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62.5% Pain of the Fallen (Undertale NEUTRAL ROUTE AU) / Chapter 5: Snow and skeletons

Chapter 5: Snow and skeletons

________Frisk Pov_________

I walked through the door and was met with a rush of cold air I covered my face as I heard the door slam from behind me.

Frisk-"so a ruined city to a snowy forest.....Yep this is still under a mountain"

I started walking down a really well cleared path there was something a eerie silence to the place which wasn't giving a pleasant feeling So I took out the faded ribbon I neglected to wear and tied it into a bow in my hair.

*your defense is raised*

I flinched slightly hearing their voice in such a quiet place but I kept going stepping over a large branch. Just when I was getting a little calm I heard loud snapping I jumped and looked back seeing the branch completely snapped in half so I started running all the way to a bridge where I stopped to catch my breath but I started hearing footsteps.

______3rd person _______

Frisk stayed where they were as they heard the sound get closer and closer the the steps fell silent but it was like Frisk could feel the person behind them.

????-"Hey... Don't you know how to greet a new pal?.....turn around and shake my hand"

Frisk turned around and gripped the persons hand as the sound of a fart ringed out Frisk instantly knew what just happened.

Sans-"hehe the old whoopy cushion in the hand trick...Hey kid I'm sans and.....uh kid?"

Frisk was still holding his hand and pretty tightly at that.

Frisk-".....usually I'm a big fan of jokes.....however I didn't like it.....this time"

They went to punch them in the face but Sans teleported to their side.

Sans-"Woah kid relax I'm sorry alright.....maybe that was a little too far for yah.....but yah almost knocked my head off their"

Frisk rolled their eyes but they closed them and took a deep breath.

Frisk-"Right.....ok Sans I forgive you I hope fake outs aren't your only jokes"

Sans-"Heh trust me Kid I got plenty of Funny Bones"

He winked as drums played from nowhere Frisk smiled a little.

Frisk-"Ok maybe you are funny"

Sans-"see kid told yah now maybe we should have a real handshake"

Frisk-"Right sorry about that"

Frisk and Sans shook hands.

Sans-"so your a human right,I'm technically supposed to be capturing you but I kinda don't feel like doing all that"

Frisk-"Oh really what are you apart of something important?"

Sans shrugged.

Sans-"Kinda I'm a sentry on patrol to capture humans my brother Papyrus is kinda a human capturing fanatic but trust me he's harmless....Oh wait I think I see him follow me"

Sans started rushing across the bridge as Frisk followed him he pointed to a lamp.

Sans-"quick behind that conveniently shaped lamp"

Frisk went behind the lamp just as Papyrus arrived.

Papyrus-"THERE YOU ARE BROTHER I THOUGHT YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE WATCHING FOR A HUMAN"

Sans-"I was but then I saw this lamp, and it kinda looked human to me"

Papyrus-"I'M NOT INTERESTED IN A STUPID LAMP ONCE CAPTURE A HUMAN I'LL BE SO POPULAR SO POPULAR IN FACT UNDYNE WILL DEFININTLY MAKE ME AN OFFICIAL ROYAL GUARD"

Sans-"sounds cool but who knows this lamp could be enLIGHTening"

Papyrus eyes widen as he frowned.

Papyrus-"NEVERMIND THAT STUPID LAMP HAVE YOU AT LEAST WORKED ON YOUR PUZZLES?"

Sans-"sorta but then I stop cause you could handle it bro I Cross my Bones"

Papyrus-"WELL I'M DEEPLY FLATTERED BROTHER I'LL BE OFF TO MAKE SOMETHING NO HUMAN CAN POSSIBLY PASS NEHHEHEHE!"

Papyrus sprinted away his gleeful laugh growing more distant.

_________Frisk POV________

"He's a very enthusiast weirdo"I said to myself "Yeah isn't he great"I jumped hearing Sans so close being right beside me."woah uh is this a habit?"         I asked which the lazybones shrugged "heh yeah I almost got speared by the head royal though you were the only one who had the intent that's kinda bad kid"He said but I raised an eyebrow"well maybe you should look at things in a different angle" I said before walking from behind the lamp But I felt a grip on my shoulder and looked back at Sans who looked down "Hey kId one more thing...." I winced slightly feeling his grip as he looked up with his empty sockets "If you kill the wrong people you'll have more problems that you won't be able to just fight through" He said as  I felt more pain that i was certain wasn't just physical as he disappeared that pain also faded.

*You felt your sins crawling on your back but they disappeared as quickly as they came*

I walked down the path and saw a save point and I grabbed it.

*the area feels colder than before ,your filled with Determination*

I let go closed my eyes and took a deep breath"I don't think I can deal with any more warning or threats....though I think that bonehead has some point"I sighed before walking away but I immediately encounter a dorky monster.

*You encounter Snowdrake*

Snowdrake:"hey what do you get with an ice and stick? An Ice Sickle"

Frisk:"....um.....riight"

*Snowdrake sweatdrops but tries another*

Snowdrake:"well what do you get with a ball and snow? Snowballs!"

Frisk-"....haha wow that's so funny"

*Snowdrake smiled fooled by your clearly fake laugh somehow*

I spared Snowdrake and walked off and saw a box I looked inside seeing some gloves I put them on feeling stronger "wow these aren't too bad they fit...perfectly....a little too.....oh" I stared at the gloves knowing that these were worn by another kid like me and clenched my fist "I don't know what the king is like but.....it'll be hard not to kill him once I get to wherever he is" I tightened the gloves before walking once again but then another monster showed up with a ice cone on their head and not having the patients I punched it and ran away as I got to a more straight path.I saw Sans and his brother in the distance, so I pat my cheeks and relaxed to my normal expression as Papyrus looked my way.

Papyrus:"SANS IS THAT A HUMAN!?"


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