Wow, 2024 already. The best way to start the year off right is to post an update! (So sorry I fell off the face of the earth for 2 months. This chapter fought me hard.) THANK YOU all for helping me hit the 2k kudos mark on this story! I am honored that you guys like it!

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The week flew by much faster than Danny wanted it to. Before he knew it, it was Friday night, and the family had all gathered at the dinner table. The conversation over dinner was stilted and awkward. Everyone knew that there was going to be a heavy discussion after the meal was over. While no one was truly "ready" for that, they all knew it had to happen.

Soon enough, the dishes had been put away, and the kitchen cleared. Maddie put on a pot of coffee; having something to sip on would at least add some comfort to the imminent, looming set of hours ahead of the family. While her mother put the food away, Jazz stacked the dishes in the dishwasher. The teen was feeling a bit left out, and she didn't quite understand why. The heaviness in the room could be cut with a knife.

Once everything that could be done—except for the talking—had been done, the family of four sat down and struggled to make eye contact with each other. Danny was the first to find enough courage to speak. "So, uh, Mom, Dad…do you have a plan for the stuff we're going to do this weekend?"

Maddie looked at Jack and then to her son. "We do, honey. Your father and I completed all of our data analysis this morning, and we drew up an outline of the things we need to go over with you." She swallowed and looked at her daughter. "Jazz…" The woman's gaze dropped to the table. "We're going to need to test you as well. I'm sorry, honey, but you were in the house when the portal activated. You might have been affected too."

Jazz jerked in her chair like she had been hit. "WHAT?!" She sucked in a breath to start ranting at her mother, but before she could do more than reopen her mouth, Jack held up his hand.

"Jazzipants, I understand that this is upsetting for you. We apologize for not bringing this up sooner, but we didn't want you to worry unnecessarily." He sighed. "We've spent the last two days checking ecto-radiation levels in the house, and even though the lab is shielded, it appears that we didn't do a good enough job." He looked at his daughter's frightened face; her expression caused his heart to ache. "There are high ecto levels in the kitchen and in the bedrooms above the kitchen. We don't know what that means—for any of us."

"Dad…I sleep over the kitchen. So do you!"

"I'm sorry princess. We'll get this figured out, ok?"

Jazz looked at her parents, face pale and eyes wide. "NO!" She shouted. "It is NOT ok! How could you two be so irresponsible?! You put your stupid dreams ahead of the safety of this family—you almost killed my brother, and now you're trying to tell me that being doused with 'ecto-radiation' is OK?!!"

Jack and Maddie sat heavily in their chairs. Jack visibly swallowed. Maddie stared at the napkin holder on the table as if it held the secrets of the universe. Surprisingly, it was Danny who spoke next.

"Jazz, calm down—please. There was no way for them to know what was going to happen. I wasn't worried either!" He huffed and stared his sister in the eyes. "Whatever happened is already done, and there's nothing that we can do to change that. What matters now, is where we go from here." Danny stared at his sister, begging her to get herself under control. "I understand that this is scary for you. I'm scared out of my mind about the changes I'm going through—but Jazz, we need to stick together. We're all in this now. The only thing we can do is figure everything out as best we can what needs to happen next…" His voice trailed off, and he turned his attention to his parents. "Mom? Dad?"

Maddie cleared her throat and looked up at her children. Slowly, she nodded. "We've spent all week going over everything and making a comprehensive list of all the things we need to do. We also took the time out specifically to develop and install shielding all around the lab and the portal. From what we have gathered so far, the extra shielding is making a difference."

Jack flashed a small smile. "Yeah! The ecto-radiation levels have already gone down by 20%. Pretty sure that within another week or so, they won't be detectable outside of the lab anymore. So, you guys should be alright!" He looked as though he was struggling to believe his own words. "In any case, we're going to get a thorough baseline for you two now, and we're going to keep gathering data as time goes on to measure any changes that happen." Jack looked at his wife. "We'll also figure out a way to deal with the things that have already changed." The enormous man fell silent and seemed to deflate a bit.

"Danny's right, honey. We can't change what has already happened, but we CAN control where we go from here. We need to stick together, alright?" Maddie had perked up during Danny and Jack's reassurances. She looked determined now.

Jazz was still pale, but she no longer looked terrified. She sniffed and wiped her tears on a napkin. "OK." Her voice was small. "What do I need to do?"

Jack stood and put his hand on her shoulder. "First thing first, we need to head down to the lab and get started on those tests. Tonight, we're doing bloodwork and x-rays; the results should be ready by morning, and then we'll have a better idea where to go from there."

