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I am enjoying the story so far. The characters are interesting, and the parallel plotline to that of Ash's should be fun. Also, I can't say no to the words Pokemon Yuri Harem. Only shame is the slow upload schedule, but our dear author needs rest in order to release more amazing content so I understand.
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Too much monolog from the MC. Almost half of the content from a lot of chapters is technology stuff, which wouldn´t be that bad if this wasn´t supposed to be a Pokemon fanfic instead of a sci-fi novel. Even the few battles that occurred had ended in a weird and kind of boring way because the MC used overthink scientific base strategies or the direct use of the MC octomechanic arms. I'm not gonna give a lower review, mainly because I believe there is room to improve and maybe there is the right audience for this, it just happens to be I´m not that audience.
I am enjoying the story so far. The characters are interesting, and the parallel plotline to that of Ash's should be fun. Also, I can't say no to the words Pokemon Yuri Harem. Only shame is the slow upload schedule, but our dear author needs rest in order to release more amazing content so I understand.
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Too much monolog from the MC. Almost half of the content from a lot of chapters is technology stuff, which wouldn´t be that bad if this wasn´t supposed to be a Pokemon fanfic instead of a sci-fi novel. Even the few battles that occurred had ended in a weird and kind of boring way because the MC used overthink scientific base strategies or the direct use of the MC octomechanic arms. I'm not gonna give a lower review, mainly because I believe there is room to improve and maybe there is the right audience for this, it just happens to be I´m not that audience.