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I went into this thinking it to be a carbon copy of yellowness and i wont lie it was for the beginning but it quickly branched off and avoided some of the things i disliked about yellowness. I was a bit worried about the MC ending up as a tag along side character but that has been avoided which is great aside from that the writing quality is great, stability is good and the characters are well described. Its overlord so its not hard to get a 5 for world background, just up to research which seems good in this.
I really wasn't expecting this to be much of a read, just a time killer, but I'm glad I was wrong. Instead of just making a male citrinitas, you took a turn from yellowness and truly made your own story. As far as citrinitas is concerned, I'm not a big fan of characters that always make women swoon, but I can look past that because the Mc doesn't seem to care about most of the women that are after him. Seeing the moments between citrinitas and demiurge never fail to make me laugh, as well as aiz trying to act cool in front pf citrinitas. Overall, this story is a good read, and I can't wait to read more.
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This story is amazing! I’ve enjoyed reading every single word. I hope you continue writing and I can’t wait for the chapter. —————————————————
I read this story a couple of times and it never gets old to trave with the protagonist and his travels, but I was wondering when the author plan on continuing the story as it's almost the end of the year and nothing has been added. I can't have the story left on a cliffhanger
(Ch15) I’m dropping here for the sole reason of everytime I read the “romance” it just gets me frustrated. The mc has two main romance options but he has made it clear he doesn’t like either of them. But what does he do? Nothing. he constantly leads them on not giving them an answer and just teleports away everytime he’s faced with a difficult question. that’s not to even mention they both aren’t likable characters at all. They are constantly annoying and frustrating to read. The story would have more fun to read if both characters had nothing to do with the mc. Im not saying the mc should be a sigma male that doesn’t talk to anyone and acts edgy constantly, but just maby surround him with characters that actually have decent personalities and are likable. Besides that, the mc is likable and the story seems to be pretty solid with good world building and alright action. I like the fact that while he’s pretty powerful he’s not basically god and acknowledges the fact that some people are better fighters than him.
Pretty good, first few chapters seems basically a copy of Yellowness. However it branched off pretty quickly from Yellowness, and went a fun path. I like how he gradually warms up to Esdeath and Shalltear.
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Siiiiiiiiiii, estaba esperando nuevos capítulos gracias autor!!!! .........................................................................,.,.................... .....
The characters mix well with the Tomb, making it seem like they're actually canon, with the new reactions being like the glaze on top of the cinnamon bun. Compared to a Walmart cinnamon bun, it is flaky and buttery with the taste of backstory, tastes mildly sweet with all the character interactions, a syrupy-yet-solid cinnamon spread of The Author's Twist, with the glaze being the reactions. All in all, this is a good read, among other good overlord fictions such as Overlord: Ghosthood which is like gourmet garlic-parmesan brioche bread, and Harbringers of Change which is like a bowl of deep-fried steak-seasoned quail.
an excellent novel about overlord, I want to admit that I had a strange feeling that at the same time I was pleased and upset that the novel ended so quickly
I gave 4 stars because it's a good story it's not perfect but I like the idea with the NPC. I also like that the main character is just like ainz clueless but all of the NPC's think he's smarter then them the most important thing are the constant updates there are not that many good overlord fanfics out there
One of my favorite Overlord FF, I stopped reading it a few months back but came back and finished it just now. So I decided to leave a review- The writing quality is very good in this novel, and what I love the most are the interactions between the MC and the other characters. The upload schedule is a little wack, but I don't mind it as I prefer the author take their time and not write worse than usual. The only real downside to this novel is the author's -ahem- HORRIBLE "fashion style" (If you can even call it that), otherwise it's a surprisingly light read (most of the time).
3.0 stars, 5 stars in writing quality and stability of updates but it doesn't deserve anything above a 1 star in story development or character design. 3 stars in world background because the author didn't do a bad job at that. It's not about the character being a wimp, I'm sure the author has some juicy character development in mind for later and I'm willing to wait for that, but just the sheer irrationality of his fears and decisions and how they're still made to look logical.
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I like this. Wait, I need to say something more to post this review. I don't really what to say... It's a well writen Fan-Fic of overlord. The plot is overlordy and yea...
I don't care what people say, I really enjoyed this story. ....................................................................................................................................
I have high hopes for this story. Although my review is 4.8 it's quite fair because it takes a while to update but I like the Writing Quality very much I have an extention to read the text for me but I also read it and the grammar it's also all correct with the spellings and from what I can see the Stability of Updates is also good so in the time to come I will look forward to it it's just that I want to see if you will not drop this story and actually finish this amazing story so I gave it 4 and the Story Development is also good and not doing anything dumb for me the design is similar to a lot of stories that I like no offense a very good main character I just hope he won't be stupid to just let some enemies go without gaining something in return or just kill all enimies it may sound bad but it can also backfire in the long run so for my the Character Design is good now the World Background it's one of the best interms of stories I've read so World Background is also amazing. Overall a great story I just hope the author won't drop this story and although I'm not rich I have multiple accounts for daily power stones I will try my best to support you in terms of Power Status.