Together, the family of four walked downstairs to the basement lab. Jazz visibly flinched when the portal came into her sight and turned her head away. Danny just stared at it, almost mesmerized by its swirl of electric green. Maddie took one look at her children's reactions and hastily walked over to the newly-installed portal shield and slapped the "close" button. She was rather unsettled by the sight of the open doors herself. She really thought that they had been closed when they left the lab…

Jack walked over to the exam table, bringing the medical cart with him. He motioned to Jazz and Danny to sit down. "Alright, kiddos, let's get this show on the road!" The man spoke with an enthusiasm that he did not feel. He had to make his kids as comfortable as they could be. "Mad's" He called. "You about ready?"

Jazz frowned. "I thought you were going to do the blood draws, Dad…"

The big man blew out a hard breath and lifted his hand to run his fingers through his hair. "Well…your mom and I talked about it, and due to some of my symptoms, we felt that it would be better for your mom to handle anything delicate like that." His eyes darted over to look at his wife.

Maddie locked eyes with Jack, then turned to face her children with a slight smile. "Jazz, honey, you have to have noticed how often your father keeps 'dropping' things." She took a calming breath. "We've determined that he's having episodes of what appears to be intangibility in his arms and hands…"

Both Danny and Jazz's eyes went wide with that statement. Maddie continued. "We think it is related to his arms being inside the newly activated portal." She turned towards her son. "Danny, baby, have you noticed anything like that happening to you?"

The teen in question reached up with his hand and began rubbing the back of his neck. He couldn't meet his mother's eyes. "You…you could say that." He thought of the nights he fell asleep on top of his bed, and in the morning, found himself on the floor directly under where he first lay down.

"Oh, honey!" Maddie lifted Danny's chin and made him look at her. "It's going to be ok. We're going to figure this thing out, ok?" She turned her head. "Jazz, has anything like that happened to you?"

Jazz shook her head "no" and stared, still wide-eyed, at her brother.

Maddie hummed. "That tracks, actually. I haven't had that problem either, but unlike your father and brother, I didn't have any body parts inside of the activating portal. That seems to be the distinguishing factor with this issue." She turned her eyes back towards her son. "Danny, have you noticed any other symptoms or irregularities?"

The teen swallowed audibly. "Um." It was obvious that the teen didn't want to talk, but Danny sucked in a breath and forced the words out anyway. "Yeah. I…I woke up this morning and I'm pretty sure that I was floating a few inches above my bed…"

Maddie's face went blank for a moment, and she turned towards her husband. "Jack, has anything like that happened with you so far?"

The big man shook his head, and Danny exploded. "Oh stars and planets! I'm turning into a freak!" Danny's voice was high-pitched and almost frantic.

Jack put his gloved hand on his son's shoulder. "No, son. You are not a freak! You have been exposed to an enormous amount of ecto-energy—even more than I have. It's no wonder that you're having more changes than me. It's nothing to be afraid of, but it is something we need to track."

Danny wiped a few errant tears off of his face with the back of his hand. Maddie put her hand on his leg. "It's going to be ok, honey. We promise, don't we Jack?"

The orange-clad man nodded his head firmly. "Yeah, kiddo, we promise. We're going to figure this stuff out. It just might take a little time." He turned and looked at his small family. "Let's get started. The sooner we get some results, the better."

Maddie nodded and grabbed the tubes for the blood draw. It would prove to be a long evening for everyone. Maddie drew the children's blood while Jack set up the x-rays. Danny and Jazz both took their turns in the machine, neither one saying a word. Every now and then Danny would lock his roaming eyes with his sister's. Her dread was evident in her gaze. Guilt flared in the younger teen. After a while, he simply kept his gaze on the floor.

By the time everyone was done with all the tests—including repeat bloodwork and x-rays for Jack, the family was exhausted. They trudged their way back up to the kitchen and flopped into the chairs around the table. Maddie nodded to Jack when he asked about hot chocolate before bed. Danny gulped his down rather quickly, while Jazmine looked almost reluctant to drink hers.

Afterwards, the family wordlessly made their way upstairs to their rooms. Danny flopped face-first onto his bed, not even bothering to take off his shoes. Jazz slammed her door shut. The sound hit Maddie and Jack like thunder. Jack looked at his wife wordlessly.

"She'll be ok, honey." Maddie ran her fingers along Jack's chest. "We all will."

"Do you really believe that?"

"I have to."

Notes:

We are solidly in the middle of Arc 2 for this story! Arc 3 will see a return to the present day in Gotham for all the Bat-action. Stay tuned!

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Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Summary:

Test results bring the beginning of secrets in the Fenton household.

Danny has a problem at school.

