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Read it when you are down 👇 Read it when you bored of all same things Read it when you are low on energy ... Read it when you feel all happiness are away from you... Read it when you want to make most of the day... Read it so you don't regret not reading it ever !
Am gonna be honest the only thing I liked when reading this is how well the writing is. Ok, Positive out of the way, the negatives when I started reading the story are. How we keep bouncing from person to person to Pokemon, to this scenery to this other scenery. Like I get this is Pokemon but the build up to explaining things is horrible. The only way we know something bad is gonna happen is because we jumped Pov until we got to big Daddy Arceus telling us were fked. There was no build up it was just a bunch of Pov of people talking until we got to Arceus. Legit when I was reading this I kept telling myself " When does the story start? " Quite frankly I don't think I am gonna keep reading this story either, It's very unsatisfactory.
Read it when you are down 👇 Read it when you bored of all same things Read it when you are low on energy ... Read it when you feel all happiness are away from you... Read it when you want to make most of the day... Read it so you don't regret not reading it ever !
Am gonna be honest the only thing I liked when reading this is how well the writing is. Ok, Positive out of the way, the negatives when I started reading the story are. How we keep bouncing from person to person to Pokemon, to this scenery to this other scenery. Like I get this is Pokemon but the build up to explaining things is horrible. The only way we know something bad is gonna happen is because we jumped Pov until we got to big Daddy Arceus telling us were fked. There was no build up it was just a bunch of Pov of people talking until we got to Arceus. Legit when I was reading this I kept telling myself " When does the story start? " Quite frankly I don't think I am gonna keep reading this story either, It's very unsatisfactory.