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Primogenitor In Twilight

电影同人 23 Chapters 1.0M Views
Author: sleepy_aurthor

3.6 (25 ratings)

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God has given Alex a chance to live his live in Twilight world with a anime character power to live his peaceful life.

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Doonie_Devourer

I'm losing brain cells as I'm reading this please author i recommend some type of spelling corrector or something it needs a lot of work other than that I like the theme of it strike the blood and twilight but I'm not gonna read this unless it's fixed I'll keep it collecting dust until then

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I_HATE_INCENT_

This is too childish, why don't you just turn the Mc into a female

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B_A_E
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I always wanted a fic with combination of strike the blood and twilight , Thank you for making it true and please ,please don't drop it

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MercenaryRollen

he nerfed the mc 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

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immortal_sword

lost interest when mc was nerfed dont give mc a op character if your not not going to give him all the powers of said character

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Marven123

Its good //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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God_of_hentai

its alright the grammer and spelling is AASSSS like worse then mtl but its interesting so far ig

1yr
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titan10
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don't droppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

1yr
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BigBud

Spelling and grammar are atrocious. The chapters are very short and the interactions are strange. Good enough for me.

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omnikinesis

the chapters are too short, you can read the whole fanfic in 5 min top, and the dialogue is like reading a French play. brief, it's not worthwhile ...

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Korkyros

Difficult to read due to grammar and incomplete sentences. Terminologies are incorrect for example village chief should be sheriff as village chief would be closer in line with the Mayor of Forks. I would also suggest changing up how you distinguish from narration, thoughts, and speech. From what I have noticed you don't use any of the fan-fiction writing norms for them.

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DaoistWOnps8

great fic so far I hope you won't drop it

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Toby_S

This is starting to become a wonderful novel. Please don't drop it, and if you can, update it faster.

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SecretivePlotter_0

Typical cliche fanfic. ........ ........

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Xavierzelaya2

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PokemonJoker

It’s not readable the spelling and grammar are so bad it hurts

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HYDE_6447

Please do consider continuing this fan fic all the twilight fan fics are always dropped I do not understand the reason and this fan fic has good potential to become something

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AnjoD4Morte

Will you come back ??

1mth
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Ropyr
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