Notes:

Sorry this took so long to get to you guys. I want to thank all of my readers for the comments and kudos! They make writing worth it. Also, a shout-out to other DP writers. Thank you for helping me with inspiration! I couldn't do this without everyone's support!!!

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The next morning, after breakfast, the family made their way back down to the lab. Jack pulled the test results up and printed them out, while Maddie got the kids into Fenton hazmat suits. Danny pulled at the collar of his, while Jazz kept glancing at hers with a frown.

"Mom, why do we have to wear these again??" The red-head's voice was higher pitched than normal.

Maddie attempted to suppress her frown. "Jazz, sweetie, we couldn't let you wear them last night because of all the testing we needed to do, but from here on out, we don't want anyone in the lab without protection."

Jazz mumbled under her breath. Danny snorted. "Great time for them to pick up lab safety habits, huh, sis?"

The older teen shot a side-eye to her brother, but her frown softened quite a bit. "No comment." Despite having the edge taken off of her anxiety, she still refused to look her parents in the eye.

Jack cleared his throat. "Ok guys, we want to repeat your x-rays with the hazmat suits on. That way we have two sets of baseline data for you kiddos. We think that the ecto-radiation interferes with the x-rays to a degree, so having you two in hazmats should give us better images, or at least an idea of how much those suits help keep you from absorbing the radiation in here."

Danny looked dubious, but walked over the machine anyway. Jazz followed him slowly. She turned her eyes to her mother, who was looking over the print-outs from Jack. "Um, did you get anything from the bloodwork?"

Maddie tore her eyes away from the papers and swallowed. "Yes, sweetie. We'll discuss it upstairs after we get done with the x-rays."

"But mom!" Jazz's anxiety spiked again.

"It's going to be ok, princess." Jack put his large hand on his daughter's back. "I promise."

"Your father is right, honey. It's going to be ok. We're going to fix whatever this is. Try not to worry too much about it."

Jazz huffed and got into position for the next test. Danny watched the rest of his family with a small smile that did not reach his haunted eyes. No one else had anything else to say, so the x-rays came and went silently.

When they were done, the family of four went back upstairs. Everyone changed and showered in the anteroom next to the kitchen. The adults changed into clean hazmat suits, while the teens just put their regular clothes back on.

Once dressed, Maddie and Jack led the way to the kitchen table. Both held copies of the test and image results. Maddie put hers on the table and went to start a fresh pot of coffee. Danny peeked over the outside of the folder that his mom had put down; he was disappointed to see that the outside was nearly blank, except for the Fentonworks logo. Jazz stared at the folder in Jack's enormous hands with trepidation.

Everyone waited in silence until the coffee maker sputtered out a popping wheeze that signaled the cycle was complete. Maddie's face was unreadable as she poured and fixed four mugs of the bitter brew. Once done, she carefully brought her offering to the table, gently setting each mug in front of the person it belonged to.

Danny picked his up and immediately took a gulp. "Mmm. Coffee. Very good, Mom."

Maddie's mouth quirked up in a small smile. "Thank you, honey. I thought we could all use a pick-me-up right about now."

Danny sighed. "You're not wrong…" He took another drink from his cup, a small sip this time. The teen stretched his neck and back a bit. "Good coffee." He said to his mug.

His parents shared a quiet look. Finally, Jack spoke up. "Alrighty, kiddos. Here's what we know so far…"

What followed was the most anxiety-inducing, brain-frying hour of both Danny and Jazz's short lives. The teens were brilliant in their own right, but some of the test results and implications went right over their head. Unfortunately, Jack kept stumbling around what the tests meant, and for reasons only known to her, Maddie did not interrupt.

Jack finished his explanation with: "And that's that! See, kiddos, nothing to be worried about." The towering man gave an enormous sigh and looked to his wife, who had sat through the entire dialogue staring at the folder in her hands.

The kitchen sat bathed in silence for a good few minutes before Maddie looked up at her children. She cleared her throat. "Your father is right. The ecto-radiation levels in the lab are no longer high enough to affect your test results. Any changes in your bodies that were going to happen due to exposure have already occurred, so there is no reason to think that things will get worse."

Danny watched his parents with guarded eyes. Yes, they didn't seem to be overly upset at the appearance of "ghostly" symptoms or the levels of residual ectoplasmic radiation, but…they also didn't know the extent of the changes the teen was going through. Danny had shared with his parents the smaller manifestations that he had experienced, but he couldn't bring himself to talk about the bigger ones—he was too upset and worried to discuss those changes with anyone. No one needed to know about the white-haired, neon-green-eyed face that sometimes greeted him in the mirror. Right?

Jack's voice brought Danny back to the conversation at hand. "Danno, what's going through your mind, son. You seem like you're a million miles away."

