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Write a reviewA very unique idea and well written for the most part but those summoned players are just out right annoying, it's hard for me to enjoy the book like this.. 😭
Reveal SpoilerPretty good story so far, it has potential. I would like you to show the growth of the players mentally; maybe create some arcs where they all do their own thing? Also, I suggest brushing up the title to get more views
A very unique idea and well written for the most part but those summoned players are just out right annoying, it's hard for me to enjoy the book like this.. 😭
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Pretty good story so far, it has potential. I would like you to show the growth of the players mentally; maybe create some arcs where they all do their own thing? Also, I suggest brushing up the title to get more views