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Preliminary Registration Desolate Ancient Sacred Body Fanfiction

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Author: RedIllusion

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[No waste wood, no dog licking, Heaven's Chosen strives for hegemony and invincible flow] Jun Xiaoyao travels through the fantasy world and becomes the Desolate Ancient Aristocratic Family Divine Child. He has an invincible background and a stunning innate talent. He also gets the Registration System and starts the registration with a Great Accomplishment Desolate Ancient Sacred Body. In Tai Yue Ancient Tablet register, get 6 Star award, Dragon Transformation skill! Register at the ten-year-old banquet and get 7 Star rewards, Variant Eyes : sharingan, ...
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In the original story there is no lover or harem with MC so I changed some things in the story will there will be harem and some changes in storylines

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Jasonenrick

Writing Quality 1-Star Story Deveolpment 2-Stars Character Design 4-Stars Updating Stability 5-Stars World Background 1-Star Writing Quality [Not gonna lie, it is horrible and he/she is a concept the Author doesn't understand in the sligthest!] Story Development [ In is a typical chinese Novel, so Drama, unreasonable characters, Nonsense scenes etc etc is to be expected.] Character Design [ The Character(Mc) is okay so far even tho there are only 5 chapters to date. The only thing I hope for is that the Mc won't give his everything for every beautiful woman he sees because, it was already stated that he wants to have a Harem and considering that he is the Divine Child of on of the strongest Clans or whatever, is is understandable.] Updating Stability [ 1 Chapter a day so far ] World Background [ the WB is even worse than the Grammar because I don't know shit about it. The Author also seeminly adds random character out of nowhere that everybody worships eben tho he is stronger and has a higher Status and considering that this is a Cultivation Novel, they should worship him . Like this random young master that is in the same clan or whatever as him . I mean, the Mc is the Divne child that managed to awaken the Ancestor soly be being born. Also, he is in the Spirt Realm at the age of 3 which is unheard of and probably nobody even in the ancient time achieved it and still everybody kinda looks Down in him which makes no Sense.(except the Clan Elders and the Ancestor )] All in all, it is a typical Chinese Novel and reading it will only make you hate the Author at how unreasonable and unlogical his Novel is. At the author: You make the Mc soooo fucking OP( no problem with that) but you follow that typical Chinese Drama thing that nobody likes, change that dude .

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Sin_of_GREED

this what one needs as those weak to strongest , beat one arrogant villian after another ,they r so comman that it's like drinking ro water and trying to find some flavours in it so I would like to read from the opposite spectrum this something fresh and very interesting

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_Cooldude_

Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please

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_Cooldude_

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tutyfruit

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_Cooldude_

Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update

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LordKram

damn this is a good one \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

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_Cooldude_

Interesting story, looking forward to future chapters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistHCZVcY

very good better than the original, but the author dropped the novel for no reason, his new one is cool but he could pay attention to that one too, well that's my opinion. (if you start a novel you have to finish it)

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ObamaUchiha

half the comments are people who are just here from harem. i didnt even read it because he changed it to a harem (filler)(filler)(filler)(filler)(filler)(filler)(filler)(filler)

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FAP_Master_

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.HareHarem.Harem.Harem.m.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.HareHarem.Harem.Harem.m.Harem.

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Nafsu_geass28

Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

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