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Есть что то похожее? И планирует ли автор продолжать или постепенно забрасывать? Кст довольно интересно было-бы почитать фанфик про проститутку в волшебном мире которая поднимаешься через постель со всем и вся. (Тип связи налаживается, зарабатывает ресурсы и т.д.)
The Sith empire commands you not to drop this book. So Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Also could you do a Star Wars one.
I like this story and as I understand Jeleia has plans to conquer skyrim by her own means. I feel the story is just lacking in terms of the action scenes.
wish this was updated more but I understand his other novels are high quality also
It's dark.... buuuuuut the story is great, and it's got what I'm looking for.[img=recommend][img=update]
Is the MC powerful, or will she be played by the other characters? I like stories in which the Fem!MC is powerful and in control of the situation; she need not be OP but must not be used by others. She can be the Bottom of a relationship, but it must be her own choice, not forced.
Live the story and can't wait for the next chapter. It adds depth to a lot of characters as well.
After I randomly find your work "Servant System" I just fell in love with your writing style and how you develop your stories. But seeing that you write in the world of one of my favourite games makes it even more perfect(Naruto fanfic in second place). About this story: how you develop character, what choices your characters made and in what direction it's move just made it fun to read and I don't feel pain in my brain like in a lot of fictions in this verse where MC just walking around and everything going their way just because. The only cons I see is that there are no regular updates, hope that they will be more frequent.
It is gonna be pure yuri like you're other books or is it like the pokemon one? Btw I'll give this five stars since the Author is a good writer with multiple books.
not that many fanfic of skyrim and in my opinion this is one of the better ones it's a shame it hasn't had a update in a while
Есть что то похожее? И планирует ли автор продолжать или постепенно забрасывать? Кст довольно интересно было-бы почитать фанфик про проститутку в волшебном мире которая поднимаешься через постель со всем и вся. (Тип связи налаживается, зарабатывает ресурсы и т.д.)
The Sith empire commands you not to drop this book. So Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Also could you do a Star Wars one.
I like this story and as I understand Jeleia has plans to conquer skyrim by her own means. I feel the story is just lacking in terms of the action scenes.
wish this was updated more but I understand his other novels are high quality also
It's dark.... buuuuuut the story is great, and it's got what I'm looking for.[img=recommend][img=update]
Is the MC powerful, or will she be played by the other characters? I like stories in which the Fem!MC is powerful and in control of the situation; she need not be OP but must not be used by others. She can be the Bottom of a relationship, but it must be her own choice, not forced.
Live the story and can't wait for the next chapter. It adds depth to a lot of characters as well.
After I randomly find your work "Servant System" I just fell in love with your writing style and how you develop your stories. But seeing that you write in the world of one of my favourite games makes it even more perfect(Naruto fanfic in second place). About this story: how you develop character, what choices your characters made and in what direction it's move just made it fun to read and I don't feel pain in my brain like in a lot of fictions in this verse where MC just walking around and everything going their way just because. The only cons I see is that there are no regular updates, hope that they will be more frequent.
It is gonna be pure yuri like you're other books or is it like the pokemon one? Btw I'll give this five stars since the Author is a good writer with multiple books.
not that many fanfic of skyrim and in my opinion this is one of the better ones it's a shame it hasn't had a update in a while