Danny blinked and cleared his throat. "Uh, not a whole lot. I'm just trying…to process this stuff, that's all."

Jack looked at his wife and took a deep breath when she nodded her encouragement to him. Then, he looked back at his son with a sigh. "I know it's a lot, kiddo, but we have every reason to believe that all of the ecto-contamination is going to fade. So try not to worry too hard about stuff that we can't change. It's gonna be ok."

Maddie piped up. "Your father is right. I am already showing a marked decrease in radiation levels, and Jazz no longer has any detectable residue at all. Your father's levels are also dropping—just not as fast." She pasted a brittle smile on her face. "We have every reason to believe that it will be the same for you. It just might take your body a little bit longer than the rest of us because you had the highest level of exposure."

Danny looked at Jazz. Her fingers were white from gripping the kitchen table so hard. Her face was set in an uneasy scowl. He decided, then, that he would most definitely keep the hidden changes to himself. With Jazz being this upset about basic ecto-contamination, she would probably explode to find out that her brother was turning into some kind of mutant, ghost-adjacent freak. Nobody needed to know.

Jack and Maddie watched their children. They were both drowning in guilt, and trying to pretend that everything was alright. They had deliberately decided to gloss over some of the more…distressing test results. The teens need reassurance and hope, not technical facts that may or may not change in the future. The kids didn't need to know. That was the hill they were standing on. Now everyone just had to hope that their secrets didn't come back to haunt them.

Two weeks later:

"Danny, honey, I got a call from the school today. Would you like to explain to me how you managed to get yourself banned from the chemistry lab?"

Danny blew out a huff of frustration and unceremoniously dropped his backpack on the floor. He stared at Maddie's boots for a good half minute before shutting his eyes and rubbing the back of his neck with his traitorous left hand. "Um…" The teen wasn't quite sure how to explain things to his mom. He finally decided to leave out the more disturbing details and see how she reacted to a partial truth. "I've been having trouble with my hands. They…they've been twitching and spasming, and I guess that's why I keep dropping things." That should satisfy her questioning.

Maddie looked at her son, and the anxiety written across his face. She decided to not push the issue. He would talk to her when he was ready. She did wonder if he was still having issues with intangibility in his hands; Jack's difficulty with that peculiarity had faded alongside his ecto-contamination. If Danny's hands actually were going intangible, then it was likely that his contamination levels hadn't dropped as they should have. That would be something to look at over the weekend.

Suddenly, Maddie became aware of the silence that had taken over the living room while she was lost in her thoughts. Danny hadn't spoken a word since his comment about twitching and muscle spasms. The red-head cleared her throat. "I'm sorry that you're having so much trouble, sweetie. Do you want me to make another appointment with Dr. Severn to see if there is anything that he can do?"

Danny jerked like he had been hit, his wide teal eyes screaming out his fear. "NO! No more doctors!"

Wait, teal eyes? Danny's eyes were blue. When had they changed colors? More importantly—why? Maddie looked more closely at her son. Now his eyes were blue again. Had she imagined the green tint mixed in with his normal coloration? She shook herself out of her thoughts and focused on calming her child.

"Ok, honey. I won't make you see someone right now if it bothers you that much. I've just been concerned because you got hit with a large amount of electricity during the accident. That can have long-term effects. If you keep having problems, though, we will have to revisit this, alright?"

Danny swallowed and nodded. He toed his backpack on the floor before finally meeting Maddie's eyes. "I'm sure that I'm gonna be ok, Mom. A few more weeks, and I bet I won't have any more problems…"

Maddie took a few steps forward and pulled Danny into a hug. He pressed his forehead into her chest; he was trembling. So was Maddie. "It's going to get better, sweetheart." She murmured into his hair. "I love you, honey."

Danny sniffed and wiped his eyes. "I love you too, Mom."

Maddie leaned backwards to see her child's face. "How about we order pizza for supper?"

That seemed to perk Danny up a bit. "That sounds amazing."

"You want the usual?"

The teen gave a genuine smile. "Yeah."

Maddie returned the grin. "I'll go order it now. We can have an early dinner. Sound good, kiddo?" She ruffled his hair.

Danny batted away her hand, all traces of fear gone from his perfectly blue eyes. "Moooom!"

Maddie poked him as she headed towards the phone. "Daaaannny!"

By the time the scientist had reached the kitchen door, all of the heaviness had left the room. She called and placed the order with a smile, thinking about how lucky she was to have Danny in her life. She refused to give ear to that small voice that reminded her she could have—should have—lost him during the portal accident. He was here now, and he would be fine. She'd do whatever it took to make sure of it.


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