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kilgan

interesting, the environment and the world created and presented so far is very good. the questions of the gym, leagues, elite and champions are very creative, make the settings and wait for what will be presented cool. the rankings of pokemon trainers, makes it better to get a parameter in the world, and also cool that it starts to show that being a pokemon trainer has well configured personal and social advantages, it is not simply something that anyone or some like, simple as that. and from what has been presented so far, it shows something closer to "fictional reality", I also like mc and personality, mainly he is not stupid, I like that he thinks about staying strong and the "tag" shows that he will also show a little romance development (in my opinion with at least the basics done, it makes the environment more structured or "real"). I hope more chapters, and congratulations for the history created and that it comes more and more.

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Dark_Xyno

Hello dear readers. Your newbie author. As you can see it is my first proper story. It contains the first part of a much ambitious franchise. It will be an adventure story with all kind of tensions and experiences for MC. It is a harem story with various girls revolving around MC. There will be many fakemons andWorldbuilding is fundamentally different from the anime.

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_Cooldude_

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The_heart_lost

why is Sung-jin-woo on the cover and for the people that don't know who he is he is from "SOLO LEVELING" and you if you still don't know just search it up.

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ShenLung

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olympaforged

its a good idea. thr way the world works is also good but the biggest issue is have so far its character description. you don't take the time to describe what characters look like and that is concerning, especially for the important ones. if its difficult to do so then find a picture that describes your important characters, thr means to put them in the book is available on webnovel.

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Boltbit77

I have enjoyed the story so far and i like the new PokΓ©mon/ elements that some of them have now this is just a question have you every heard about delta PokΓ©mon they have the same PokΓ©mon look but with different elements so take charmander he is fire flying but with delta he is ghost dragon just something for you to thing about.

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Acsmaster007

so I will be just say about this casually....... Any for a new author , this is actually impressive....He is very ambitious I guess... creating a AU with AC, I have say so parts of the story may be a bit so more bit cringy I guess we could get over that....Any way, a good way in integrating the world, but some parts get out of order and confusing like when he was 14 and even If lived there for 2 years he didn't know about the things there.. ...well truth to be told I am not into these fakemons and other stuff so I guess I can't give a true experience....still I can say this as a true pokefan both anime and games I may not be able to enjoy it but I will still say that story is good........

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CoolFire12

Keep the Good Work, it's a fantastic story, Hoping to see more of the chapters that you've made.............................................

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FoolUniverse

Its intresting how you build the world and the power syterm of it with the pokemones and the fake ones i really like it , its a very intriguing story and im looking forward for more chapters and i really hope you dont drop it and keep the good work πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜

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Nafsu_geass28

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_Cooldude_

Very awesome and interesting pokemon world AU fanfic.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Here will help you get first 10 reviews with this extra account. Great story. keep up the good work

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cheat_fake_9020

Keep up the good work. Nice story direction and world building. Hope will update faster.

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dao_venom

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Lord_Eternity

Review created at chapter 6. Story seems to have great potential. It seems like a different worldbuilding than original anime. Hope you keep updating faster.

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Rex_Salamander

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kilgan

interesting, the environment and the world created and presented so far is very good. the questions of the gym, leagues, elite and champions are very creative, make the settings and wait for what will be presented cool. the rankings of pokemon trainers, makes it better to get a parameter in the world, and also cool that it starts to show that being a pokemon trainer has well configured personal and social advantages, it is not simply something that anyone or some like, simple as that. and from what has been presented so far, it shows something closer to "fictional reality", I also like mc and personality, mainly he is not stupid, I like that he thinks about staying strong and the "tag" shows that he will also show a little romance development (in my opinion with at least the basics done, it makes the environment more structured or "real"). I hope more chapters, and congratulations for the history created and that it comes more and more.

3yr
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Dark_Xyno

Hello dear readers. Your newbie author. As you can see it is my first proper story. It contains the first part of a much ambitious franchise. It will be an adventure story with all kind of tensions and experiences for MC. It is a harem story with various girls revolving around MC. There will be many fakemons andWorldbuilding is fundamentally different from the anime.

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_Cooldude_

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_Cooldude_

Update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update please update

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The_heart_lost

why is Sung-jin-woo on the cover and for the people that don't know who he is he is from "SOLO LEVELING" and you if you still don't know just search it up.

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ShenLung

I hope you're still alive author I need more of the story[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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olympaforged

its a good idea. thr way the world works is also good but the biggest issue is have so far its character description. you don't take the time to describe what characters look like and that is concerning, especially for the important ones. if its difficult to do so then find a picture that describes your important characters, thr means to put them in the book is available on webnovel.

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Boltbit77

I have enjoyed the story so far and i like the new PokΓ©mon/ elements that some of them have now this is just a question have you every heard about delta PokΓ©mon they have the same PokΓ©mon look but with different elements so take charmander he is fire flying but with delta he is ghost dragon just something for you to thing about.

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Acsmaster007

so I will be just say about this casually....... Any for a new author , this is actually impressive....He is very ambitious I guess... creating a AU with AC, I have say so parts of the story may be a bit so more bit cringy I guess we could get over that....Any way, a good way in integrating the world, but some parts get out of order and confusing like when he was 14 and even If lived there for 2 years he didn't know about the things there.. ...well truth to be told I am not into these fakemons and other stuff so I guess I can't give a true experience....still I can say this as a true pokefan both anime and games I may not be able to enjoy it but I will still say that story is good........

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CoolFire12

Keep the Good Work, it's a fantastic story, Hoping to see more of the chapters that you've made.............................................

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FoolUniverse

Its intresting how you build the world and the power syterm of it with the pokemones and the fake ones i really like it , its a very intriguing story and im looking forward for more chapters and i really hope you dont drop it and keep the good work πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜

3yr
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AllSeeingBedroom

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Nafsu_geass28

please spoiler Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem? Is this a huge harem?

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_Cooldude_

Very awesome and interesting pokemon world AU fanfic.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Here will help you get first 10 reviews with this extra account. Great story. keep up the good work

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cheat_fake_9020

Keep up the good work. Nice story direction and world building. Hope will update faster.

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dao_venom

review crated at chapter 3 it's very good gramar,plot[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update].

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Lord_Eternity

Review created at chapter 6. Story seems to have great potential. It seems like a different worldbuilding than original anime. Hope you keep updating faster.

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Rex_Salamander

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