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pretty interesting story so far. also is there romance with the vampire lady?? is that even possible? would be interesting to see them make some sort of unholy mockery of life with each other with the rot
If you ever decide to write a different web novel after this one how about a parody about Spawn from (image comics) and with all his demonic powers transported into a cultivation world and Spawn has to find a way back while looking at this world while the cultivators considered Spawn a anomaly mostly because of his powers
The story could've been something good, mostly because it has pretty original story ideas and not something that was more or less copy-pasted from other stories as we often see on this site. HOWEVER, the author completely mucked it up. Grammatical errors often happen in this novel. Sometimes, a paragraph is so beyond terribly written that I wonder what the hell I'm reading. author has a big problem with properly conveying what he wants to say in the text, so you end up stuck in the same paragraph wondering what connection it had to the paragraph before it because the story is all over the place, if that makes sense? and then there's the absolute biggest problem I have with this disappointment, the POV changes all the f***ing time, the protagonist, Loimos is basically a side character, while everyone that isn't him are the main characters. honestly, it's really disappointing how the author has so many other novels before this one, yet his skill as an author is still so amateurish.
Love this shit ,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................
There's a lot i like about this. The story is told well, however.... I am not a huge fan of the pov shifts. don't get me wrong, I like seeing other characters pov, but, it seems to happen every other chapter. I'm not a fan of the milo character, and it seems like he'll keep showing up from what I've read so far. I find the undead interactions and story parts to be splendid. if you like Milo's character you'll probably enjoy this, as its a very well written story. I just personally find myself skimming through the human chapters.
A good novel, unfortunately not for me. Although I like the idea but the writing style is quite unique which I personally don't like. Not that it is bad, it just isn't for me.
Raw Pwease..................................................................................................................................
man, simply wonderful, that's all, you managed to completely capture the essence of an undead monster, the quality of the writing is also great, and in the weekly chapters that I'm following, the world building has been great, simply a work of art
The true facet of time is an abomination born from fear, pain and suffering. It festers below the surface of the heart worse than any disease and like an all consuming void, it grasps and does not ever release it's victims ... it is death and in this novel, it blooms like spring in the garden of Hades.
Is this available anywhere for free? I looked on google but didn’t find the full version anywhere and it’s like I’d be paying to read it?
you have got be a kidding me female support character a lackeys u can do better then that anouther subordinate copy paste with bait villain tags and cringey dialogues filled with npc 5 star comments
The premise alone showcases the authors poetic style of making the story feel alive. So far I’ve been turned pages like a feverish addict. W novel, y’all should give it a read.
Why 5 out of 5? Well THIS book is extremely good, the quality just perfekt, the characters everything perfekt I would definitely recommend to read this!!!!!!
This is the best book I have ever read being both engaging and interesting. The fight scene are amazing so far and the writing is great so far. Although I don’t have the money to pay for further chapters I will continue to read this amazing story.
I liked the story in the beginning as there was mystery but the narrative jumps around too much, I want to know what happens with the undead not story’s from other peoples perspective constantly. There was a good idea but sadly the author was over ambitious with the writing. Start with the mc and develope around him, i don’t want to read 2-3 chapters where the mc is not even mentioned.
Oh i love this novel characters in this novel have common sense finally a good one
Nice writing, very pleasant to read. I feel like the story doesn’t really begin until chapter 3 after a lot of coughing and wheezing, but it’s very interesting once you get there.