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I absolutely LOVE this fan-fic and I wish for more authors to develop this concept. I love the overlord series ( I’m currently watching season 4 and I’m loving it) and seeing more fan-fic about this series fills me with so much happiness and seeing the author making the MC fitting so well within Nazarick makes me love this so much more. I just wish for the MC to interact with the floor guardians besides Shalltear and Esdeath and with Ainz. (Esdeath best girl BTW)
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Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I'm just saying it now, even if there are problems that should lower the amount of stars, I don't see them to the point of it being important. so I will just put full marks so I can give you five stars. That is how much I enjoy this story. I have read quite a few overlord fanfiction, yet 90% of them are so similar that it kinda gets boring and repetitive. Yours actually put a spin on it that made me really enjoy it, and look forward to seeing more. Plus you are starting off by having the plot play out like it should, by actually thinking of ways to further it with less complications, while focusing on the MC. And you are doing it by world building early on. Plus you are adding originality to it, by including the butterfly effect in small ways. Then you add on that the MC is changing things by doing what he is doing, in small doses and at appropriate times. That way you can introduce these things into the story, without overwhelming the readers with all the possible dangers that could happen. This way we can enjoy the small things the story brings, instead of being fixated on the major threat. Plus this way we can also enjoy any humor that is there, instead of screaming that the mc should be more worried, focused, blah blah blah etc etc. Thank you.
honest to God 5 stars I can't complain about a single chapter here. normally I don't comment on books I find on here, but this is something else everything is thought out perfectly. normally I would question your mentality for thinking up such scenes but, it all fits to well and done to well for me to even care
I absolutely love this story so far! The writing Qulaity is peak and the Story as well. Please dont drop this, I've seen so many Overlord fanfics where the author suddenly decided that it wasn't worth his time anymore. If you keep writing chapters then you will get all the stones I get. Since you scrolled so far, heres a meme
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I found this story interesting and fun to read . I Found it funny when he was trappe doing manua labor for 2 chapters and the conversations the guild members had were insightful into the world outside the world good job.🍆
A shameless 4 Star review for myself because why not. The reason why I didn't give myself 5 Stars is that let's get real here. My fanfic isn't perfect. There are bound to be plot holes in my character and story because this is my first attempt at a proper piece of writing. Though as of writing, there are only 7 chapters, I hope you can provide me proper and helpful feedback about anything. I can only improve my writing if I have the proper advice. (Please don't be too harsh I'm only a freshman in High School) The story is inspired by MidasMan, the author of 'Yellowness' on fanfiction.net. I got permission to borrow some elements of the story but that's it. The story will change completely in a few chapters :)
I went into this thinking it to be a carbon copy of yellowness and i wont lie it was for the beginning but it quickly branched off and avoided some of the things i disliked about yellowness. I was a bit worried about the MC ending up as a tag along side character but that has been avoided which is great aside from that the writing quality is great, stability is good and the characters are well described. Its overlord so its not hard to get a 5 for world background, just up to research which seems good in this.
I really wasn't expecting this to be much of a read, just a time killer, but I'm glad I was wrong. Instead of just making a male citrinitas, you took a turn from yellowness and truly made your own story. As far as citrinitas is concerned, I'm not a big fan of characters that always make women swoon, but I can look past that because the Mc doesn't seem to care about most of the women that are after him. Seeing the moments between citrinitas and demiurge never fail to make me laugh, as well as aiz trying to act cool in front pf citrinitas. Overall, this story is a good read, and I can't wait to read more.
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This story is amazing! I’ve enjoyed reading every single word. I hope you continue writing and I can’t wait for the chapter. —————————————————
I read this story a couple of times and it never gets old to trave with the protagonist and his travels, but I was wondering when the author plan on continuing the story as it's almost the end of the year and nothing has been added. I can't have the story left on a cliffhanger
(Ch15) I’m dropping here for the sole reason of everytime I read the “romance” it just gets me frustrated. The mc has two main romance options but he has made it clear he doesn’t like either of them. But what does he do? Nothing. he constantly leads them on not giving them an answer and just teleports away everytime he’s faced with a difficult question. that’s not to even mention they both aren’t likable characters at all. They are constantly annoying and frustrating to read. The story would have more fun to read if both characters had nothing to do with the mc. Im not saying the mc should be a sigma male that doesn’t talk to anyone and acts edgy constantly, but just maby surround him with characters that actually have decent personalities and are likable. Besides that, the mc is likable and the story seems to be pretty solid with good world building and alright action. I like the fact that while he’s pretty powerful he’s not basically god and acknowledges the fact that some people are better fighters than him.
Pretty good, first few chapters seems basically a copy of Yellowness. However it branched off pretty quickly from Yellowness, and went a fun path. I like how he gradually warms up to Esdeath and Shalltear.
new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter new chapter
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Siiiiiiiiiii, estaba esperando nuevos capítulos gracias autor!!!! .........................................................................,.,.................... .....
