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My first attempt at writing something. Constructive cristiscm would be appreciated.
The story starts in Naruto, with a guy that 'reincarnated' in the Narutoverse as an Ōtsutsuki. He got 3 wishes and starts his journey though the multiverse towards becoming a true God.
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I love this 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
I like it, but mc leaving konoha after getting 3 basic jutsu and 1 pair of sharingan was... random. I'm not sure what to expect from mc. Mc needs short and clear goals (like quests). Right now this fanfic doesn't have a clear direction. Please fix that author, it will become a problem in the future chapters.
ვიცი რომ ცხოვრება მშვენიერია არ არის დაწერეთ რა ვნახე უკვე საფრანგეთში მოღვაწე იყო და არ გაფიკვირდეს არ არის სადაც ის ცხოვრობს თავის და სხვების ცხოვრება გადამარჩინო ანუ ეს რა თქმა არ უნდა იცოდე რა თქმა უნდა იყო და რა ვნახე რომ ცხოვრება შეჯიბრი
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I would like to see a sequel (01010101001010101010101010101010101010100101010101010100101010101010101010100101010101010101010101001101010100101)
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I like it, but mc leaving konoha after getting 3 basic jutsu and 1 pair of sharingan was... random. I'm not sure what to expect from mc. Mc needs short and clear goals (like quests). Right now this fanfic doesn't have a clear direction. Please fix that author, it will become a problem in the future chapters.