Welcome, It's me, the author. I am Ready and here is the obligatory five-star review from me to myself, I can't judge my own book objectively, so I'll simply provide some basic information. -There is no actual romance of any kind involving the protagonist, if you think you see some, it is naught but humour. -The main character is a skeleton that goes by the name of Loimos, as far as sapient corpses go, he is meant to be an undead through and through, everything is for the sake of the dead. -The release rate is two chapters per day, and I intend on keeping it as such until I, or this book, meet our end. If you have any questions, go ahead and asks them below.
pretty interesting story so far. also is there romance with the vampire lady?? is that even possible? would be interesting to see them make some sort of unholy mockery of life with each other with the rot
If you ever decide to write a different web novel after this one how about a parody about Spawn from (image comics) and with all his demonic powers transported into a cultivation world and Spawn has to find a way back while looking at this world while the cultivators considered Spawn a anomaly mostly because of his powers
The story could've been something good, mostly because it has pretty original story ideas and not something that was more or less copy-pasted from other stories as we often see on this site. HOWEVER, the author completely mucked it up. Grammatical errors often happen in this novel. Sometimes, a paragraph is so beyond terribly written that I wonder what the hell I'm reading. author has a big problem with properly conveying what he wants to say in the text, so you end up stuck in the same paragraph wondering what connection it had to the paragraph before it because the story is all over the place, if that makes sense? and then there's the absolute biggest problem I have with this disappointment, the POV changes all the f***ing time, the protagonist, Loimos is basically a side character, while everyone that isn't him are the main characters. honestly, it's really disappointing how the author has so many other novels before this one, yet his skill as an author is still so amateurish.
Love this shit ,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................,.,.....,................................................................
There's a lot i like about this. The story is told well, however.... I am not a huge fan of the pov shifts. don't get me wrong, I like seeing other characters pov, but, it seems to happen every other chapter. I'm not a fan of the milo character, and it seems like he'll keep showing up from what I've read so far. I find the undead interactions and story parts to be splendid. if you like Milo's character you'll probably enjoy this, as its a very well written story. I just personally find myself skimming through the human chapters.
A good novel, unfortunately not for me. Although I like the idea but the writing style is quite unique which I personally don't like. Not that it is bad, it just isn't for me.
Raw Pwease..................................................................................................................................
man, simply wonderful, that's all, you managed to completely capture the essence of an undead monster, the quality of the writing is also great, and in the weekly chapters that I'm following, the world building has been great, simply a work of art
The true facet of time is an abomination born from fear, pain and suffering. It festers below the surface of the heart worse than any disease and like an all consuming void, it grasps and does not ever release it's victims ... it is death and in this novel, it blooms like spring in the garden of Hades.
Is this available anywhere for free? I looked on google but didn’t find the full version anywhere and it’s like I’d be paying to read it?
you have got be a kidding me female support character a lackeys u can do better then that anouther subordinate copy paste with bait villain tags and cringey dialogues filled with npc 5 star comments
The premise alone showcases the authors poetic style of making the story feel alive. So far I’ve been turned pages like a feverish addict. W novel, y’all should give it a read.
Why 5 out of 5? Well THIS book is extremely good, the quality just perfekt, the characters everything perfekt I would definitely recommend to read this!!!!!!
This is the best book I have ever read being both engaging and interesting. The fight scene are amazing so far and the writing is great so far. Although I don’t have the money to pay for further chapters I will continue to read this amazing story.
I liked the story in the beginning as there was mystery but the narrative jumps around too much, I want to know what happens with the undead not story’s from other peoples perspective constantly. There was a good idea but sadly the author was over ambitious with the writing. Start with the mc and develope around him, i don’t want to read 2-3 chapters where the mc is not even mentioned.
Oh i love this novel characters in this novel have common sense finally a good one
Nice writing, very pleasant to read. I feel like the story doesn’t really begin until chapter 3 after a lot of coughing and wheezing, but it’s very interesting once you get there.
Welcome, It's me, the author. I am Ready and here is the obligatory five-star review from me to myself, I can't judge my own book objectively, so I'll simply provide some basic information. -There is no actual romance of any kind involving the protagonist, if you think you see some, it is naught but humour. -The main character is a skeleton that goes by the name of Loimos, as far as sapient corpses go, he is meant to be an undead through and through, everything is for the sake of the dead. -The release rate is two chapters per day, and I intend on keeping it as such until I, or this book, meet our end. If you have any questions, go ahead and asks them below.