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[For Writing Prompt Contest #274 - Cultivation]
18 year old Phineas is a peaceful and pathetic man who grows up under the harsh conditions of poverty inside a religious village. Bullied most of his life, he reconciled in his mother who told him, "Don't blame them for their behavior, they only know what they are taught."
On one fateful day his village is attacked and subsequently destroyed by a rich noble for not paying taxes. The sole survivor of the ordeal is Phineas, who doesn't blame the noble for the destruction of his village, but rather blames the gods for teaching humans how to commit travesties.
He curses the god his village worshipped, and disrespected her. In retaliation, she appears before him. However upon laying eyes on her, his eyes melted. So helplessly he wondered helping anyone and everyone that he came across, all the while he marches with blind rage. With a single goal in mind, to commit the worst travesty to all the Gods.
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