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17 year old Marilyn had everything she could ever wish for:a beautiful family,a crazy best friend who had been with her since kindergarten and good social status.What more could a teenage girl ask for.
But her life takes a drastic turn when her mother dies and a mysterious boy comes to town a few weeks after her mother's death. She is yet to discover that the world isn't what it seems.
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A Pretty good read however, the closing paragraph of the second chapter leaves much to be desired for. Aten coming out over Marylin's mum's death at first encounter kinda takes the suspense away from the what will be or would have been storyline of Aten and Marylin
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It's a good read so far, like the story progression. Personally I like that Aten didn't waste time in approaching Marilyn over her mother's death cut off any unnecessary cliche and unwarranted suspense.