The characters mix well with the Tomb, making it seem like they're actually canon, with the new reactions being like the glaze on top of the cinnamon bun. Compared to a Walmart cinnamon bun, it is flaky and buttery with the taste of backstory, tastes mildly sweet with all the character interactions, a syrupy-yet-solid cinnamon spread of The Author's Twist, with the glaze being the reactions. All in all, this is a good read, among other good overlord fictions such as Overlord: Ghosthood which is like gourmet garlic-parmesan brioche bread, and Harbringers of Change which is like a bowl of deep-fried steak-seasoned quail.
an excellent novel about overlord, I want to admit that I had a strange feeling that at the same time I was pleased and upset that the novel ended so quickly
I gave 4 stars because it's a good story it's not perfect but I like the idea with the NPC. I also like that the main character is just like ainz clueless but all of the NPC's think he's smarter then them the most important thing are the constant updates there are not that many good overlord fanfics out there
One of my favorite Overlord FF, I stopped reading it a few months back but came back and finished it just now. So I decided to leave a review- The writing quality is very good in this novel, and what I love the most are the interactions between the MC and the other characters. The upload schedule is a little wack, but I don't mind it as I prefer the author take their time and not write worse than usual. The only real downside to this novel is the author's -ahem- HORRIBLE "fashion style" (If you can even call it that), otherwise it's a surprisingly light read (most of the time).
3.0 stars, 5 stars in writing quality and stability of updates but it doesn't deserve anything above a 1 star in story development or character design. 3 stars in world background because the author didn't do a bad job at that. It's not about the character being a wimp, I'm sure the author has some juicy character development in mind for later and I'm willing to wait for that, but just the sheer irrationality of his fears and decisions and how they're still made to look logical.
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I like this. Wait, I need to say something more to post this review. I don't really what to say... It's a well writen Fan-Fic of overlord. The plot is overlordy and yea...
I don't care what people say, I really enjoyed this story. ....................................................................................................................................
I have high hopes for this story. Although my review is 4.8 it's quite fair because it takes a while to update but I like the Writing Quality very much I have an extention to read the text for me but I also read it and the grammar it's also all correct with the spellings and from what I can see the Stability of Updates is also good so in the time to come I will look forward to it it's just that I want to see if you will not drop this story and actually finish this amazing story so I gave it 4 and the Story Development is also good and not doing anything dumb for me the design is similar to a lot of stories that I like no offense a very good main character I just hope he won't be stupid to just let some enemies go without gaining something in return or just kill all enimies it may sound bad but it can also backfire in the long run so for my the Character Design is good now the World Background it's one of the best interms of stories I've read so World Background is also amazing. Overall a great story I just hope the author won't drop this story and although I'm not rich I have multiple accounts for daily power stones I will try my best to support you in terms of Power Status.
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I absolutely LOVE this fan-fic and I wish for more authors to develop this concept. I love the overlord series ( I’m currently watching season 4 and I’m loving it) and seeing more fan-fic about this series fills me with so much happiness and seeing the author making the MC fitting so well within Nazarick makes me love this so much more. I just wish for the MC to interact with the floor guardians besides Shalltear and Esdeath and with Ainz. (Esdeath best girl BTW)
Reveal Spoiler Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I'm just saying it now, even if there are problems that should lower the amount of stars, I don't see them to the point of it being important. so I will just put full marks so I can give you five stars. That is how much I enjoy this story. I have read quite a few overlord fanfiction, yet 90% of them are so similar that it kinda gets boring and repetitive. Yours actually put a spin on it that made me really enjoy it, and look forward to seeing more. Plus you are starting off by having the plot play out like it should, by actually thinking of ways to further it with less complications, while focusing on the MC. And you are doing it by world building early on. Plus you are adding originality to it, by including the butterfly effect in small ways. Then you add on that the MC is changing things by doing what he is doing, in small doses and at appropriate times. That way you can introduce these things into the story, without overwhelming the readers with all the possible dangers that could happen. This way we can enjoy the small things the story brings, instead of being fixated on the major threat. Plus this way we can also enjoy any humor that is there, instead of screaming that the mc should be more worried, focused, blah blah blah etc etc. Thank you.
honest to God 5 stars I can't complain about a single chapter here. normally I don't comment on books I find on here, but this is something else everything is thought out perfectly. normally I would question your mentality for thinking up such scenes but, it all fits to well and done to well for me to even care
I absolutely love this story so far! The writing Qulaity is peak and the Story as well. Please dont drop this, I've seen so many Overlord fanfics where the author suddenly decided that it wasn't worth his time anymore. If you keep writing chapters then you will get all the stones I get. Since you scrolled so far, heres a meme
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I found this story interesting and fun to read . I Found it funny when he was trappe doing manua labor for 2 chapters and the conversations the guild members had were insightful into the world outside the world good job.🍆
A shameless 4 Star review for myself because why not. The reason why I didn't give myself 5 Stars is that let's get real here. My fanfic isn't perfect. There are bound to be plot holes in my character and story because this is my first attempt at a proper piece of writing. Though as of writing, there are only 7 chapters, I hope you can provide me proper and helpful feedback about anything. I can only improve my writing if I have the proper advice. (Please don't be too harsh I'm only a freshman in High School) The story is inspired by MidasMan, the author of 'Yellowness' on fanfiction.net. I got permission to borrow some elements of the story but that's it. The story will change completely in a few chapters :)