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Please Update author-san we NEEEEED more chapters and it was getting good too. PLEASE DONT DROP🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🌹
Fanfiction is kind of normal, there are only a few mistakes in the chapters, the chapters are updated, but the main character didn’t like it, there’s nothing new in him, as he was a white-beard and he remained, what’s new is the system and the memories of a random person who hasn’t achieved anything, that’s all , nothing has changed in history except in a few places
Is this a translation or an original fanfic? If it's a translation, could you please pass it to us in raw? By the way, the only flaw is the amount of chapters
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I hope he goes to fairy tail before canon when cast is still kids and just adopts most of fairy tail mages. Then seduce erza's mom. They are both old so its ok?
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Love the concept! And the fact that there are no 20 chapters of training or solving mc’s existential crisis before the main action let me enjoy the first 9 chalters to the fullest. I really hope your other fix won’t keep you from updating daily here
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Its a great idea for anyone to try and this dude is doing a great job check it out[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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please more chapters if yoiu can i read the first four and i really like whitebeard so yea and are you updating daily or weekly /////////////
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Please Update author-san we NEEEEED more chapters and it was getting good too. PLEASE DONT DROP🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽🌹
Fanfiction is kind of normal, there are only a few mistakes in the chapters, the chapters are updated, but the main character didn’t like it, there’s nothing new in him, as he was a white-beard and he remained, what’s new is the system and the memories of a random person who hasn’t achieved anything, that’s all , nothing has changed in history except in a few places
Is this a translation or an original fanfic? If it's a translation, could you please pass it to us in raw? By the way, the only flaw is the amount of chapters
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I hope he goes to fairy tail before canon when cast is still kids and just adopts most of fairy tail mages. Then seduce erza's mom. They are both old so its ok?
good good good good good goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood goodgood good
Love the concept! And the fact that there are no 20 chapters of training or solving mc’s existential crisis before the main action let me enjoy the first 9 chalters to the fullest. I really hope your other fix won’t keep you from updating daily here
woo esto parece genial jeje , estoy deseando ver quién es el interés amoroso del mc jejejej zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
It's Whitebeard. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Its a great idea for anyone to try and this dude is doing a great job check it out[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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please more chapters if yoiu can i read the first four and i really like whitebeard so yea and are you updating daily or weekly /////////////
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