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What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.
I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.
I just have a question about the MC physical description or if there is any?
All I can say that it's a rip off of slave harem in the labyrinth of the other world (Isekai Meikyū de Haremu o). Although there are some changes but you can see the familiarity from the second chapter.
one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed
Its a good novel, nothing to say about it if i dont say the good points. For those who only read free chapters like me its slow as fk because in 28 chapters the mc only gained 1 lvl in 2 of the 4 classes that he have (1 lvl each) and keeps beign poor and dont know nothing about the world so its like the first 5 minutes of every anime, thats how much slow paced is this at the start but is good, i dont have the patience to read the things that will happen and less if i know it like this time because u can see easily how the history is going
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good story, I like the novel, god tier for sure. I have a few suggestions: the 'Villain' part doesn't feel strong enough, sure he has thief and slave master and a few crimes here and there but there is always a reason, I feel like in order to be a villain, there is a need for a hero, but the usual young master trash bad guy doesn't feel very heroic. I wanna see the hero's party, corrupt the heroine, corrupt the cleric/saint/angel girl. dig some young master ancestors graves, rob some legacy or dungeon, steal the bride, I am also missing a demon/succubus/vampire girl who does the bad things for him thinking she deserves praise like stealing the princess or training some crazy girl who otherwise wouldn't make the cut.
assuming that I only read the novel up to chapter 274, I can't understand why the protagonist hasn't evolved his warrior class, if anyone can explain it to me I'll be very grateful. other than that I really like the novel and will continue reading it.
it is a great story.. different from many generic harem Novels i read the females characters are well written.. keep up the great work Author, 👍👍
Solid in many ways, MC is pretty odd, a mixture of a relatively normal character and outlook considering his situation who flips to extremely cringe on a regular basis. The constant flips are not at all relevant other than making you dislike the MC and make him come across as honestly pretty creepy. Without that complaint there is a lot to like for this kind of story.
Story is pretty good Slaves are bought with moral clauses Mc is ok fairly smart My personal issue is the pace of the story. 3 chapters just shopping for the first slave… Not sure I want to uses passes on it, we ll see if I ll continue reading
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.
The characterizations of the characters, their interactions as well as the surrounding environment are written really well. Each character has their own distinctive trait and I'm sure that going forward we will be able to dig even deeper into their stories. The world building is still lacking but some clues such as the monopoly of the kingdom, the oriental lineage in only one part of the world or even the underground cities show that ideas from that point of view are not lacking. Perhaps the only flaw at the moment is the slow progression of the MC because even if we are only on his 8th day in the new world in the novel we are at more than 170 chapters and he still hasn't unlocked his unique class. I hope he gets a big power up soon. For the rest, I recommend the work to all lovers of the Isekai genre in general because it gives me the impression that it will be a truly good story. Good luck author!
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A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author
a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story
Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.
Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D
A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.
It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.
Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.
I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!
The premise of the story is promising, I love villain stories and the plot has been interesting so far!
Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?
The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.
What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.
I didn't like this story at first. I enjoy faster power ups etc. but I won't lie I toughed it out, the main character grows on you. is self aware, and actually knows he is hypocritical sometimes. his harem are all unique personalities. smut was creative and not generic. my only only complaint and it's very light. is it took so long for a significant power up/relationship with main lady. frustrating but that's the point I guess making you invested. if you like villain stories and harem, absolutely no reason to skip this.
I just have a question about the MC physical description or if there is any?
All I can say that it's a rip off of slave harem in the labyrinth of the other world (Isekai Meikyū de Haremu o). Although there are some changes but you can see the familiarity from the second chapter.
one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed
Its a good novel, nothing to say about it if i dont say the good points. For those who only read free chapters like me its slow as fk because in 28 chapters the mc only gained 1 lvl in 2 of the 4 classes that he have (1 lvl each) and keeps beign poor and dont know nothing about the world so its like the first 5 minutes of every anime, thats how much slow paced is this at the start but is good, i dont have the patience to read the things that will happen and less if i know it like this time because u can see easily how the history is going
g j09jg G9W JG9W JGW W G0JE RJW W W GW G0Hw8g wg8 w8bsrhgsw w whg sio hgisg s gio is s gsi hgw ghi s g wegwi gwgh wge bw egw w wg wgwgwgwg w
good story, I like the novel, god tier for sure. I have a few suggestions: the 'Villain' part doesn't feel strong enough, sure he has thief and slave master and a few crimes here and there but there is always a reason, I feel like in order to be a villain, there is a need for a hero, but the usual young master trash bad guy doesn't feel very heroic. I wanna see the hero's party, corrupt the heroine, corrupt the cleric/saint/angel girl. dig some young master ancestors graves, rob some legacy or dungeon, steal the bride, I am also missing a demon/succubus/vampire girl who does the bad things for him thinking she deserves praise like stealing the princess or training some crazy girl who otherwise wouldn't make the cut.
assuming that I only read the novel up to chapter 274, I can't understand why the protagonist hasn't evolved his warrior class, if anyone can explain it to me I'll be very grateful. other than that I really like the novel and will continue reading it.
it is a great story.. different from many generic harem Novels i read the females characters are well written.. keep up the great work Author, 👍👍
Solid in many ways, MC is pretty odd, a mixture of a relatively normal character and outlook considering his situation who flips to extremely cringe on a regular basis. The constant flips are not at all relevant other than making you dislike the MC and make him come across as honestly pretty creepy. Without that complaint there is a lot to like for this kind of story.
Story is pretty good Slaves are bought with moral clauses Mc is ok fairly smart My personal issue is the pace of the story. 3 chapters just shopping for the first slave… Not sure I want to uses passes on it, we ll see if I ll continue reading
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.
The characterizations of the characters, their interactions as well as the surrounding environment are written really well. Each character has their own distinctive trait and I'm sure that going forward we will be able to dig even deeper into their stories. The world building is still lacking but some clues such as the monopoly of the kingdom, the oriental lineage in only one part of the world or even the underground cities show that ideas from that point of view are not lacking. Perhaps the only flaw at the moment is the slow progression of the MC because even if we are only on his 8th day in the new world in the novel we are at more than 170 chapters and he still hasn't unlocked his unique class. I hope he gets a big power up soon. For the rest, I recommend the work to all lovers of the Isekai genre in general because it gives me the impression that it will be a truly good story. Good luck author!
Reveal Spoiler A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author
a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story
Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.
Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D
A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.
It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.
Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.
I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!
The premise of the story is promising, I love villain stories and the plot has been interesting so far!
Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?
The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.