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Love the setting. The fairly rapid growth towards romance is nice. Characters are varied enough and compelling. Underlying 'mystery' elements makes you want to know more. The action scenes that have happened are interesting and not hard to follow. The only real 'negative' for me was that it could use some editing TLC to fix up grammar, typos or very occasional repeat words. The actual story was plenty engaging enough to ignore that!
Woooooow c'est génial s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît continue a écrire j'adore cette histoire l'une de mes favoris 👍😘❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏💞🥺🥺🥺👍👍💓💓😍🤩🥰🥳
First story? I feel like you made more stories with the way you write! It’s great! Wonderful! Loving how the characters are and the flow of it so far!!!
Love the setting. The fairly rapid growth towards romance is nice. Characters are varied enough and compelling. Underlying 'mystery' elements makes you want to know more. The action scenes that have happened are interesting and not hard to follow. The only real 'negative' for me was that it could use some editing TLC to fix up grammar, typos or very occasional repeat words. The actual story was plenty engaging enough to ignore that!
Woooooow c'est génial s'il te plaît s'il te plaît s'il te plaît continue a écrire j'adore cette histoire l'une de mes favoris 👍😘❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏💞🥺🥺🥺👍👍💓💓😍🤩🥰🥳
First story? I feel like you made more stories with the way you write! It’s great! Wonderful! Loving how the characters are and the flow of it so far!!!
its soo good author-chan i hope you keep the good work