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This is a beautiful story of how a female character can overcome things in life and take care of her baby. Even though the guy ran out of her life and continue to live his life, she still moves forward.
I love how the author did not wast time in explaining every scenery and every person face. The love story of the chapter was in full display and the progression was very seamless.You should read this.
The plot is really good but I do not like the writting style. I recommend it for the plot but not for the writting stylt. I also don’t like how all the boy name are with a J. 😊
Okay, I enjoyed this novel. I was feeling a whole bunch of emotions both good and bad but i like it. I like the characters even though i wanna punch them in the face sometimes but I do like them. I always wanted to be mom but I’m not ready yet, but i do want a family so I’m happy she got her happy ending. I hope they will always be happy. Thanks author for creating this, much appreciation to you :)
being a mother is the most high paid job.its unconditional love and will do anything for the best for the children. their love story has a lots of twist & turns because of the early parenthood.the best part is a mother is always there the backbone in everything to put in order.john & amelia was bind to be together for their forever love.congrats author...👍
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Thank you for writing a great book! I found myself smiling and laughing while reading. Love how the story progressed to the happy ending! Loved it!
love this song for a long period in a baby like a baby and I have to go back from a year later the year of a baby who was in a baby and it would have gone
she ends up pregnant da doesn't jo whonthe dad is kfbjj ksbj so he is 6th in love but not the way 66inches is the only daughter I know and she doesn't know
Good book. But .. Writing part was literally confused and had so many writing mistakes and layout is also not very well written ... But the storyline is good if l say but oh god.... Even though it was last chapter i was reading i still hoping that you put that party night on how john and Amelia get laid but it was disappointing.... I just wanted to know that how it happened and how olivia know all about that but what can I say....
It was a relly good story and the details in it were amazing but there were a few spelling errors but other than that a grate story. 🙂😄🤰🤱🏻🤱🏻🤱🏻
Really great read. It moved pretty quickly and had a lot of twists. It was interesting to see how all the characters were connected to each other and the coincidences that occurred. Great job author 😊
Everything was amazing with 6 kids in the end and a lovely family overall but I’m mad Justin and Sophia dated and Amelia naked her daughter after Sophia too but Michael is a sweety
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Story idea about teenagers who suddenly have to be ***** due to being pregnant by accident and bear the responsibilities is good. Unfortunately writing skill is a bit especially the apostrophes, which cause reader (at least for me) not having smooth reading. The way of conveying the thinking of characters is sometimes confusing as well. Suggest writer to have someone proofread the story before publishing might help. Keep it up, author.
Omg I looooove this book, it has drama and romance all into one book, I like when it said, and then u saw john, ****. 🤣🤣🤣 Overall I've laughed so hard for some of the lines
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The story is good ... maybe a little confusing in middle.... characters are ok ok ... few loose ends .. rest of it is better... 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
The overall story is good but clarity in explaining the feelings to themselves and giving end card for all the characters are somewhat lacking. BUT It's worth reading once...!!!! Author could have explained clearly "how she got pregnant" incident bcoz none of them remembers it. It requires some light for the readers at least....!!!!
what an enjoyable read this one and a lovely story to read, wish to read more. Thank you for sharing and wish you a wonderful safe day to enjoy.
This is a beautiful story of how a female character can overcome things in life and take care of her baby. Even though the guy ran out of her life and continue to live his life, she still moves forward.
I love how the author did not wast time in explaining every scenery and every person face. The love story of the chapter was in full display and the progression was very seamless.You should read this.
The plot is really good but I do not like the writting style. I recommend it for the plot but not for the writting stylt. I also don’t like how all the boy name are with a J. 😊
Okay, I enjoyed this novel. I was feeling a whole bunch of emotions both good and bad but i like it. I like the characters even though i wanna punch them in the face sometimes but I do like them. I always wanted to be mom but I’m not ready yet, but i do want a family so I’m happy she got her happy ending. I hope they will always be happy. Thanks author for creating this, much appreciation to you :)
being a mother is the most high paid job.its unconditional love and will do anything for the best for the children. their love story has a lots of twist & turns because of the early parenthood.the best part is a mother is always there the backbone in everything to put in order.john & amelia was bind to be together for their forever love.congrats author...👍
It was a good it makes you wanna read it more and more Ensks dms smdmdmdndkbssekenekekdnrkendkendkdmekdndndndkdjsklsjsndjr t tnekemeknrdnjrbrbnrkendjdjenkwnendkrnrrnrkdnejdnjdjrnrjdj
Reveal Spoiler Thank you for writing a great book! I found myself smiling and laughing while reading. Love how the story progressed to the happy ending! Loved it!
love this song for a long period in a baby like a baby and I have to go back from a year later the year of a baby who was in a baby and it would have gone
she ends up pregnant da doesn't jo whonthe dad is kfbjj ksbj so he is 6th in love but not the way 66inches is the only daughter I know and she doesn't know
Good book. But .. Writing part was literally confused and had so many writing mistakes and layout is also not very well written ... But the storyline is good if l say but oh god.... Even though it was last chapter i was reading i still hoping that you put that party night on how john and Amelia get laid but it was disappointing.... I just wanted to know that how it happened and how olivia know all about that but what can I say....
It was a relly good story and the details in it were amazing but there were a few spelling errors but other than that a grate story. 🙂😄🤰🤱🏻🤱🏻🤱🏻
Really great read. It moved pretty quickly and had a lot of twists. It was interesting to see how all the characters were connected to each other and the coincidences that occurred. Great job author 😊
Everything was amazing with 6 kids in the end and a lovely family overall but I’m mad Justin and Sophia dated and Amelia naked her daughter after Sophia too but Michael is a sweety
Reveal Spoiler Story idea about teenagers who suddenly have to be ***** due to being pregnant by accident and bear the responsibilities is good. Unfortunately writing skill is a bit especially the apostrophes, which cause reader (at least for me) not having smooth reading. The way of conveying the thinking of characters is sometimes confusing as well. Suggest writer to have someone proofread the story before publishing might help. Keep it up, author.
Omg I looooove this book, it has drama and romance all into one book, I like when it said, and then u saw john, ****. 🤣🤣🤣 Overall I've laughed so hard for some of the lines
Reveal Spoiler The story is good ... maybe a little confusing in middle.... characters are ok ok ... few loose ends .. rest of it is better... 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
The overall story is good but clarity in explaining the feelings to themselves and giving end card for all the characters are somewhat lacking. BUT It's worth reading once...!!!! Author could have explained clearly "how she got pregnant" incident bcoz none of them remembers it. It requires some light for the readers at least....!!!!
what an enjoyable read this one and a lovely story to read, wish to read more. Thank you for sharing and wish you a wonderful safe day to enjoy.