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After I failed to enter Yuuei, I was pretty lost. However, when a new Quirk came into my life, I was opened to a brand new world. With new friends, enemies, and betrayals. I am Minoru Mineta, the Gamer, and my life has only gotten more wild!
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was interesting until the character suki was introduced she makes an untrained civilian fight someone pros are struggling with when she's only met him once before and then she makes the mc save her daughter who has been missing for weeks while she made no effort to contact pro heroes to help her before she met the mc. there js nothing that the mc has over pro heroes and yet she guilt trips him and plays the victim card to make the mc save her daughter and "rally allies" and the mc being a massive simp (i dont even like using this word but it actually applies in this case) goes along with it because suki is pretty how tf do you ruin story in less than 10 chapters is beyond me. the only way it couldve been ruined faster is jf you added 🤢 harems only good thing i can say is the grammar is good and the theory was interesting.
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I love the story. The characters were great and very well worked. I also liked making part of it into a dating sim. I do hope you will not abandon this story.
Here's an obligatory review, since I'm the author and all that jazz. Simply put, this story is one I've wanted to rewrite for a while, and I've finally gotten around to it. It won't be perfect, and it certainly won't be for everyone. I have the goal to focus more on a mystery, detective story than an OP, weak-to-strong story. If you enjoy mysteries, I hope this will be more up your alley. Regardless, I appreciate everyone who gives this story a try. Even if you didn't like it, I'd really appreciate some legitimate criticism for it. Not just, "I don't like this," but actual reasons for those feelings. Whether that's character actions, how the main character reacts, abilities, or the general writing style. I'd appreciate it no matter what, as proper criticism will allow me to become a better writer overall. Regardless of that all, I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for reading.